Dark Debt

Chicagoland Vampires #11

by Chloe Neill

A vampire never gets old. But neither do his enemies. When a figure from Ethan's dark past makes a splashy debut in Chicago, Merit and her Master don't know whether he's friend or foe. But they'll have to figure out soon, because trouble is brewing in the Windy City.

At an exclusive society soiree attended by the upper echelons of the human and supernatural worlds, Merit and Ethan barely stop the assassination of a guest. When the target turns out to be a shady businessman with a criminal edge, Merit suspects a human vendetta. But the assassins have fangs....

The connections to Chicago's Houses go deeper than Merit knows, and even one wrong move could be her last....

Genres: Urban Fantasy, Vampires, Paranormal, Fantasy, Romance, Paranormal Romance, Magic

368 pages, Paperback

First published March 3, 2015

About the author

Chloe Neill is the New York Times bestselling author of the Heirs of Chicagoland, Chicagoland Vampires Novels, Devil's Isle Novels, and Dark Elite novels. Chloe was born and raised in the South, but now makes her home in the Midwest. When she's not writing, she bakes, works, and scours the Internet for good recipes and great graphic design. Chloe also maintains her sanity by spending time with her boys--her husband and their dogs, Baxter and Scout.

Connect with Chloe at www.chloeneill.com.

Reviews

[✘✘ Sarah ✘✘ (former Nefarious Breeder of Murderous Crustaceans) · Rating 4 out of 5]

Buddy read with the ever awesome Jaime starting March 3, 2015.

Yes. It is true. There are actually non-crappy, non-Ilona Andrews books out there. And this is one of them. Will wonders never cease?



But you know what the funny thing is? I shouldn't even like this book. It should have ended up in my DNF graveyard instead of getting a 4-star rating. Hey, I shouldn't even be liking this series. At all.

❂❂❂ TOP 5 REASONS WHY I SHOULDN'T LIKE THIS BOOK ❂❂❂

⑤ Vampires
Unlike some of my dear friends who are self-proclaimed fangbangers nope, you won't be getting any names from me. Who do you take me for anyway? Hey there S.! How's Mr Northman doing these days?! Oops, sorry about that, it kind of just slipped my tongue, I've never been very fond of bloodsuckers. I'm more of a howlbanger kind of girl. Simple as that.

④ Darth Sullivan
He's a vampire, which is bad enough. A blonde one at that *gasps* With long hair too *gasps again* And he's a reformed aggravating Alpha male. Okay, so he's still an Alpha but now the guy's in luuuuuuurrrrrve for God's sake. MAJORLY IN LUUUUURRRRVE. He positively oozes sweetness and devotion. So much so that you can feel it pouring out of every single hard plane of his beautifully muscled, sexy as hell, delicious body <-- am I digressing here? Thought so. Sorry about that. Where was I? Oh yes, the sweetness overload. There's so much of it to be had here I should be in a sugar-shock induced coma right now.

③ A HEA of sorts
HEAs are usually very short-lived in this series. Which is a very good thing when you think about it since most characters here are vampires. I mean, they're not far from being immortal, that gives Ever Freaking After a whole new meaning doesn't it? *shudders* Anyway, we tend to have temporary HEAs here so I guess it could be worse. But still. Even temporary happiness tends to bring out the homicidal maniac in me.



② Romance
Okay, this is where things really get tricky. The BIG R word. Writing the actual word hurts so you'll only get an R from me. To be honest the BIG R. thing wasn't that bad at the beginning of this series. But then Methan happened and things got out of hand pretty fast. And it keeps getting worse with every new instalment. Oh dear. I can feel the sugar-shock induced coma coming back as I'm typing this.

① The vampiric soap opera
All drama, all the time: family drama, relationship drama, vampire drama, friendship drama, business drama, sorcerer drama, political drama, murder drama, shapeshifter drama, human drama. Hey we even have mob-related drama in this one! There is so much DRAMA going on that reading this series sometimes feels like watching The Young and The Restless.



This is pretty much a recipe for disaster as far I'm concerned. But you know what? It isn't. Because when it comes to Chicagoland Vampires I JUST DON'T CARE. It could be all fluffy bunnies and pastel coloured rainbows and I'd still read it. This series is my crack. I love it no matter what.



❂❂❂ TOP 3 REASONS WHY I LOVE THIS BOOK ❂❂❂

③ The vampiric soap opera
All drama, all the time. Okay. I can see you doubting my sanity here. I bet you noticed there is some kind of conflict between #1 up there ↑↑↑ and #3 right here ←←← . Yeah well, that's bipolarity for you. The thing is, all this drama actually keeps things interesting. There's never a dull moment in this series: evil scheming! Evil scheming everywhere! People coming back from the dead! Evil scheming! Evil scheming everywhere! Wild chases! Evil scheming! Evil scheming everywhere! Mind rape! Evil scheming! Evil scheming everywhere! Murder! Evil scheming! Evil scheming everywhere! Crazy fights! Evil scheming! Evil scheming everywhere! Revenge! Evil scheming! Evil scheming everywhere! Chicagoland Vampires have more fun. And so have I.

② Darth Sullivan
Because he now makes Star Wars references *gasps* Because he developed a sense of humour *gasps* Because he's still as Alpha as they get *mmmm* Because he's a yummy bastard *mmmm* And because I wouldn't mind if he asked me to stand up <-- page 52. See Sarah pant. Heavily.





