Raelynn is new in town after her mother marries a much younger man. This man is the principal of the high school she attends and is a total creep. She meets Lawson at school, and he also has it rough at home as his mother is a drunk and they are struggling financially. The two fall in love and decide to run away together when Rae’s stepfather keeps threatening Rae and the two of them because he wants Rae for himself.
I enjoyed the first half of the book when the focus was on Law and Rae’s romance and them trying to figure out how to survive, but the second half was very disappointing. It just got more and more unbelievable until the equally unrealistic end. For me, things started going downhill when they were introduced to Hayden, the “guardian angel” around their age that they met on the streets with the face of a model and a heart of gold who happened to immediately care for Law and Rae and take them under his wing. Every character and situation from then on out was just too perfect and easy. Without going into too much detail, they were handed opportunities and money from honest and trustworthy people, the stepfather was dealt with off page while they were away so they could stop running, and they had a way too neatly wrapped up HEA that made no logical sense.
I love warm fuzzies as much as the next person, but if you’re going to write a story about runaways, then you need to give it some grit and make it believable. I’m not the type of reader who will just accept whatever is on page as long as it’s heartwarming. It needs to makes sense or it ruins the whole experience of reading the story (for me).
I also love relationship driven stories and tend to want to focus on the main characters. I don’t mind secondary characters as long as they are fleshed out and not just used for filler. It is a pet peeve of mine when the author starts adding secondary characters who become super important in the story but doesn’t flesh them out. I also appreciate diversity when it comes to characters. Hayden, however, seemed to only be created for that purpose. We were constantly reminded that he is gay, and he seemed to mostly be there just to hit on Hayden, and talk about men and sex. Surely there was more to this character than just his sexuality? Did he have a backstory or goals and dreams of his own outside of tagging along with Rae and Law?
I don’t mind secondary characters if they are interesting and don’t take away from the romance too much, but I didn’t love that the book went from a romance between Law and Rae, to a story about Law, Rae, and Hayden. All of a sudden within a chapter of meeting Hayden, Law was equally protective of him, and Law and Rae’s future and plans suddenly included him. Had he been a more integral part of the story to start then this would’ve been fine. But he’s the type of character who if you take him away it wouldn’t have made much of a difference to the plot. I want characters to have roots in the story, and this just didn’t work for me because as soon as he was added it seemed that the romance and chemistry between Law and Rae fizzled. Similarly, Rae and Law’s friend Tammy from high school seemed pointless as well. The book started with Tammy calling Rae a slut (because you know, girls have to be catty with each other), then all of a sudden they were best friends. Tammy wasn’t present for most of the book, but in the end she decides to pack up and move to be near Rae and Law and all their new friends? Again, seems like her only purpose was to add some drama and then fill the MCs social circle.
I have enjoyed other books by this author. I think she has some really interesting plots, so I’d give her another chance. But this book was a huge disappointment and totally unrealistic.