Not one of my favorite Lemire joints. As a matter of fact, this book seems very phoned in. I understand that it sometimes happens when you're as prolific as Lemire is, but it's no less disappointing to see. It sucks too, as it has some elements that I generally like such as Cold War paranoia, ominous sci-fi strangeness, and even a reference to my favorite album of all time, Dark Side of The Moon. What happened here?
Primordial is one of those books, like God Country, where I think this could have been fleshed out with a few more issues so that it could really shine. The character development feels rushed, there are some cool ideas that are brought up but don't get explored to their fullest potential. I have had some pacing issues with Lemire in the past, particularly in Descender, but he always made up for it with his attention to his characters. But with Primordial, it seems like we're seeing a skeleton of a story. Some cool ideas that Jeff came up with but he wasn't fully sure what to do with them. Even with God Country, despite my issues, there was an emotional core to that book which outweighed the pacing issues. Unfortunately, Lemire couldn't tap into his own emotional core when creating this story.
While I haven't read it, this book does feel like Lemire's riff on We3, with a similar focus on enhanced animals trying to find their way through an indifferent and sometimes cruel world. The art is even reminiscent of Frank Quitely's when the animals arrive on the ominous sci-fi weirdness. But again, Primordial is hobbled by rushed pacing, which makes emotional connection with these characters and their plights difficult. That's not to say this book is all bad though, the first part of this book with the mystery was fairly strong, with a great sense of mood and atmosphere that can only be provided by the great Andrea Sorrentino.
On that note, Sorrentino churns out some of the trippiest, mindbending work of his career. It's one of the rare Lemire joints where the art outpaces the story that's being told. But with this book, I am thinking that Sorrentino is Lemire's Quitely. Lemire has had many great artistic collaborators throughout his career, from Dustin Nguyen to Emi Lenox and Dean Ormston, but I think Sorrentino is the one who is made specifically for him, without being himself that is. Jeff can throw 10 of his craziest ideas at Sorrentino and he's always there, ready to meet him. His gothic, eerie, surreal tone perfectly compliments Lemire's artistic sensibilities and with Primordial, he might have just outdone himself.
While I won't have the temerity to tell Jeff how to do his job, I do think he could have done some good by giving this book some more thought and kicking it around some more. As I said before, this book feels somewhat unpolished, as if Lemire didn't really take the time to think things through and give this story the treatment it deserves. There are moments in here that should have emotional impact, but they don't and it's frustrating because I know that Lemire can do better than this and he has done better than this. I have heard some criticisms from fellow Lemire fans that there have been a few Lemire books in the past few years that have felt like this, and it worries me. I hope that this book isn't the beginning of a trend. I'd like to think that Lemire's best days are still ahead of him, rather than behind.
We all have our off days, I suppose, and Primordial is a demonstration of one of Lemire's. It's definitely one of his weaker works alongside something like The Quantum Age. Don't worry though Lemire...I still love you.