First Novel is a complex but entertaining book which brings together some initially disparate plot lines before allowing then to separate into fuzziness at the end. The title itself is ironic, since it is the author’s seventh novel, and the book makes use of metafictional tools, blurring real fictional events with elements which may or may not be fictionally true.
At the start of the novel we encounter the main protagonist, Paul Kinder, an author and lecturer in creative writing, as he dissects and ultimately sweeps into the bin a Kindle. This is what he effectively teaches his students to do with real books; he dissects their writing without ever really knowing what works, just as he cannot understand how the Kindle operates when he breaks it open.
Kinder is obsessed with anc collects first novels and pours over the pages of the Guardian Writers' Rooms series looking for one in particular. He can smell something from a successful first novel – literally. Something he recognises but cannot dissect or define, whereas his own mysterious first and only novel lacks any odour.
Kinder has a strong and distinctive voice. He is analytical and methodical, a loner. Things are described directly and logically. He has an obsession interested in aircraft, and in sexual relationships with them or in proximity to them, and his relationships with others are awkward. There is a hint of Asperser’s in his approach to life, but also darker undercurrents. Three mannequins peer out of his house, a substitute for his family who have in some way been lost. Harold Shipman makes an appearance.
"Either I will I do A, or I will do B” he tells himself, and us, as if it does not really matter which, and the choice is a random one, without much in the way of reason or purpose, without emotional or moral significance.
The novel is told mainly from Kinder's perspective and in particular focuses on his relationships with two of his students, Helen And Grace, and a Stanger (Lewis) who he encounters at a party and who seems to be hiding a mysterious and dark family secret of his own. Helen and Grace are creative writing students who each in their own way seem attracted to Paul. In the case of Helen, there are clearly sexual undercurrents whereas with Grace the reasons for the attraction are less clear. Lewis, on the other hand, repels Paul, while at the same time something about his story draws Paul into a closer and closer connection with him.
Interspersed with the main narrative is a secondary third person story of a young airman, Ray, who has fled a terrible personal tragedy and taken refuge in an overseas posting where he is about to play a part in another horrible accident. It is not immediately clear where this narrative is coming from – is it historical flashback, or part of another story, perhaps one being written by one of Paul’s students?
All of these strands are brought together before unravelling again into a welter of possibilities. The plot is complex and elements of it are surprising; there is plenty to hold a reader’s attention and this is certainly a book which would benefit from a second or third reading. However, it is probably not a book for a casual reader. There is a lack of linearity and clarity around what is “real” and what is “unreal”, elements which are attractive on one level but which would be puzzling to many. First Novel is a challenging book, but one that deserves success and may appear on literary prize lists later this year.