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"A dream, after all, needn't be fueled by particulars, only by desire." So notes main character, Gracie Antes, in CRESTMONT, a historical fiction gem set in the 1920s. Determined to take control of her life, sheltered Gracie Antes leaves her unhappy home in 1925 to pursue her dream of a singing career. On her way to the big city, she accepts a job as a housemaid at the bustling Crestmont Inn. Once there, Gracie finds a life-changing encounter with opera singer Rosa Ponselle, family she never imagined could be hers, and a man with a mysterious past. Relive the 1920s with a colorful cast of characters. Discover with Gracie that sometimes we must trade loss for happiness. Set in Eagles Mere, Pennsylvania, the story is interwoven with details about the town, the rich history of The Crestmont Inn, and the family who passed ownership from one generation to the next. Many attempts have been made to explain how the mountaintop lake nestled in this tiny town came to be. Crestmont gives a new twist to an old Native American legend, setting the tone of grace around which the story is built. Let the period of the Roaring Twenties spark your interest with its unique social mores, fashion, jazz, and yes, a little bootlegging thrown in for pizzazz.
340 pages, Paperback
First published April 1, 2010
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Holly Weiss
6 books124 followersHolly Weiss is a vocal instructor, retired professional singer and a member of the National Association of Teachers of Singing. A polio survivor, she resides in Connecticut with her husband.
Crestmont, her debut novel published in 2010. She co-authored a memoir, Makayla's Heart: Moment by Moment with Dell Hyssong, published in 2015.
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June 18, 2010
The year is 1925 and Gracie is leaving home at twenty one ? years old. She fancies herself a singer and plans to join the vaudeville circuit. The problem is in order to get to the big city and establish herself, she needs money. She answers an ad in the paper for a housekeeping job at the Crestmont Inn in Pennsylvania. What is supposed to be just one summer turns into three summers and the book follows Gracie's life as she works at the Crestmont for three years.. possibly more? Will Gracie ever leave the Crestmont now that she has her own adopted "family" in the Crestmont owners, William, Margarent, Eleanor and Peg? Perhaps an opera singer can motivate her to get her arse in gear? Or is she happy where she is at especially since she has the attentions of TWO men, P.T. and Eric?
While reading this, I became thoroughly familiar with the running of an inn in the 1920s. It's well written and the author did an immaculate job with historical details, facts, and added just the right amount of descriptive details to aide in the reader's visualization without being overwhelming.
However, I had enough issues with this book to take away 2 stars. First of all, the heroine is incredibly timid, afraid, and has complete lack of self esteem. Almost every third sentence out of her mouth began with "I'm so sorry.." There was one part in the tale in which she realizes "the only person she needed to please was herself" and I wanted to jump into the book hooting and hollering and tell her to keep that train of thought, smack it into her if I had to.. I get that not every woman I read about is going to be a ball buster, but I need to know the background in order to understand and relate to the heroine and the novel offered more background information on P.T. than on the heroine herself. All I could pick up was that her parents did not take her singing aspirations seriously. I found myself more interested in Bessie, the "villain" or closest thing to one. She had problems brought to the surface and whereas Gracie is too good to be true to the point of angelicness, Bessie was "real" and had both good and bad flaws.
Second, a few songs, a conversation or two, and one kiss does not a great love affair make. The courting could have been juiced up a bit more and still maintained its G rating.
Also, I think this book is geared more towards the Christian community than the average historical fiction reader. Everyone is always praying, singing a hymn, or going to church. It doesn't get "preachy" but nothing really BAD really happens.. I don't consider two children playing in the attic a catastrophe. Especially when one is 15 years of age. Um, that is almost an adult and the girl shoulda been acting like one by that age in my personal opinion, but nevertheless, is two girls playing in the attic really horrible enough to warrant two grown adults to quit speaking to each other? Just because the heroine didn't tell the mother her "children" were playing in the attic, the world comes crashing down? Basically, I am not dissing Christian fiction, but those kind of novels tend to be so clean that the characters make mountains out of molehills.
I actually feel guilty for not LOVING this one. Everyone else seems to. The author was kind enough to bring this book to my attention and share different websites I could find it on and for that I am greatful. I simply prefer stronger heroines and more.... well, scandal and excitement in my stories. If someone is looking for a clean or inspirational read tho, I would highly recommend it.
P.S. LOVELY cover. The picture on the computer does not do it justice.
While reading this, I became thoroughly familiar with the running of an inn in the 1920s. It's well written and the author did an immaculate job with historical details, facts, and added just the right amount of descriptive details to aide in the reader's visualization without being overwhelming.
However, I had enough issues with this book to take away 2 stars. First of all, the heroine is incredibly timid, afraid, and has complete lack of self esteem. Almost every third sentence out of her mouth began with "I'm so sorry.." There was one part in the tale in which she realizes "the only person she needed to please was herself" and I wanted to jump into the book hooting and hollering and tell her to keep that train of thought, smack it into her if I had to.. I get that not every woman I read about is going to be a ball buster, but I need to know the background in order to understand and relate to the heroine and the novel offered more background information on P.T. than on the heroine herself. All I could pick up was that her parents did not take her singing aspirations seriously. I found myself more interested in Bessie, the "villain" or closest thing to one. She had problems brought to the surface and whereas Gracie is too good to be true to the point of angelicness, Bessie was "real" and had both good and bad flaws.
Second, a few songs, a conversation or two, and one kiss does not a great love affair make. The courting could have been juiced up a bit more and still maintained its G rating.
Also, I think this book is geared more towards the Christian community than the average historical fiction reader. Everyone is always praying, singing a hymn, or going to church. It doesn't get "preachy" but nothing really BAD really happens.. I don't consider two children playing in the attic a catastrophe. Especially when one is 15 years of age. Um, that is almost an adult and the girl shoulda been acting like one by that age in my personal opinion, but nevertheless, is two girls playing in the attic really horrible enough to warrant two grown adults to quit speaking to each other? Just because the heroine didn't tell the mother her "children" were playing in the attic, the world comes crashing down? Basically, I am not dissing Christian fiction, but those kind of novels tend to be so clean that the characters make mountains out of molehills.
I actually feel guilty for not LOVING this one. Everyone else seems to. The author was kind enough to bring this book to my attention and share different websites I could find it on and for that I am greatful. I simply prefer stronger heroines and more.... well, scandal and excitement in my stories. If someone is looking for a clean or inspirational read tho, I would highly recommend it.
P.S. LOVELY cover. The picture on the computer does not do it justice.
January 22, 2012
Crestmont is set in the 1920s in Eagles Mere, Pennsylvania and tells the story of Gracie Antes, a budding singer. Gracie leaves her unhappy home in 1925 and on her way to the big city and her singing career, she accepts a job as a housemaid at the bustling Crestmont Inn. At the inn, Gracie encounters the opera singer Rosa Ponselle, a meeting which has a profound impact on her life and she also meets man with a mysterious past.
As I read Crestmont, it was was as if I were there! Holly Weiss's descriptions of newly baked bread, the smell of fresh air and the outdoors, and of course, the characters and the town which came to mean so much! A terrific read - I am looking forward to Ms. Weiss's next book!
As I read Crestmont, it was was as if I were there! Holly Weiss's descriptions of newly baked bread, the smell of fresh air and the outdoors, and of course, the characters and the town which came to mean so much! A terrific read - I am looking forward to Ms. Weiss's next book!
