>>DNF<<
I liked this at first.
Past tense, liked.
It was smooth sailing at first. The main character is obnoxiously angsty for her age, but we all love that, right? Tragic backstory, dwells on the past, is aloof and antisocial to the extreme. We love that don't we, Goodreads readers?
I don't like this book. It started with spelling and grammatical errors and later on bloomed into something I could not bring myself to finish. As someone fine with religion and how it helps people through life, it felt shoved down my throat. One of the main girlies, Joey, has deep seated trauma strongly associated with Christianity and religion. But as soon as she meets a sweet church-going girl, Faith, she's very well converted by first glance. I don't like this. It never addresses this trauma in a way that is really effective for Joey. She becomes out of character as time goes on.
I don't enjoy static characters either, but it would have been a more compelling story if Joey never changed.
As Joey changed, Faith stayed at a standstill. She never really falters and the cheeriness that is comparable to a carefree child in a college attending young adult becomes too much as the story goes on. Faith doesn't have much to see in Joey.
From the first few times they hand out meals, Joey goes out of character. Becoming empathetic and open to the old grouchy woman before her as if they were meant to be. I feel that would have been more interesting compared to how the story really went.
It could be nitpicky, but I don't enjoy the overall vibe of the story. It was sloppily written, reminding me more of a fanfiction than a novel. The characters aren't great, the plot isn't very compelling, and the religion overrides the LGBTQ+ representation. I would have rather gone to church myself than read this. And I'm all for having faith in a higher power.
In conclusion, this book isn't great. It's my opinion though. Comment on this your opinion too!