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Onet's Tale is a classic tale of good versus evil, but it is interspersed with unexpected and challenging twists. It is an epic science fiction, spanning eons. It is mythic in scope and theme. Onet is an ancient being whose sole purpose is to trap and remove the evil he awaits. He is the story teller. Onet's tale takes us across the cosmos as our heroes, transformed into magnificent berserker warriors, are caught up in an ancient intergalactic power struggle between the Alliance of Planets, led by a consortium of Human and Nephile nations, and their arch enemy, the Drana Empire, who use Onet's own kind - the Khaz - to carry out their spying, and expedite their evil intent across countless worlds.Just when Onet finally believes he has captured his evil foe, the story changes yet again for the worse...

344 pages, Paperback

First published May 10, 2010

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Jack Eason

28 books36 followers
Jack Eason lived in New Zealand for forty-two years until 2000 when he returned to his birthplace in England. As far as he is concerned he will always consider himself to be a Kiwi. After military service in the 1960's, he travelled the world, visiting exotic lands and making many friends. Now retired,he is content to write and travel via the Internet. Besides writing novels and short stories. Some of his short stories and numerous articles appear in the No: 1 online E-zine “Angie’s DIARY”. His literary interests include science fiction, history, both ancient and modern, and humorous tales like those written by his fellow writer Derek Haines, such as “HAL”. He lives in retirement in his home town surrounded by his favourite books, ranging from historical fact to science fiction. His literary icons are J.R.R Tolkien, George Orwell, Arthur C Clarke and John Wyndham.

He also contributes to his blog “Have We Had Help” at: http://havewehadhelp.wordpress.com/ along with articles and short stories to “Angie’s Diary at: http://angiesdiary.com/.
You can also find some of his short stories under the ‘writings’ button at his goodreads author page: http://www.goodreads.com/jackeason

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Author 8 books18 followers
January 27, 2011
Onet’s tale is a chilling warning of what real evil could be. I never was into sci-fi and definitely this one held me by my short hairs. It grabbed from the first page and refused to let go until the very last. I found the interesting twist at the end more frightening. For I felt Onet was the absolute evil itself. I would not deign to classify it as even near human. I found the way women were portrayed a bit of a hard chew, which being female I guess is understandable. I would like to congratulate Jack for this brilliant work and can only say, in obedience to his statement from the beginning, mankind sows seeds in words, actions and in thoughts and the consequences of such sowing lies at their feet. I would sincerely hope the world will be spared the thoughts of the Khaz.
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Author 14 books53 followers
December 10, 2010
This is an exciting tale. The tone is that of a storyteller recounting the past. There are a host of characters caught up in intrigue, action and a fascinating story that spans worlds. A struggle against all odds in an epic battle for survival. An excellent read.
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Author 56 books767 followers
February 2, 2011
Imagine slaving in a mine on a distant planet, where each swing of your pick throws poisonous dust into the air that will kill you in a few months time from breathing it. This is where "Onet's Tale" opens, but it doesn't stay there long. This epic sci-fi tale from Jack Eason includes a large cast of characters from various planets, including the human/nephile Akhen and Khan, who is a Drana. Once enemies, the two band together to escape the mine and start a rebellion that eventually leads to a war that spans years and galaxies.

The story itself is narrated by Onet, who happens to be a Khaz. Think little gray alien guy that might land in Area 51. Except Onet is albino and has red eyes. He's watching all this unfold, waiting for his chance to stop the evil that his own kind started, which spread through a goddess-type being called Shu, and continued through her horrible creations of berserker warriors.

Murder, war, and mayhem reign throughout this book, while the main characters try very hard to live normal lives. Their efforts are always ripped out from under them, and I sympathized with the tortuous events they lived through. On the other hand, I kept wishing for more character depth. I'm really partial to character-driven novels, and this one seems mostly plot-driven. For me, I would have liked to have been inside the characters' heads more, really feeling what they feel.

If you like sci-fi packed with battles, futuristic weapons and modes of transport, you'll like "Onet's Tale".
Profile Image for Dave.
15 reviews4 followers
May 19, 2011
Tras cerrar el libro, tengo la sencasión de haber dado varias vueltas al universo.

En esta epica aventura somos testigos de una largo periodo en la historia del universo.

Varias generaciones de personajes participan en la narración de Onet haciendonos vivir inumerables situaciones.

Teniendo en cuenta la barrera del idioma, la segunda parte (en especial el final del libro) me ha resultado dificil de seguir dejandome la sensación de no saber muy bien como termina la historia.