January 23, 2012
A charming story set in the northern foothills of the Appalachians in the 1920's. The focus around the Crestmont Inn it's staff and owners. This is a comforting read that brings the walls of the prestigious Crestmont to life with carefully crafted attention to details of the place and time. Eagles Mere lake sounds like a one of a kind place being a mountain top lake surrounded by peace and beauty, a real dreamers paradise. I would love to enjoy it. It well have to go on my list of places to see before I die. The love of the beloved bed and breakfast just shines from Holly Weiss she gave it a soul.
July 8, 2010
Two women—separated by class, bound by duty— CRESTMONT delivers a multi-layered, appealing read.
In Holly Weiss’ debut novel, 22-year-old aspiring singer Gracie Antes discovers the meaning and the rewards of hard work. She applies for a position as housemaid at the lakeside Crestmont Inn in Eagles Mere, Pennsylvania in 1925. Her employer Margaret Woods, daughter of the creator and designer of the inn, sees something special in the young, naïve Gracie. During the next two years, these vastly different women bond in a special way through hardship, family strife, and responsibilities.
Gracie has one goal in mind—to earn enough money to fulfill her dream to become a singer. At first, she saves her meager earnings, but soon discovers life away from home comes with expenses. Gracie must find a way to fit in and slowly makes friends with her coworkers, but when Margaret Woods takes a fall, breaking her arm, Gracie leaves the staff dormitory to live with Margaret, her husband William, and their two young daughters. While there, Gracie learns what it takes to manage and run the Crestmont Inn, and her dreams must be put on hold.
Weiss creates distinctive characters through realistic description and believable dialogue. The staff at the Crestmont Inn includes unique individuals, from whom Gracie learns and matures as a young woman. When Gracie becomes the caregiver to a neighboring older woman in poor health, she discovers her own inner strengths.
Further, Weiss does a superb job of creating a distinct narrative world for the reader. Her details are authentic and engaging, invoking the aromas of the massive inn kitchen and the beauty and grandeur of the Pennsylvania countryside. One can almost see the morning sun reflecting off the lake, “like tinsel on the trees near the shore.” The building and grounds create the canvas for this finely woven tapestry—the inn itself becomes one of the main characters.
CRESTMONT is a debut novel for the history buff or for anyone who enjoys entering a past world and remaining there. An enjoyable stay at the inn, with ample staff to meet your needs.
In Holly Weiss’ debut novel, 22-year-old aspiring singer Gracie Antes discovers the meaning and the rewards of hard work. She applies for a position as housemaid at the lakeside Crestmont Inn in Eagles Mere, Pennsylvania in 1925. Her employer Margaret Woods, daughter of the creator and designer of the inn, sees something special in the young, naïve Gracie. During the next two years, these vastly different women bond in a special way through hardship, family strife, and responsibilities.
Gracie has one goal in mind—to earn enough money to fulfill her dream to become a singer. At first, she saves her meager earnings, but soon discovers life away from home comes with expenses. Gracie must find a way to fit in and slowly makes friends with her coworkers, but when Margaret Woods takes a fall, breaking her arm, Gracie leaves the staff dormitory to live with Margaret, her husband William, and their two young daughters. While there, Gracie learns what it takes to manage and run the Crestmont Inn, and her dreams must be put on hold.
Weiss creates distinctive characters through realistic description and believable dialogue. The staff at the Crestmont Inn includes unique individuals, from whom Gracie learns and matures as a young woman. When Gracie becomes the caregiver to a neighboring older woman in poor health, she discovers her own inner strengths.
Further, Weiss does a superb job of creating a distinct narrative world for the reader. Her details are authentic and engaging, invoking the aromas of the massive inn kitchen and the beauty and grandeur of the Pennsylvania countryside. One can almost see the morning sun reflecting off the lake, “like tinsel on the trees near the shore.” The building and grounds create the canvas for this finely woven tapestry—the inn itself becomes one of the main characters.
CRESTMONT is a debut novel for the history buff or for anyone who enjoys entering a past world and remaining there. An enjoyable stay at the inn, with ample staff to meet your needs.
January 23, 2016
The CRESTMONT by Holly Weiss, though a good read, left me a bit puzzled. It wasn’t until the end of the book that I realized the story was really about the hotel and an era gone by, and the characters only served as a back drop for Ms. Weiss to tell her story.
The main character other than the Inn itself was Gracie Antes. Gracie decides to leave her family home behind because of the rising feelings she has for her brother-in-law to be. Striking out on her own with a music career in mind, she decides to make a stop at the Crestmont Inn to earn some cash before going out on the road. As a housemaid at the Crestmont Inn, Gracie’s life is forever changed by the people who surround her.
The CRESTMONT had highs and lows. The book dragged in some areas and I found myself breezing over some of the excessive details regarding the objects in the book instead of the characters. The book had enough highs, to keep me reading, but the ending felt a bit empty.
How did I come to the conclusion that the book was about the Crestmont Inn instead of the characters that inhabited it? Because the ending leaves too many unanswered questions about the people you came to know throughout the story. So many plots were handled quickly or without resolve. Without giving anything away, a near tragedy regarding Eleanor was added but quickly breezed over. The non relationships that Gracie toyed with were never really explained. Whatever happened to PT? Why did Bessie leave in such a hurry? What happened to Gracie after she left the Crestmont? What happened to Mr. Woods? The ending did not give me a warm, satisfying feeling because it seemed to be handled in such a hurried fashion. I enjoyed the endnotes of facts regarding the Crestmont, so it isn’t that I don’t like history. I guess I just felt that Ms. Weiss put a lot of energy into adding colorful characters to her novel only to leave their individual stories unfinished.
Book provided for review purposes.
The main character other than the Inn itself was Gracie Antes. Gracie decides to leave her family home behind because of the rising feelings she has for her brother-in-law to be. Striking out on her own with a music career in mind, she decides to make a stop at the Crestmont Inn to earn some cash before going out on the road. As a housemaid at the Crestmont Inn, Gracie’s life is forever changed by the people who surround her.
The CRESTMONT had highs and lows. The book dragged in some areas and I found myself breezing over some of the excessive details regarding the objects in the book instead of the characters. The book had enough highs, to keep me reading, but the ending felt a bit empty.
How did I come to the conclusion that the book was about the Crestmont Inn instead of the characters that inhabited it? Because the ending leaves too many unanswered questions about the people you came to know throughout the story. So many plots were handled quickly or without resolve. Without giving anything away, a near tragedy regarding Eleanor was added but quickly breezed over. The non relationships that Gracie toyed with were never really explained. Whatever happened to PT? Why did Bessie leave in such a hurry? What happened to Gracie after she left the Crestmont? What happened to Mr. Woods? The ending did not give me a warm, satisfying feeling because it seemed to be handled in such a hurried fashion. I enjoyed the endnotes of facts regarding the Crestmont, so it isn’t that I don’t like history. I guess I just felt that Ms. Weiss put a lot of energy into adding colorful characters to her novel only to leave their individual stories unfinished.
Book provided for review purposes.
May 28, 2010
I won this book through goodreads first-reads!
