I don’t know whether Isabel or Morgan was my favorite character, but they were the best parts of this book!
[REVIEW]
*Trigger/content warnings in this book for fatphobia, body shaming, and slut shaming*
I read Sarah Dessen’s Just Listen back in 2020 and was blown away by the poignancy of the story. It was my first time reading a book by Sarah Dessen, and it made me even more excited to explore her other books. I chose Keeping the Moon next because sounded like a perfect summer read that I could breeze through in a couple of days.
While this wasn’t THE WORST book I read in 2021, I was still disappointed. Yes, it was a quick read, and it did give me the summery vibes I’d been hoping for. But when I finished the book, I had one thought replaying in my mind:
“Wait…that was it?”
MY THOUGHTS ON…
WHAT I LIKED:
•Let’s start with the positives. First, any book that includes a cat or dog always gets points from me. And if the cat or dog doesn’t die by the end, the book will ALWAYS get an extra star. What I’m saying is, I loved Cat Norman and I wanted more scenes of him. He deserved more page time.
•Colie’s first interaction with Isabel and Morgan’s first interaction was HILARIOUS! The scene immediately revealed how they were foils of each other, with Morgan being melodramatic and friendly, and Isabel being blunt and serious. I totally felt like I would’ve been Colie in that scene: unsure how to respond, and finding it odd how calm Isabel was as Morgan ranted.
•As I’ve mentioned before, Isabel and Morgan were my favorite characters. Morgan was my favorite very early on, with her kindness towards Colie and ability to make me laugh. And I felt terrible for her whenever her boyfriend treated her like trash. Morgan seriously deserved SO MUCH better than him.
Isabel, however, took a while for me to like. She was even my least favorite character for a while! She wasn’t the softest person when Colie first met her, and it was obvious that she didn’t like Colie for some reason. Even when she DID first start helping Colie, I didn’t always like her tough love.
But the more she and Colie warmed up to each other, the more I started to like Isabel. She never changed or softened, but I could tell she really did care about Morgan and Colie. She also had a lot of great advice, and was always there for emotional support when Morgan was having boyfriend problems.
•When it came to Isabel and Morgan’s friendship, I loved that they bickered and didn’t always agree on everything—but you tell that they still cared about each other and neither wouldn’t abandon the other when the going got tough. They constantly challenged each other, and balanced each other wonderfully throughout the story.
Also, then singing and dancing to “I Will Survive” was FRIENDSHIP GOALS. I’ll never listen to “I Will Survive” the same way again!
MY CRITIQUES:
•Like I said before, I was left thinking “Wait…that’s it?” I think the biggest reason was that this book was so short. Like, it’s less than 250 pages. Not to say short books can’t have complete character arcs and plot lines. They totally can! However, with all of the subplots that were in this book, I felt like less than 250 pages wasn’t enough to wrap everything up. Subplots included:
•The romance. Y’all, I wasn’t a fan of the romance between Colie and Norman. For one, it developed WAY too late in the story. I think the first time Colie and Norman showed any romantic interest in each other was roughly eighty pages from the end. And while Norman was a nice guy, I felt he was also underdeveloped. I wished we’d gotten to learn more about him throughout the story, rather than those last eighty pages. And I especially wished they didn’t have a three year age game. Why did Colie have to be 15 and Norman have to be 18? That made me uneasy to read about.
•The book opened with Colie bitterly departing from her mother at the train station. When I read this scene, I immediately thought that Colie’s relationship with her mother was going to play a big part in the book. I thought time away from her mother would give Colie time to sit with the anger towards her mom that she’d been bottling up for years. This would lead the calls with her mom to grow more tense, and we’d eventually have a scene where Colie confronted her.
Unfortunately, Colie and her relationship with her mom ended up being brushed to the side. I get that they weren’t around each other, but…I still thought Colie’s mom would play a more active role in the book. Colie called her mom probably twice in the book, and she hardly talked about her mother with Isabel and Morgan. We didn’t even get to see them reunite at the end of the book, which I was REALLY disappointed about.
•Going off of that, I thought this was going to end with Colie returning home, and we’d see how reluctant she was to leave. But the ending we got was WAY too rushed and abrupt. This was literally the last fifty pages of the book: Morgan broke up with her boyfriend. She and Isabel weren’t getting along. Colie then went on a date with Norman and they kissed. Suddenly Isabel and Morgan were fine, and everyone was friends again. The end.
I honestly thought I was missing pages, or had skipped some time in my audiobook (I was both listening to the audiobook and reading a physical copy). So when I realized that, no, that was actually THE END, I was left SUPER unsatisfied. I couldn’t even figure out what I was rate this for while, because even though I liked this book, the ending really did throw me off. I wish there had been more closure. The book still could’ve had an open-ending, but with Colie getting on the train back home. Questions could’ve been swirling in her mind as she left: Would she ever come back? Would she and Norman try to do long distance? How would she deal with the bullies once school started? And would Morgan find someone new? These are questions I would’ve been okay with not being answered. Instead, all my questions were like, “Wait, that’s it? Colie and Norman are now a thing? Morgan’s suddenly fine? We’re not going to see Colie’s mother again???”
FINAL THOUGHTS:
While I didn’t love this as much as Just Listen, I still plan on reading more of Sarah Dessen’s books. I do recommend this is if you’re looking for a quick, summer read with awesome friendships!