Oh my goodness, it took me 80 days to finish this. My apologies to the author, who graciously sent me an ebook ARC after I reached out to inquire about whether or not book 3 was ever going to happen. It's here at last! At the time, I was actually getting through ebooks pretty well (nap trapped by a baby, with only my phone to keep me occupied), but almost immediately after getting my hands on this ebook....my time/will to read ebooks dried up. Hence: 80 days. NOT the fault of the author or the book.
That said, this IS a longer book than the others in the series, and I'll be very interested to read the final iteration of this book. It definitely felt a tad drawn out, and I don't think that was only because I was reading this very slowly.
The part that I had the biggest issue with was the introduction of Buri, a kind of evil god figure (referred to as Loki at one point, which I think was a typo, but maybe in a revealing "Dwigt" type of way, iykyk) who was trying to infiltrate Neverland and do bad stuff. He actually WAS infiltrating, through a portal from another world, but was basically a frozen statue sloooowwwllly pushing his way into Neverland. This meant that everyone knew he was coming, and had the entire book to prepare for his arrival. Periodically characters would go and have a look to say, "Yup, more of his torso is through now. We better hustle!" Something about this whole concept felt...kinda silly. It reminded me of a PC game (though I can't remember which one) where you know that you're going to have to fight the final boss at the end of the game, and you can literally SEE him growing in size and menace in the background while you're busy defeating lesser minions. But you can't attempt to defeat him earlier when he's weaker; nope, gotta wait for the contrived moment when he's ripe for fighting.
Anyway, besides that, the rest of the book was decent enough. I could stand to hear about Hook's "forget-me-not" eyes or Peter Pan's green pickle smell a bit less, but I appreciate that the author left that love triangle undecided right up until the end (and without spending too much time inserting an actual romantic plot, but instead just lightly hinting).
Like I said, I would like to read the final version of this book to see if the plot was tightened up a bit more. I'll also have to reread it on paper, since the ebook format turned out to be such a drag for me. Maybe the story only felt like it stalled a bit because *I* stalled out for personal reasons.