The author creates a beautifully realistic world of the hustle and bustle at a busy inn in the 1920s. Ms Weiss' descriptions of life in the `20's are accurate and vivid. Eagles Mere became my town and the Crestmont became my home. In some places, as I was reading, I chuckled to myself, and in a few places I had a lump in my throat. I missed everyone and every place when I closed the book. I highly recommend it, it made this reader wish it continued!
The author creates a beautifully realistic world of the hustle and bustle at a busy inn in the 1920s. Ms Weiss' descriptions of life in the `20's are accurate and vivid. Eagles Mere became my town and the Crestmont became my home. In some places, as I was reading, I chuckled to myself, and in a few places I had a lump in my throat. I missed everyone and every place when I closed the book. I highly recommend it, it made this reader wish it continued!
April 20, 2012
I really liked this book. Was it an edge of your seat nail biter? no. It's a simple story of a simple girl learning who she is against the backdrop of the 1920's, and a grand hotel. I love history, but I tend to think of it in broad strokes, it was nice to narrow it down to one town, one family, one girl. It was fun to travel back 90 years to before cell phones, or even T.V.. A nice story, and good read.
December 21, 2010
I really enjoyed this book. It's a sweet story set in the 1920's - not an era I generally read about and I honestly felt like I was transported there. The descriptions were beautiful, vivid, and I felt a yearning to have experienced life in this time period.
March 4, 2015
"Crestmont." Wow.
It was a relaxing story with a well-developed plot. Young people can really identify with the main character, Gracie, because of the uncertainties of leaving home at a young age. I was pleased to see that Gracie's self-confidence grew, and she found her place and the way she wanted to live her life. Very inspirational and uplifting. The whole theme of trading loss for happiness will leave readers with a sense of hope. I loved the fact that the character Margaret overcame her melancholy and found a way to restore balance to her life. It was a good life lesson to take home at the end of the day.
The book will give hungry readers food for thought about issues like overcoming depression, building self-confidence, and being truly happy. The varied sentence structure keeps the story moving along smoothly, and there were unusual little-heard words to encourage different vocabulary. I liked how the story was organized; each chapter containing different perspectives and sections that make up a certain period of time from different times in the book; past, present, and future. Ms. Weiss was sure to use old-school expressions and sayings from the 20's era that added even more depth and authenticity.
Overall, I loved it. It was a pleasurable read for a quiet night with a cup of hot tea. Now, I'm telling all my friends about this charming find because the storyline is interesting (you won't find another book like this!) and it makes you think. I am presently spotlighting this book at the library where I work to help spread this masterpiece.
What are you waiting for? Pick up "Crestmont" and take a happy trip in time. You don't want to miss this!!!
It was a relaxing story with a well-developed plot. Young people can really identify with the main character, Gracie, because of the uncertainties of leaving home at a young age. I was pleased to see that Gracie's self-confidence grew, and she found her place and the way she wanted to live her life. Very inspirational and uplifting. The whole theme of trading loss for happiness will leave readers with a sense of hope. I loved the fact that the character Margaret overcame her melancholy and found a way to restore balance to her life. It was a good life lesson to take home at the end of the day.
The book will give hungry readers food for thought about issues like overcoming depression, building self-confidence, and being truly happy. The varied sentence structure keeps the story moving along smoothly, and there were unusual little-heard words to encourage different vocabulary. I liked how the story was organized; each chapter containing different perspectives and sections that make up a certain period of time from different times in the book; past, present, and future. Ms. Weiss was sure to use old-school expressions and sayings from the 20's era that added even more depth and authenticity.
Overall, I loved it. It was a pleasurable read for a quiet night with a cup of hot tea. Now, I'm telling all my friends about this charming find because the storyline is interesting (you won't find another book like this!) and it makes you think. I am presently spotlighting this book at the library where I work to help spread this masterpiece.
What are you waiting for? Pick up "Crestmont" and take a happy trip in time. You don't want to miss this!!!
June 14, 2010
Crestmont is a delightful read! Holly Weiss demonstrates her refined artistic skill, capably translated from song to pen, when she layers emotion, history, and dialogue to produce a colorful story about real people in real time. I enjoyed the Native American lore appearing at the start and occasionally throughout, which helps underscore a unique foundation for the Crestmont's setting and the charm the lake cast over summertime visitors for so many years.
Holly casts her characters' experiences in unforgettable vignettes. In one example, Gracie, the main character, cleans the snow off the roof to prevent the hotel from caving in. Simply put, the episode seems common enough, but in Gracie's struggle and her friend's efforts to assist her the reader is caught up in a moment of high drama. Is the snow too deep to move? Will Gracie fall out of the window? Can they accomplish the huge task given the extreme cold and wind? With careful detail, Holly writes to bring the reader into each nook and cranny of the glorious hotel and its characters lives.
There are places where I'd like a bit more information, such as what was Bessie thinking just before she disappeared? And wouldn't it be nice to know more about Gracie's life between leaving and returning to the scene of events? The story of Crestmont is entwined with the maturing process of young Gracie. We learn more about the hotel's later history than Gracie's when they find their way back to each other. However, it is clear that the Crestmont was the perfect setting for reality to set in for Gracie and for her to find her way into a full life.
Holly casts her characters' experiences in unforgettable vignettes. In one example, Gracie, the main character, cleans the snow off the roof to prevent the hotel from caving in. Simply put, the episode seems common enough, but in Gracie's struggle and her friend's efforts to assist her the reader is caught up in a moment of high drama. Is the snow too deep to move? Will Gracie fall out of the window? Can they accomplish the huge task given the extreme cold and wind? With careful detail, Holly writes to bring the reader into each nook and cranny of the glorious hotel and its characters lives.
There are places where I'd like a bit more information, such as what was Bessie thinking just before she disappeared? And wouldn't it be nice to know more about Gracie's life between leaving and returning to the scene of events? The story of Crestmont is entwined with the maturing process of young Gracie. We learn more about the hotel's later history than Gracie's when they find their way back to each other. However, it is clear that the Crestmont was the perfect setting for reality to set in for Gracie and for her to find her way into a full life.
January 28, 2011
I live in the UK and have never heard of The Crestmont Inn or Eagles Mere, nor have I been to Pennsylvania. But this did not stop me knowing exactly what it might be like in the mid 1920's - lovingly re-created from Holly Weiss's descriptions. Gracie Antes is an innocent despite being on the run from involvement with her sister's fiance, and her story is one which is a slow simmer rather than a scorcher. At times I wished there was more plot, but then the sheer old-fashioned cosiness of the tale would beguile me and I found myself reading on to discover more about Gracie's far-sighted bosses the Woods, and her co-workers such as PT the jazz pianist who can't resist embellishing his tunes.
Weiss writes well with a wealth of period detail and a good ear for natural dialogue, which gives this novel the feel of a genuine memoir.It is told in short vignettes, and sometimes these can be a little too episodic and I longed for a deeper look at some of the more interesting characters such as Bessie, the troublemaker.
"Crestmont" is a genteel coming-of-age story but it is more the story of the bygone hotel than Gracie's story, and indeed this is reflected in the title. Recommended next time you are lucky enough to stay in a period hotel - I hope the Crestmont Inn have bought stacks of them as all the guests will surely want to read this.
Weiss writes well with a wealth of period detail and a good ear for natural dialogue, which gives this novel the feel of a genuine memoir.It is told in short vignettes, and sometimes these can be a little too episodic and I longed for a deeper look at some of the more interesting characters such as Bessie, the troublemaker.
