DNF at 65%
I knew I was asking to be disappointed when I started to read this one and found out one of the MC's was only 20 years old. I don't read books with young MC's for exactly the reasons I DNFed this one. I would NEVER have even started to read it if the age of the MC was disclosed or at least given a hint to in the book's blurb, but it wasn't. Anyway, I was interested enough in the trope here to pick this one up. Even after I realized Ben's age, I still continued to read. I liked Kota well enough that I thought that would be enough for me to at least finish this one. But, nope.
My biggest issue with Ben as a character is that he was an immature hypocrite. He was only 20 years old. Kota treated him as such, which pissed Ben off because according to him he was a very mature and worldly 20 year old. So grown up and responsible. He demanded to be treated as such. So, Kota gives in and gives that brat what he's been begging for and what does the oh-so-wise-and-mature Ben do? Exactly what every cliched 20 year old character does. Soooooo at the 65% mark of the book, I decided to DNF, right after he pulls the cliche, typical too young MC move. I won't spoil it by telling you what it is, but if you read it, remember it happens around the 65% mark. I was over Ben. I was over this story. I was over everything. Up to that point I forgiven ridiculous plot points and holes, not so sexy love scenes, and Kota being a pompous jerk to Ben at first. But, after getting this far I was just done. I feel bad about it because I really like this author's book, "Scars" and was glad to see an appearance by one of those MC's. But, this one was just.....ugh. I don't have the words.
If you like your MC's very young and immature and flighty then this is the book for you. Not for me, I'm afraid. And even though I did enjoy "Scars", I haven't had any luck with this author's other works. So, I think this just isn't the author for me. I'm REALLY glad this one was a KU read.