Salvando este problema, he disfrutado mucho la lectura del libro, impredecible y muy muy entretenido.

Felicidades Jack.

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After closing the book, I feeling like if I'd traveled several times around the universe.

In this epic adventure, we are witness of a long period in the history of the cosmos.

Several generations of characters make us to live countless situations through the Onet's narration

Considering the language barrier (I'm spanish), the second part ,especially the end of the book, I found it difficult to follow, leaving me the feeling of not really knowing how the story ends.

Overcoming this problem, I really enjoyed reading the book, unpredictable and very very entertaining.

Congratulations Jack.
Profile Image for Geri Fitzsimmons.
Author 2 books
January 12, 2012
Jack Eason, an English fellow, with an extensive knowledge of this old world of ours, apparently decided it was time to build his own societies. With a remarkable ability to control different situations and characters while unfolding their stories and keeping his readers entertained, he has developed an epic tale that covers years and far distances.

Jack’s plots are not for the squeamish, they are high in action with some brutal activity taking place. Told from the viewpoint of Onet, an ancient life force, the novelist weaves the exploits of alien and human creatures into a captivating mosaic as they viciously battle one another. Onet, himself, attempting to trap an evil foe often shows as little compassion as the malicious individual he hunts.
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5 reviews
June 29, 2010
Love this book and it's characters. This is a must read for all who enjoy a good Sci-Fi novel. I love the way the Author took us into a whole new world. Without giving away anything from this fascinating novel I would recommend this book and give it two thumbs way up!!
Profile Image for Gerry Huntman.
Author 41 books93 followers
July 3, 2010
This book was a pleasure to read. True epic storytelling and a wonderful fast actioned scifi spanning, as it correctly states, eons.
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Author 17 books5 followers
June 27, 2011
Action packed sci-fi at a pace that goes faster than light! Amazing. I could barely keep up with the characters and plot. Deserves to be at least three trilogies!
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84 reviews13 followers
December 2, 2013
A man and writer I admire for his skills as well as his person . He never ceases to amaze me with incredible tales filled with thought and research all based on history and fact . I am always appreciative of someone who opens my mind to new perspectives and Jack has done this with every book he has written .

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Profile Image for Chris The Story Reading Ape.
1,196 reviews136 followers
September 1, 2014
To say that this epic saga / odyssey contained in just one book is breathtaking in its scope would be an understatement! It could easily have been done in two parts, which, combined with a previous book, would have made a fine Trilogy.

Beginning 800 years after the events of the authors earlier book, 'Turning Point', the story starts with an ancient Dranaa escape pod arriving in the Dranaa Empire territorial space.

The reader soon discovers that even after 800 years, descendants of the victorious human/nephile survivors of the battles with the Dranaa on Earth, are still engaged in war with the Dranaa - and things are not going too well for them.

Although labelled as Science Fiction, the story also contains some Conan the Barbarian / Xena the Warrior Princess type characters whose technology / evolution is so advanced it seems like they have magical powers.

For those who like Action, there are battles aplenty, in space and hand to hand.

Did I enjoy it? Emphatically Yes!

See my review also at:

http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/onets...

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http://www.amazon.com/product-reviews...

http://www.amazon.ca/Onets-Tale-Jack-...
Profile Image for Stuart Aken.
Author 22 books288 followers
February 9, 2016
I confess to disappointment with this book, which I read only one quarter the way through. It was a digital book and the formatting left something to be desired, with several passages 'centred', giving the text a slightly off-putting appearance. But that was just a technical issue.
My main problem was the lack of emotional input. The reader is told a great amount, shown almost nothing. There is little opportunity for empathy with the characters. It didn't help that I found the whole narrative confusing, so that, at times, I couldn't remember whose side individuals were on. Because I felt no connection with any of the characters, I lost interest in following a story that seemed too convoluted to me.
It's a shame, because I am sure there is a good story in there trying to get out. I review as I read, that is, as a writer. I'm sure that the author could re-write this in a much better form to both engage and entertain the reader without the confusion. Undoubtedly there will be others who find this book very good. I'm sorry I can't be one of that number.
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7 reviews1 follower
February 9, 2012
I really enjoyed reading this story. Friend of mine told me about it. And I bought the book. I hope the author keeps this story going.
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Author 10 books40 followers
May 2, 2012
One of the best Sci-Fi books I've had the pleasure to read.
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