"Crestmont" is a genteel coming-of-age story but it is more the story of the bygone hotel than Gracie's story, and indeed this is reflected in the title. Recommended next time you are lucky enough to stay in a period hotel - I hope the Crestmont Inn have bought stacks of them as all the guests will surely want to read this.
March 11, 2013
Crestmont by Holly Weiss is a great peek into summer resort in Pennsylvania I the 1920s. The resort is real as well as some of the events but the characters have been changed. The life of Gracie Antes is followed through the 1920s and there is an epilogue in the 1970s.
Gracie didn’t really feel close to her own family, they just were not affectionate. Her future brother in-law surprised her with a kiss and she loved her sister very much but felt some attraction to him so she decided to set off on her own.
She had a great voice so she decided that she wanted to sing in Vaudeville. She saved her money for transportation and got as far as Crestmont. She thought it would be a temporary stay. She interviewed and got a job as a room cleaner but she also found people who acted like a real family to her. We get to know all servants and family of the owners and the times of the inn in the 1920s. Jazz and the new inventions appear. It was easy to slip into the time period and both the charms and harmful things.
It was easy to like Gracie; she seemed so humble and was so eager to learn. She borrowed books from the library and looked up books in the dictionary in order to improve herself. The writing was direct and sometimes filled with humor. I enjoyed this book very much.
I recommend this book to all historical fiction fans of this time period.
Gracie didn’t really feel close to her own family, they just were not affectionate. Her future brother in-law surprised her with a kiss and she loved her sister very much but felt some attraction to him so she decided to set off on her own.
She had a great voice so she decided that she wanted to sing in Vaudeville. She saved her money for transportation and got as far as Crestmont. She thought it would be a temporary stay. She interviewed and got a job as a room cleaner but she also found people who acted like a real family to her. We get to know all servants and family of the owners and the times of the inn in the 1920s. Jazz and the new inventions appear. It was easy to slip into the time period and both the charms and harmful things.
It was easy to like Gracie; she seemed so humble and was so eager to learn. She borrowed books from the library and looked up books in the dictionary in order to improve herself. The writing was direct and sometimes filled with humor. I enjoyed this book very much.
I recommend this book to all historical fiction fans of this time period.
February 14, 2011
Crestmont is a harmonious story. It opens with an intense and beautiful tale that introduces the town of Eagle's Mere. There is a sense of nature and oneness in the setting, a sense of slowing down, which gives the book a very enticing start. And then the story of Crestmont begins, with its soft, somewhat slow melody.
The main storyline takes off in 1925 when Gracie, an aspiring singer, begins to work at Crestmont Inn. Gracie is an endearing character. Her emotional depth makes the story really come alive, as do the personalities of those she meets on her journey. As Gracie's journey becomes more about what's within than where she's going, there is a spiritual awakening that occurs.
I found this book to be carefully-written, almost too much so in places. The story moved slowly at times, and Weiss seems to spend too much time on little details that added very little to the storyline. But, I'll admit, the cadence of the prose might have been purposeful. To my mind, it demanded more deftness from Weiss, in order to keep my interest, which she did. Few novels can slow me down, and it was just this, the slowness, that, in the end, kept me reading. With everything in life going at hyper-speed at all times, coming across a gentle book like Crestmont is rare, settling even.
The main storyline takes off in 1925 when Gracie, an aspiring singer, begins to work at Crestmont Inn. Gracie is an endearing character. Her emotional depth makes the story really come alive, as do the personalities of those she meets on her journey. As Gracie's journey becomes more about what's within than where she's going, there is a spiritual awakening that occurs.
I found this book to be carefully-written, almost too much so in places. The story moved slowly at times, and Weiss seems to spend too much time on little details that added very little to the storyline. But, I'll admit, the cadence of the prose might have been purposeful. To my mind, it demanded more deftness from Weiss, in order to keep my interest, which she did. Few novels can slow me down, and it was just this, the slowness, that, in the end, kept me reading. With everything in life going at hyper-speed at all times, coming across a gentle book like Crestmont is rare, settling even.
November 12, 2010
I'm a citizen of the Keystone state so anytime I have the chance to read a novel set in Pennsylvania I jump on it. I was pleasantly surprised by this debut from author Holly Weiss and hope that she has plans to write another historical set in the 1920s. While at times I was a little distracted by some of the errors as far as editing went I enjoyed life in Eagles Mere and the Crestmont Inn.
There were so many central themes to this story including family, faith, and growing up. Throughout the story I could really see how Gracie grew from someone who was rather unsure about her life and love and where it was headed to a more confident young woman. Although there wasn't a lot of romance there definitely wasn't a lack of characters. I don't know if I can count them all! There were a few potential love interests for Gracie but they didn't really play out until the very last. If anything I would say this is a coming of age type story, maybe not the most romantic but with the unique setting and the richness of the Roaring Twenties setting I really liked this story and am looking forward to more from Ms. Weiss!
There were so many central themes to this story including family, faith, and growing up. Throughout the story I could really see how Gracie grew from someone who was rather unsure about her life and love and where it was headed to a more confident young woman. Although there wasn't a lot of romance there definitely wasn't a lack of characters. I don't know if I can count them all! There were a few potential love interests for Gracie but they didn't really play out until the very last. If anything I would say this is a coming of age type story, maybe not the most romantic but with the unique setting and the richness of the Roaring Twenties setting I really liked this story and am looking forward to more from Ms. Weiss!
November 3, 2010
Crestmont. The Summer Resort was built on an ancient sacred site. It was the dream and inspiration of the man that built it in 1899 as well as his daughter who carried it on.
There were characters in this book that I came to know and love, but ultimately, I really felt like this book was about Crestmont and all the other stories hinged on Crestmont.
The underlying theme of Crestmont really pulled together the other characters/stories that were interwoven through this novel.
It appeared to be well researched. The author carefully included details -- foods, candy bars, current events -- to help set her stories in their appropriate time periods. There were notes at the end of the book describing where the author had diverged from history.
Rated G. This was an enjoyable read, I didn't notice any swearing and there weren't any sex scenes. I really appreciate authors that write clean books!
I would love to read another novel by this author.
I won this book through Goodreads First Reads.
There were characters in this book that I came to know and love, but ultimately, I really felt like this book was about Crestmont and all the other stories hinged on Crestmont.
The underlying theme of Crestmont really pulled together the other characters/stories that were interwoven through this novel.
It appeared to be well researched. The author carefully included details -- foods, candy bars, current events -- to help set her stories in their appropriate time periods. There were notes at the end of the book describing where the author had diverged from history.
Rated G. This was an enjoyable read, I didn't notice any swearing and there weren't any sex scenes. I really appreciate authors that write clean books!
I would love to read another novel by this author.
I won this book through Goodreads First Reads.
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November 14, 2010Holly Weiss’s debut novel is a nostalgic take on the goings-on at a fashionable 1920s inn, where the heroine, Grace, takes refuge as a housekeeper to escape a forbidden love. A likeable all-American girl, Grace bobs her hair and changes her name to Gracie, acknowledging the transformation ahead of her.
We meet other staff members and visitors to the resort, and more heartache awaits Gracie—but when, over halfway through the book, a famed opera singer arrives, Gracie’s natural talent is allowed its due.
