“The books that the world calls immoral are books that show the world its own shame.” ― Oscar Wilde
If you're into the fluffier side of life, you have my blessing but will you please take the next exit. For the rest of you depraved pervs, enjoy your stay ;)
I have just finished reading this. A really short one, about 3 pages or so. Short yet capable of showing us the disturbing effect of father and son incest and the extend of damage it could cause on its victim.
The boy in this story is totally messed up and will never be able to move beyond this assault on his body and soul. He will forever be at the mercy of his supposed protector.
For once, I am unsure of how to rate a book. Cos, I don't hate it but I don't love it either. And it's not pushing any of my deviant happy buttons. So... I should remain neutral I guess.
It is a well written one imho.
FREE AT SMASHWORDS A taboo short story by Kol Anderson
I've read all the reviews and it's safe to say this is a taboo incest story. I was trying to find some hint from the start to finish that this is one of the kinds of sex the MC's have, role play and such but the ending just affirms that it isn't. It's full on Incest and the least pleasure to be had is that I don't call my father Dad or Daddy or I just couldn't see him for a whole week or a month or or... Little pleasure to be had. Little pleasure to be had indeed.
All in all, I just wanna ask WHY? WHY GOD WHY? WHY WOULD YOU WRITE THAT? (I know Imma sucker for reading it but let's just ignore that part.) See, I don't condemn taboo. People say it's taboo love but it isn't. It's just love. I remember an episode in CALL THE MIDWIFE where the nurse was shocked to see a pair of brother and sister sharing a bed and an incestuous relationship. But even the nuns accepted that for it was. A loving relationship since they met after many years and their love for each other just transformed into non-platonic. I get that. But Abuse. Sexual Abuse. Dude! That's a whole other story. You just don't up and write a story about sexual abuse (since the boy's been fucked since he was young) and just smile away.
I read in some reviews and people are like: Fucking hot. Yeah! That's the stuff. Some are even putting euphemisms that they masturbated through the whole story. I guess I get where they're coming from. It's hot to have a daddy kink. BUT IN A CONSENSUAL RELATIONSHIP.
A child is not of consent age. Not when he's not 16 or 18 in some states.
So you see I was too tuned to search for that one little hope that the child understands what he's been subjected to. We all know most domestic abuse (that too sexual) victims half the time don't understand that what they're going through is what it really isn't. It's abuse through and through. So I was hoping for some hope for that boy. I just couldn't find it. Maybe I should have just accepted the ugly truth that he's been fucked by his father at his father's whim. And he cries. But he doesn't know it. So WHY IN THE FUCK WOULD YOU WRITE A STORY LIKE THAT? Just because something similar has been written in M/F romance. (Stop being heteronormative or following some trend and make this genre a creative niche in itself.) OR If it's cool to write stuff, write taboo stories all you want. But atleast just give the readers a little hope that you understand the basic decorums or rules or anything about living in a society.
The author has written on his profile : “The books that the world calls immoral are books that show the world its own shame.” So what you're the Moral Police or something? So you think that a father abusing his son is going to be accepted as a social norm in a distant future and this what we call as immoral or depraved is not. What in the exact fuck are you implying here through this quote?
Should I write LOL or BANGS HEAD ON THE WALL here?
Well, that was about 9 yards of fucked up right there.
I liked that I hated it and hated that I liked it, so confused. Which is probably the point. Right? Right? Please tell me there is a point. And the end? Didn't that just about break my heart into a million pieces.
DIRTY HOT AND FUCKED UP. Wow. I wanna applaud Mr. Anderson for writing something like this.
This is not the first time I've read about incest. But the end was just...sad. There's a million things going in my head on how it ended that way, and most of it are not good.
This was sexy, dirty, nasty, and disturbing. And I fucking love it.
BTW, for those who like this stuff I wanna recommend something to you: It's a M/M Erotica Comic I found online, and this one is my favorites from his works.
Josman really likes this kind of stuff. His passion about incest translates in his works. Which made me like reading incest.
His dialogues are kinda cheesy and this is GRAPHIC so beware!
Jesus Fucking Christ. This is a free, VERY short read. It is also so wrong. This is just what the title implicates. Sam's Daddy is a terrible man. Sam is obviously conflicted and confused. There is no indication of how old he is, just that this has been going on for some time. This is incest and will push your boundaries. Seriously, at one point I thought that maybe this was not really Sam's daddy. Sadly, it is.
