2 stars and 1 star for two erotic stories with good vampires and bad humans.
Both stories are about vampires who drink limited amounts of blood from humans so that the humans stay alive. The vampires bring sexual pleasure to their victims while drinking their blood.
2 stars for BITE ME AGAIN.
STORY BRIEF:
Daniel Ward is a 400 year old vampire living in New Mexico. He frequents bars to have sex with women and drink their blood. He is helpful to humans. He teaches a guy how to be successful with women by treating them with respect, courtesy and patience. He takes food to kids living on the street. He meets Meg who intrigues him. He sees her a few times in the bars, tries to connect with her and follow her, but she evades him.
REVIEWER’S OPINION:
The relationship with Meg was interesting. I liked how he and Meg worked together in the end, fighting a bad guy. I was not happy with the story about Wolf and why he wanted revenge. It was too vague. I needed to know more. There were too many unanswered questions. There were a lot of sex scenes, but they were missing emotional development. I found myself skimming through them. This story had a more interesting plot than Once Bitten, but it was not good enough to recommend the book. Minor editing point: The main character is Daniel Ward, but the back cover of the book erroneously says his name is Thomas Ward.
DATA:
Story length: 162 pages. Swearing language: strong. Sexual language: strong/erotic with rear door activity. Number of sex scenes: 11. Length of sex scenes: 1.9 to 7.1 pages. Total number of sex scene pages: 43. Setting: current day Santa Fe, New Mexico. Copyright: 2008. Genre: erotic paranormal romance.
1 star for ONCE BITTEN.
STORY BRIEF:
Jake is a vampire. He has sex with many different women as he drinks their blood. He sees Athena and is immediately drawn to her scent. He realizes he wants her permanently as his mate. There is a group of humans successfully killing vampires. Jake and other vampires are trying to find them and stop them.
REVIEWER’S OPINION:
The relationship between Jake and Athena happens too quickly and easily. There was no developing of a relationship. I wasn’t thrilled to see Jake continuing to have sex with other women after he and Athena were together. In the conflict with the vampire hunters I was annoyed with two stupid decisions, one by Jake and another by Athena. Also, I was not happy with another scene where Jake meets with Daniel. The author left that scene without answering some questions as to how Jake’s meeting with Daniel was going to prevent Daniel from contacting Jake’s enemies. In general, too many plot points did not work for me. The sex scenes were long and explicit, including group sex. But for some reason, I found them boring. Maybe it was due to lack of emotion or passion. I’m not sure. There was one thing I liked that I hadn’t seen elsewhere. The humans wore battery-operated Kevlar-type vests to conceal the noise of their hearts beating. Vampires listened for heartbeats when hunting humans, so this was valuable to the humans.
DATA:
Story length: 191 pages. Swearing language: moderate. Sexual language: strong/erotic with rear door activity. Number of sex scenes: 16. Length of sex scenes: 0.3 to 8 pages. Total number of sex scene pages: 51. Setting: current day New Mexico. Copyright: 2008. Genre: erotic paranormal romance.