Weiss’s omniscient narrator gives the reader a heartfelt overview of Eagles Mere, Pennsylvania and its history; the narrative is book-ended by multiple prologues (one of them particularly inventive) and an epilogue that reveals what becomes of Gracie.
There is real nostalgia in Weiss’s writing—for a simpler time. Just as the opera singer, Rosa, advises Gracie, Weiss too has chosen to “sing” something she truly loves. This is a historical novel for those who want to retreat to a 1920s free of grit, like Weiss’s smooth, efficient prose.
We meet other staff members and visitors to the resort, and more heartache awaits Gracie—but when, over halfway through the book, a famed opera singer arrives, Gracie’s natural talent is allowed its due.
Weiss’s omniscient narrator gives the reader a heartfelt overview of Eagles Mere, Pennsylvania and its history; the narrative is book-ended by multiple prologues (one of them particularly inventive) and an epilogue that reveals what becomes of Gracie.
There is real nostalgia in Weiss’s writing—for a simpler time. Just as the opera singer, Rosa, advises Gracie, Weiss too has chosen to “sing” something she truly loves. This is a historical novel for those who want to retreat to a 1920s free of grit, like Weiss’s smooth, efficient prose.
August 19, 2011
I thoroughly enjoyed this delightful creation of characters combined with an actual location that seemed to come alive as I read. I loved the blending of the real people who lived and worked in this quaint and historic Inn, and the author's development of characters who might have been much like those who were on staff in the 1920's. This is a book about the development of relationships, friendships and mentoring. I loved the multiple yet subtle mentoring that went on throughout the story. There was no need to tie up all the loose ends of what happens to characters. Many people are touched in our own lives that we never know the end of their story. I enjoyed watching the Woods family develop into the strength behind the success of this Inn. It was a delight to view the emerging personality of Gracie. It seemed as if you could feel her maturing and discovering her "own voice." The ending was what it needed to be, the passage of time zooming along to what actually took place. Just delightful!
September 11, 2010
I've read many historical fiction novels. Weiss's Crestmont is a delightful respite in the '20's. Her protagonist, Gracie, is a girl growing into a woman, even though Gracie enters this novel in her early 20's. One thing I liked about the book is that the author didn't spell everything out for me - I had to think and use my imagination.
All of Weiss's characters are very credible and authentic. You know all those people you wish you'd met and develop a friendship with? They are the characters in Crestmont. Eleanor is a delight girl full of life and fun. PT is the enigma of the book. We have Bessie the bitch; Dorothy is Gracie's summertime mentor. Otto is her first love interest. Oh! and don't miss the role of Shadow, the black cat!
When I finished the book, I was both happy and sad. I missed my new friends and I had wonderful read.
This is a book NOT to be missed.
Eli
All of Weiss's characters are very credible and authentic. You know all those people you wish you'd met and develop a friendship with? They are the characters in Crestmont. Eleanor is a delight girl full of life and fun. PT is the enigma of the book. We have Bessie the bitch; Dorothy is Gracie's summertime mentor. Otto is her first love interest. Oh! and don't miss the role of Shadow, the black cat!
When I finished the book, I was both happy and sad. I missed my new friends and I had wonderful read.
This is a book NOT to be missed.
Eli
July 12, 2010
I grew up in Sullivan County and visited the Grand CRESTMONT in the 50's and 60's as a young girl. I totally enjoyed Holly Weiss' descriptions and the meaningful relationships throughout the book. I found myself again looking out the window remembering going there as a child and not really paying much attention to the staff. The book is a marvelous read which will take you back to an era of a much respected country Inn. One will grow with the staff and the owners lives throughout the book. I was sorry to see it end. I did go back to the CRESTMONT in the early 90's and stayed in the Evergreen Lodge in a small room. I guess they have done some re-modeling since the Oliver's owned the Inn. I know it would be a great place for one to go on vacation; you can still see many of the original buildings. I found it a pleasure to be able to sit back and enjoy this book.
July 31, 2012
3.5 I loved the nostalgic old fashioned feel of this novel taking place in the 1920's at the Crestmont Inn. I also liked that it is told from the viewpoint of the waitresses and room cleaners, the bellboys and the cook, instead of the wealthy people who come for the summer season. Really enjoyed the character of Gracie, a young woman who leaves her home, wanting to be a singer and finds a home and family at the Crestmont. The author has an obvious love for this place, her descriptions of the Inn and the surrounding areas are beautifully rendered. Nothing really tragic happens but there are the usual differences people face when living in close proximity for each other such as the ongoing feud between Bessie and Grace. This is an enjoyable novel, a feel good book and I was fascinated enough to look up the Crestmont and have decided it is a place I must visit.
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November 11, 2018I am re-reading my book, Crestmont, to prepare for a discussion with a local book group. Four years after publication, I look forward to revisiting it with interested persons.
Crestmont is now available in ebook format for $2.99.
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I am a fan of Indie Bookstores. http://www.indiebound.org/book/978193...
Crestmont is now available in ebook format for $2.99.
Please see https://www.smashwords.com/books/view....
An interesting author interview can be found at Feathered Quill Book Review Blog http://bit.ly/99qjUE
I am a fan of Indie Bookstores. http://www.indiebound.org/book/978193...
June 16, 2010
Goodreads wins - May 20, 2010
A wonderful book! The author really brings you into the 1920s and I felt like I was a part of the characters' lives! It reminded me of the "resort" from Dirty Dancing (just in a different decade).
I felt like there were some unfinished storylines but in the end, the book was so refreshing that it didn't even bother me that much. I was sad to see the book end! Definitely a great read for when you want to curl up on the couch and want to be transported into another time and place!
A wonderful book! The author really brings you into the 1920s and I felt like I was a part of the characters' lives! It reminded me of the "resort" from Dirty Dancing (just in a different decade).
I felt like there were some unfinished storylines but in the end, the book was so refreshing that it didn't even bother me that much. I was sad to see the book end! Definitely a great read for when you want to curl up on the couch and want to be transported into another time and place!
October 15, 2012
I really enjoyed seeing Grace grow up and mature. She was a jewel of a person, and I absolutely loved her. At times, I had a difficult time with Margaret's character, but at to keep telling myself that she was acting in the capacity of Inn owner and her actions had to show the distinction between employer and employee. However, I thought that she was extremely nice to Grace. I am glad in the end that Grace found love.
June 16, 2013
In the vein of Willa Cather and William Trevor, Weiss has brought a "real-life" inn of Pennsylvania to the imagination of her readers through the story of Gracie, a worker at the establishment in the 1920's. Through sparse language, where a brief dialogue can pack a punch, Crestmont interweaves the relationships between the inn's owners, workers, guests and townfolk in an engaging manner that will leave the reader wanting more and longing for the nostalgic days of yesterday.
June 25, 2012
Ok, I didn't hate this story I think it just wasn't the right time for this book for me. I didn't have to push myself to finish it, I just couldn't get into it all that much. I can tell that the author has a great love of the Crestmont Inn, at least what remains of it, but to me it was too much of a promotion than a story. Sorry, I just couldn't feel for the characters.
November 2, 2010
Loved, loved, loved this book!!! It was such a wonderful story. I couldn't help but love all the characters! I wish I could have visited Crestmont back then!! And any book with an Isaiah for character had my heart since that is my sons name!