I would not recommend this to anyone who does not like reading dark erotica in the extreme. Why did I like it? I can't even tell you. I don't even know. This is written well. I got out of it what I think was intended. The painful confusion of Sammy. How horrible this would be for anyone to grow up this way, not knowing if this was right or wrong. The point is made, especially in Sammy's last paragraph. Broke my heart.
Not a story as such: a very sad incest scene PWP ficlet. Not one I'd recommend to my friends.
I'm hoping the the MC is actually an adult here, because he says "I won't see [Daddy] again until he . . . gets the chance to fuck me again," so they don't live together, but he also says the abuse started when he was "really young."
The fic is also open to a reading of being a role play between consenting adults, as in, the person will be there, but the character of 'Daddy' won't be seen again 'til next time.
I'd like to read it this way, because otherwise, not OK.
Everything is so wrong here! At the latest by the last sentence every visual sign of arousal has to be washed away. I wished I didn't come across this one.
Creepy crawly and almost frightening. Yet entirely too engrossing. Will convince myself I will not revisit just to make my moral compass stop spinning like a lunatic.
Dude! Sammy needs to get out more. A brief but arousingly-inflammatory piece capable of triggering a knee-jerk-physiological-reactive-thought-provoking event.
Kol Anderson has the exquisitely poetic mouth of a debauched and raunchy sailor.
How old is the son? And “daddy”? How it all began? Where’s the mother? Does anyone else know about the incest? This book is really short, but the author uses the right amount of angst to keep you asking questions even after the last page. I believe that if you have a tragic story to tell, it's more difficult to do it in 10 pages than in 100. To rate the book, I took into account that Kol Anderson was particularly successful in this regard.
Can't never pass up a freebie right? And then add in the factors that it's M/M taboo & naughty? We have a winner here! lol
I don't know what's with me and these incest books sometimes. Its so wrong. But its like a train wreck that you just can't turn away from! This was an extremely quick read. But yet it was very taboo, raw, and downright dirty. "I'm going to come inside you Sammy. I know you want me to. You want me to fill that hole with my cum don't you? Will you lick it off when I'm done Sammy? Will you put your little mouth on my dick and lick my cum off like a little slut?"
There's pretty much no storyline here since it goes by so quickly! Just a naughty night of a father having hot wild sex with his son. And I didn't see anything even saying "Step Son" either. Yes you heard me right! I'm giving it 5 stars just because it was a fun wild & gross ride.
Even pretending the MCs are not related and this being Daddy/boy kink it was unerotic and not really sexy for me. The potty language/vulgar language is always a firm turn-off for me anyway.
Looking at it as incest erotica it didn't work either. There was no true sense of connection, no sense of transgression, and the character's musings were those of a child prior to puberty rather than one with a fully developed sexuality.
This in combination with erotica is wrong on too many levels to be anything but terminally squicky for me.
Wow. Just...wow. Holy hot, forbidden, twisted, psychological mind fucked, sad, torturous, way too short, gripping little quickie.
I'm not totally sure how I feel about how I feel after reading this. :D
Except for learning the abuse started early on, I kept hoping for a twist at the end about them just having a Daddy kink thing going. Such was not to be though.
So yes, I wanted this to be longer, wanted to know more about this entire situation, even though I'm not entirely sure I could handle it.
Well, wasn’t that just a dirty, dirty tease. Dang it. Kol knows how to capture you at page one. Even when the “book” is Only a few pages long. I NEED MORE!!
Daddy is a short, quick read. With a wicked taboo theme. It takes you through Daddy visiting Sammy.
Sammy has been Anxiously awaiting his Daddy's arrival at night. Sammy has become just as dependent on his Daddy's visits as his Daddy's urge has been to go to him over the years.
Sammy needs the pain, the connection with his Daddy.
"...it always hurts but then, I get that strange feeling, the feeling I have been craving for, the feeling of him inside me, a part of me..."
Fuck. Um, wow. Three pages. That is some serious word power on Anderson. Far more effective at giving insight into the mind of an abused child than any textbook. Knocked me out. Fuck.
Seriously sad, seriously and shamefully arousing in a dark psychological fantasy way, but wow, seriously sad in reality. More, please.