January 16, 2011
I liked this book but did however come away form it thinking it could of been more. Many story lines were left hanging that if continued would have made this more substantial.
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March 3, 2014Characters I was happy to know. Struggles I could relate to. A setting I've visited. All in all, I enjoyed it.
April 1, 2011
Crestmont
Author Holly Weiss
Reviewed by Fran Lewis
Come along with me and take a journey back in time to the roaring twenties when life was much different than today when families valued their time together and prohibition was in full force and meet the Woods family and visit one of the most elegant and magnificent Victorian Inn’s in the world, Crestmont. Meet William, Margaret, Peg and Eleanor and let’s not forget the staff and Gracie, their special addition to the Crestmont staff see how William Warner’s dream came true. Banker William Warner took one look at this great mansion and decided to create a place where visitors could spend the summer enjoying the beautiful pleasures in life with quality service. Fewer amenities than hotels or inn’s have today, the guests that frequented this summer resort received platinum service equal to that of the Waldoff today with their personal needs catered to in every way.
Enter Gracie Antes the newest member of the staff who found it imperative to leave her family due to personal reasons. Gracie had developed feelings for her sister’s future husband and rather than express them or cause a rift between her and her sister, she decided to just leave without telling anyone why or where she was going. Thinking she would find her way to the big city to become a singing, she saw an ad in the paper and took a detour to the Crestmont and found employment and so much more.
Gracie is someone who has ethics and wants to be trusted. Employed as a housemaid she soon gains the respect of not only her employers but the love of their two young daughters too. Gracie is special. She loves books and enjoys reading endearing her even more to those in the Eagle Mere and the many people she encounters. Becoming part of the church choir, singing at various talent shows at the Crestmont she soon becomes an integral part of each of both. But, Gracie although trustworthy losing face with her employer when she befriends her two daughters, keeps a secret they ask her not to reveal and when found out causing a serious change in the climate between her and Margaret their mother. Once close and trusted she is no longer needed to complete many tasks but not fired. But, this one incident would change the trust and relationship that Gracie and Margaret created and although she now lives in their home she no longer feels the warmth and love that she once experienced. As Margaret has an accident causing her to resent her infirmed condition, hampering much of what she wanted to do in order to renovate and redo much of the inn, Gracie learns many other lessons in life including that of her own families ambivalence toward her even though she tries to bond with her sister. Gracie must learn to find her own path in life and become an independent person with her own goals and desires fulfilled. As he relationship with Margaret changes and they begin to develop a strong trust for each other, things change between her and Mrs. Cunningham as he daughter, caught up in her own life begins to resent her relationship with her mother forgetting it was her idea to hire Gracie because she had things to do. What does happen as a result will surprise the reader. As some staff members leave and others remain each character develops and grows in many different ways during this time.
The author flashes further back in time to enlighten the reader about PT’s past, his life before coming to the Crestmont and much more. Each character is so unique, different and brings different qualities and attributes to this outstanding novel and to the inn itself. Of course, being an educator, I love Dorothy and her flair for making everyone feel comfortable, the love she shows to both Eleanor and Peg and the way she refers to her students. She is definitely a great role model and even better friend to Gracie.
But, Gracie although happy feels an emptiness inside as she comes to realize that her real family seems to have left her behind in more ways than one and she does not know how to repair the damage she thinks she caused. But, did she and would she have been treated with the same indifference had she remained?
William Woods, Margaret’s husband is a wonderful man but consumed with his job as a teacher, coach and much more often forgetting his role as husband and father. When called to task he often makes light of it until Margaret insists on taking it one step further. But, situations change and Margaret has an accident requiring Gracie to move into the main house and take on more responsibilities including her extra job on Thursdays taking care of an elderly woman.
Gracie learns many other lessons in life including that of her own families ambivalence toward her even though she tries to bond with her sister. Gracie must learn to find her own path in life and become an independent person with her own goals and desires fulfilled. As he relationship with Margaret changes and they begin to develop a strong trust for each other, things change between her and Mrs. Cunningham as he daughter, caught up in her own life begins to resent her relationship with her mother forgetting it was her idea to hire Gracie because she had things to do. What does happen as a result will surprise the reader. As some staff members leave and others remain each character develops and grows in many different ways during this time.
But, is the past and history of Eagle Mere Lake about to come front and center as she learns more about it, visits it more frequently and even becomes a member of one of the churches. Each character is so vividly brought to life you feel part of the staff of this beautiful inn. Tell about her daily experiences and taking the reader on a journey into the lives of the Woods, the owners of this Inn, Gracie and the many other colorful and vividly described characters makes the reader want to get in her car and take a trip to the real Crestmont Inn depicted in this novel.
From PT, a man with a hidden past, Olivia the dressmaker, singer, Rosa Ponselle, each bringing their own individual flair and story and each having a different relationship with Gracie as well as asked to care for an elderly woman on her day off. With outstanding skills, an impeccable work ethic and kind heart, Gracie Antes endears herself to just about everyone but Bessie. Why? Well , you need to find that out for yourself?
Family ties are broken with her own family and knitted together with her new found one at Crestmont as she gets closer to Mrs. Cunningham whom she cares for as Margaret the owner who drifts further apart from her own mother.
Trying to fulfill her father’s legacy and wishes, Margaret works hard to rebuild and fix this Victorian Mansion. Her father a banker, desiring a new challenge in life conducted his business in Eagles Mere. Nature is magnificent and the wonders and beauty of the area described so vividly by the author help the reader take the journey along with the characters. You can feel their pain, understand their sorrows, hear their laughter and applaud their successes. Added to the mix are two wonderful young girls named Peg and Eleanor who provide much joy to their parents and Gracie too.
Gracie grows so much in this novel as she meets opera singer Rosa Ponselle who encourages her to use her gift and teaches her to believe in herself. As more tragedies befall the family, a close friend passes away Gracie reflects on her loss of her own family only to be encouraged by PT to move on and embrace the life she made for herself. Relationships with many of the staff members, marrying one special man, the author moves forward to the final days of Crestmont at the end. When all is said and done you will not believe what finally happens to this magnificent inn and those who made it their home. What does happen to Eleanor, Peg, the Woods, Bessie, Olivia, PT and the rest of the staff you need to read for yourself. This outstanding novel ends with a real surprise ending bringing tears to this reviewer’s eyes and hope that the story will continue on with Gracie’s family taking the reins in perhaps another chapter of Crestmont Inn. With the legend of where it all began and how Eagle Mere got it’s name in the prologue to the final words spoken, you will fall in love with Gracie and the magic of Crestmont Inn. Take the journey with me back in time. Close your eyes , hear the music play, see the happiness that is and was Crestmont Inn.
Fran Lewis: Reviewer
Author Holly Weiss
Reviewed by Fran Lewis
Come along with me and take a journey back in time to the roaring twenties when life was much different than today when families valued their time together and prohibition was in full force and meet the Woods family and visit one of the most elegant and magnificent Victorian Inn’s in the world, Crestmont. Meet William, Margaret, Peg and Eleanor and let’s not forget the staff and Gracie, their special addition to the Crestmont staff see how William Warner’s dream came true. Banker William Warner took one look at this great mansion and decided to create a place where visitors could spend the summer enjoying the beautiful pleasures in life with quality service. Fewer amenities than hotels or inn’s have today, the guests that frequented this summer resort received platinum service equal to that of the Waldoff today with their personal needs catered to in every way.
Enter Gracie Antes the newest member of the staff who found it imperative to leave her family due to personal reasons. Gracie had developed feelings for her sister’s future husband and rather than express them or cause a rift between her and her sister, she decided to just leave without telling anyone why or where she was going. Thinking she would find her way to the big city to become a singing, she saw an ad in the paper and took a detour to the Crestmont and found employment and so much more.
Gracie is someone who has ethics and wants to be trusted. Employed as a housemaid she soon gains the respect of not only her employers but the love of their two young daughters too. Gracie is special. She loves books and enjoys reading endearing her even more to those in the Eagle Mere and the many people she encounters. Becoming part of the church choir, singing at various talent shows at the Crestmont she soon becomes an integral part of each of both. But, Gracie although trustworthy losing face with her employer when she befriends her two daughters, keeps a secret they ask her not to reveal and when found out causing a serious change in the climate between her and Margaret their mother. Once close and trusted she is no longer needed to complete many tasks but not fired. But, this one incident would change the trust and relationship that Gracie and Margaret created and although she now lives in their home she no longer feels the warmth and love that she once experienced. As Margaret has an accident causing her to resent her infirmed condition, hampering much of what she wanted to do in order to renovate and redo much of the inn, Gracie learns many other lessons in life including that of her own families ambivalence toward her even though she tries to bond with her sister. Gracie must learn to find her own path in life and become an independent person with her own goals and desires fulfilled. As he relationship with Margaret changes and they begin to develop a strong trust for each other, things change between her and Mrs. Cunningham as he daughter, caught up in her own life begins to resent her relationship with her mother forgetting it was her idea to hire Gracie because she had things to do. What does happen as a result will surprise the reader. As some staff members leave and others remain each character develops and grows in many different ways during this time.
The author flashes further back in time to enlighten the reader about PT’s past, his life before coming to the Crestmont and much more. Each character is so unique, different and brings different qualities and attributes to this outstanding novel and to the inn itself. Of course, being an educator, I love Dorothy and her flair for making everyone feel comfortable, the love she shows to both Eleanor and Peg and the way she refers to her students. She is definitely a great role model and even better friend to Gracie.
But, Gracie although happy feels an emptiness inside as she comes to realize that her real family seems to have left her behind in more ways than one and she does not know how to repair the damage she thinks she caused. But, did she and would she have been treated with the same indifference had she remained?
William Woods, Margaret’s husband is a wonderful man but consumed with his job as a teacher, coach and much more often forgetting his role as husband and father. When called to task he often makes light of it until Margaret insists on taking it one step further. But, situations change and Margaret has an accident requiring Gracie to move into the main house and take on more responsibilities including her extra job on Thursdays taking care of an elderly woman.
Gracie learns many other lessons in life including that of her own families ambivalence toward her even though she tries to bond with her sister. Gracie must learn to find her own path in life and become an independent person with her own goals and desires fulfilled. As he relationship with Margaret changes and they begin to develop a strong trust for each other, things change between her and Mrs. Cunningham as he daughter, caught up in her own life begins to resent her relationship with her mother forgetting it was her idea to hire Gracie because she had things to do. What does happen as a result will surprise the reader. As some staff members leave and others remain each character develops and grows in many different ways during this time.
But, is the past and history of Eagle Mere Lake about to come front and center as she learns more about it, visits it more frequently and even becomes a member of one of the churches. Each character is so vividly brought to life you feel part of the staff of this beautiful inn. Tell about her daily experiences and taking the reader on a journey into the lives of the Woods, the owners of this Inn, Gracie and the many other colorful and vividly described characters makes the reader want to get in her car and take a trip to the real Crestmont Inn depicted in this novel.
From PT, a man with a hidden past, Olivia the dressmaker, singer, Rosa Ponselle, each bringing their own individual flair and story and each having a different relationship with Gracie as well as asked to care for an elderly woman on her day off. With outstanding skills, an impeccable work ethic and kind heart, Gracie Antes endears herself to just about everyone but Bessie. Why? Well , you need to find that out for yourself?
Family ties are broken with her own family and knitted together with her new found one at Crestmont as she gets closer to Mrs. Cunningham whom she cares for as Margaret the owner who drifts further apart from her own mother.
Trying to fulfill her father’s legacy and wishes, Margaret works hard to rebuild and fix this Victorian Mansion. Her father a banker, desiring a new challenge in life conducted his business in Eagles Mere. Nature is magnificent and the wonders and beauty of the area described so vividly by the author help the reader take the journey along with the characters. You can feel their pain, understand their sorrows, hear their laughter and applaud their successes. Added to the mix are two wonderful young girls named Peg and Eleanor who provide much joy to their parents and Gracie too.
Gracie grows so much in this novel as she meets opera singer Rosa Ponselle who encourages her to use her gift and teaches her to believe in herself. As more tragedies befall the family, a close friend passes away Gracie reflects on her loss of her own family only to be encouraged by PT to move on and embrace the life she made for herself. Relationships with many of the staff members, marrying one special man, the author moves forward to the final days of Crestmont at the end. When all is said and done you will not believe what finally happens to this magnificent inn and those who made it their home. What does happen to Eleanor, Peg, the Woods, Bessie, Olivia, PT and the rest of the staff you need to read for yourself. This outstanding novel ends with a real surprise ending bringing tears to this reviewer’s eyes and hope that the story will continue on with Gracie’s family taking the reins in perhaps another chapter of Crestmont Inn. With the legend of where it all began and how Eagle Mere got it’s name in the prologue to the final words spoken, you will fall in love with Gracie and the magic of Crestmont Inn. Take the journey with me back in time. Close your eyes , hear the music play, see the happiness that is and was Crestmont Inn.
Fran Lewis: Reviewer
December 28, 2012
2.5 stars
**Apologies for the long review, but I had a lot to say after finishing. For the TL;DR version scroll to the bottom :)*
I liked the book well enough, but the beginning was a bumpy start for me and throughout the story I was sometimes thrown out of it. I read the book description and thought I was going to be reading about Gracie and her journey to Crestmont, but as it turns out there were two stories interwoven into one. The problem for me was the way they were interwoven wasn’t smooth and at times caused confusion. For example, we start with two prologues which I didn’t know was even possible. The first prologue consists of an Indian legend explaining how Eagles Mere got its name. The second prologue of sorts goes onto explain how William Warner got his vision for Crestmont Inn and then there is a section on how Crestmont was passed onto his daughter Margaret Wood. Finally, 24 pages into the ebook we get into the story of Gracie. For the most part we follow Gracie along through her journey of independence, but on occasion the story would change to the perspective of the Woods family (owners of the Crestmont Inn). For me these transitions from one perspective to another just weren’t smooth enough and made the story feel disjointed. In some parts it caused me to question the point of the chapter I just read. For example, there is a section where Mr. Woods is trying to cheer his wife up because she is depressed on the anniversary of her father’s death. Mrs. Woods suddenly gets a moodswing and starts badmouthing Gracie. This behavior was very unlike her. Then in the next chapter she is being sweet as pie to Gracie without any hint of what she had previously said. The whole affair didn’t make much sense.
Also leading to my confusion and much irritation was the writing. Simply put: this book needs a good editor. Let me give some examples:
“With a high-pitched cry to summon the attention of his people, he grabbed Laurel Eyes and pushed her toward rock steps that led below. Not wanting to dishonor her people’s remains, she stubbornly planted her feet in refusal. He dragged her, wailing, into the depths. His people watched. Only the echoes of her screams cut the silence that followed.” … the Haudenosaunee wait around and then “A final anguished scream echoed from below. Then silence. Stormy Torrent, his face contorted, returned alone. ‘The one know as Laurel Eyes is no more. Her spirit has joined her people, our enemy.’ “ (p.11)
Eh, what? The bold emphasis is mine. It didn’t say he pushed her, but he dragged her. We are not told how she dies, but that she dies. This is a case of telling, but not showing and I can’t stand it. I want to know how this chick died. Did she get dragged to her death? Did she throw herself off the rock steps? Did Stormy Torrent get mad and stomp her to death? WTF happened?!
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After they introduced themselves, Isaiah pounded Gracie on the back…” (p. 34)
How the hell is he pounding her on the back when they are both sitting in a car? Awwwwwkward!
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“ ‘Stay with her,’ Mrs. Woods said, trying to calm her down when Gracie phoned her on Monday. ‘Tell me what you need and I’ll bring the shopping to you at noon.’ She was putting away groceries and heating up a casserole that had been sent over when Dr. Webber arrived.
‘Ah, Mrs. Wood.,’ he said, setting down his doctors bag, then handing her his coat, hat and gloves at the front door. ‘I see you
have full use of your arm now. How long has it been, over a year now?’
‘My arm is fine, thank you.’ She handed him his black doctor’s bag. ‘Mrs. Cunningham is upstairs.’ “ (p. 213)
Okay, that first paragraph is just one of many where the Enter key would have come in handy. How is it that Mrs. Woods can talk on the phone with Gracie one minute and then be at the house to welcome the doctor the next all in the same paragraph?
Then there are times when the character name changes. For example, Manrico becomes Marico within the same paragraph. Is it Christiana or Cristiana? I still don’t know as her name changed several times within the epilogue.
There are also two plainly contrived scenes used to further the plot line that really annoyed me. These go into spoiler territory so I will put them under tags...
So why with my list of complaints did I give this book 2.5 stars instead of 1? Well, because it did have potential and I did like the characters. Even though Gracie was a Mary Sue I did like her gumption and her journey was realistic. How many times in our lives do we set out on one path only to end up on another? Circumstances change, we change and I think Weiss captures that rather well in this book. She also captured the meaning of family and friendship nicely. We can’t choose our family, but we certainly can choose our friends and who we surround ourselves with.
I also thought she captured small town life in the 1920’s well too. It’s clear that Weiss did research on the topic and incorporated much of it into her book. It was fun learning about the history of the Crestmont and seeing it grow from William Warner’s original dream.
So the too long, didn’t read version of this review is basically: I liked it, but wished it was more polished.
**Apologies for the long review, but I had a lot to say after finishing. For the TL;DR version scroll to the bottom :)*
I liked the book well enough, but the beginning was a bumpy start for me and throughout the story I was sometimes thrown out of it. I read the book description and thought I was going to be reading about Gracie and her journey to Crestmont, but as it turns out there were two stories interwoven into one. The problem for me was the way they were interwoven wasn’t smooth and at times caused confusion. For example, we start with two prologues which I didn’t know was even possible. The first prologue consists of an Indian legend explaining how Eagles Mere got its name. The second prologue of sorts goes onto explain how William Warner got his vision for Crestmont Inn and then there is a section on how Crestmont was passed onto his daughter Margaret Wood. Finally, 24 pages into the ebook we get into the story of Gracie. For the most part we follow Gracie along through her journey of independence, but on occasion the story would change to the perspective of the Woods family (owners of the Crestmont Inn). For me these transitions from one perspective to another just weren’t smooth enough and made the story feel disjointed. In some parts it caused me to question the point of the chapter I just read. For example, there is a section where Mr. Woods is trying to cheer his wife up because she is depressed on the anniversary of her father’s death. Mrs. Woods suddenly gets a moodswing and starts badmouthing Gracie. This behavior was very unlike her. Then in the next chapter she is being sweet as pie to Gracie without any hint of what she had previously said. The whole affair didn’t make much sense.
Also leading to my confusion and much irritation was the writing. Simply put: this book needs a good editor. Let me give some examples:
“With a high-pitched cry to summon the attention of his people, he grabbed Laurel Eyes and pushed her toward rock steps that led below. Not wanting to dishonor her people’s remains, she stubbornly planted her feet in refusal. He dragged her, wailing, into the depths. His people watched. Only the echoes of her screams cut the silence that followed.” … the Haudenosaunee wait around and then “A final anguished scream echoed from below. Then silence. Stormy Torrent, his face contorted, returned alone. ‘The one know as Laurel Eyes is no more. Her spirit has joined her people, our enemy.’ “ (p.11)
Eh, what? The bold emphasis is mine. It didn’t say he pushed her, but he dragged her. We are not told how she dies, but that she dies. This is a case of telling, but not showing and I can’t stand it. I want to know how this chick died. Did she get dragged to her death? Did she throw herself off the rock steps? Did Stormy Torrent get mad and stomp her to death? WTF happened?!
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After they introduced themselves, Isaiah pounded Gracie on the back…” (p. 34)
How the hell is he pounding her on the back when they are both sitting in a car? Awwwwwkward!
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“ ‘Stay with her,’ Mrs. Woods said, trying to calm her down when Gracie phoned her on Monday. ‘Tell me what you need and I’ll bring the shopping to you at noon.’ She was putting away groceries and heating up a casserole that had been sent over when Dr. Webber arrived.
‘Ah, Mrs. Wood.,’ he said, setting down his doctors bag, then handing her his coat, hat and gloves at the front door. ‘I see you
have full use of your arm now. How long has it been, over a year now?’
‘My arm is fine, thank you.’ She handed him his black doctor’s bag. ‘Mrs. Cunningham is upstairs.’ “ (p. 213)
Okay, that first paragraph is just one of many where the Enter key would have come in handy. How is it that Mrs. Woods can talk on the phone with Gracie one minute and then be at the house to welcome the doctor the next all in the same paragraph?
Then there are times when the character name changes. For example, Manrico becomes Marico within the same paragraph. Is it Christiana or Cristiana? I still don’t know as her name changed several times within the epilogue.
There are also two plainly contrived scenes used to further the plot line that really annoyed me. These go into spoiler territory so I will put them under tags...
So why with my list of complaints did I give this book 2.5 stars instead of 1? Well, because it did have potential and I did like the characters. Even though Gracie was a Mary Sue I did like her gumption and her journey was realistic. How many times in our lives do we set out on one path only to end up on another? Circumstances change, we change and I think Weiss captures that rather well in this book. She also captured the meaning of family and friendship nicely. We can’t choose our family, but we certainly can choose our friends and who we surround ourselves with.
I also thought she captured small town life in the 1920’s well too. It’s clear that Weiss did research on the topic and incorporated much of it into her book. It was fun learning about the history of the Crestmont and seeing it grow from William Warner’s original dream.
So the too long, didn’t read version of this review is basically: I liked it, but wished it was more polished.
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