① Merit
Because she eats like a horse. Because she feels more comfortable in a Cubs t-shirt than in an evening dress. Because she's got Ethan Freaking Darth Sullivan wrapped around her finger. Because she isn't perfect. Because her secret nickname is still secret. Because she has a brain and uses it. Because she's snarky as hell. Because she's got a katana. Because she kicks ass. And because she rules.

“Not bad for a girl.” “That’s what the last guy said—right before I kicked his ass.”

So we actually have 5 cons and 3 pros here. Now that's my kind of maths. Never underestimate the minority. The minority will get your ass kicked every single time.

At this point you probably want to read an actual review for this book, instead of my usual, uninformative ramblings. Best idea you've had all day. Why don't you go and check out Chelsea's or Sarah's (no not me you silly, another Sarah *eyeroll*)? Come on, off you go!

[Jo ★The Book Sloth★ · Rating 2 out of 5]

2 You Have To Pick Up Your Game Stars



And yes, after 11 books and 2 novellas, I'm finally ready to write a review about this series. Sadly, while I generally like the series, this review will not be positive.

There are plenty of UF series out there, some start mediocre and stay mediocre (Sookie Stackhouse), some start mediocre and become strong (Mercy Thompson), some start strong and stay strong (Guild Hunter), some start strong and become powerful (Kate Daniels/ Fever 1-5) and then there are those few who start well enough, have all the potential for greatness but then get flushed down the toilet (Anita Blake). I'm not happy that at the moment I'm thinking that Chicagoland Vampires is probably gonna end up in the last category.



I honestly want to love Chicagoland Vampires. I freaking read 11 books in less than 10 days and I have given most of them a 4* rating. But for me not having given a single 5 means that something is not working. A lot of things are wrong with this series and I was more than happy to ignore them at the beginning but 11 books later I feel less than generous and really frustrated with some of these things.

Without further ado, my shit list!



a) Merit loves to eat, her ponytails, her leather outfit. We heard it once, twice, three/four/five times. We freakin' got it! I see no reason mentioning it every other page in every book.

b) Merit's daddy issues. Don't get me wrong, I can appreciate a little father-daughter rivalry as much as the next girl, but it's been 11 books, when does the author plan on finding a solution to this thing?

c) The proposals-baby angst. Cheesy much?? Wouldn't mind some progress on that one either!

d) Merit turning to PI mode. It's predictable and overused. All UF heroines go that direction and I'm getting tired of all the Sherlock-Wannabes. I would love some originality.

e) Ethan. Now, I do like Ethan, but prime uber-alpha-male material he is not. I would like a bit more powerful-ruthless-cold in him. He just doesn't seem like a guy that can rule hundreds.

f) The Navarre Vamps. They are just annoying with their whining and vanity and their holier-than-thou attitudes.

g) The incosistencies. This is my biggest grievance against the series. CN just can't seem to follow a route in a lot of things. The most obvious one is whether vampires and Merit in particular are powerful immortals or just creatures with a little bit more juice than humans. In the first books Merit was supposed to be this extra strong vampire, with great fighting skills and badass attitude. As the books progress Merit just continues to lose badass points. The same girl that can fight shifters, sorcerers, Master Vamps and come out on top, goes down with a kick, is outrun and outmaneuvered by a mere human and spends half her time recovering from one injury or other. I'm not saying that she has to be the baddest of them all but she either is or isn't. Not knowing if you'll find badass Merit or weak-as-a-kitten Merit every time you turn the page ends up really annoying.

The other incosistency that was mostly obvious in this book was the death of your Master thing. If it is supposed to be such a huge emotional punch to lose your Master, how come Ethan didn't even realise if and when his died??

All these things I could and have ignored them for quite a while but this book just managed to bring every single issue to the surface. It's not that the series doesn't have many positives too. It does. At this moment though the negatives win. I hope the next book will make me want to list the pros in my review.

[Chelsea ✨Arielle’s Nebular Ally and Team Acrux✨ · Rating 5 out of 5]

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"If you touch her again, come near her again, I will tear you apart with my own bare hands, Master or not."

There are so many things I love about this series. So many things I hold back after finishing a book because, really, how many times can you repeat all the same things you love about a consistently excellent series? I always do a mini-review, letting people know the main reasons I loved the story, and I hardly put all I truly feel into the review. Well, 7 mini-reviews later and I think it's time I finally let all these built up emotions out-this book was excellent and people deserve to hear about it.

Ethan sighed. "It has nothing to do with pretty."
"Not according to your brain," I agreed. "But once again-"
Ethan held up a hand. "No need to repeat the point."
"When I'm four hundred, do I get to date a twenty-five-year old?"
Ethan narrowed his gaze. "If you date anyone other than me at any point in your hopefully long and fruitful life, there will be trouble for both of us."

I keep saying that these stories continue to get better, and it's true, mostly, but there is something refreshing about a more sinister plot. Like, it's known that when you pick up a Chicagoland Vampires book that there will be a mystery to solve, Ethan and Merit will have to conquer a new threat to their relationship, and there will be lots of love and snark exchanged between them. It's a fact. It's an inevitability. And I always get so excited to pick up the next new story. But this time there was something new. Sure, there's always something new-But not like this.

Never has there been something that made me feel so icky about what could happen to Merit-or Ethan, for that matter. But when the return of an old figure from Ethan's dark past reemerges, things begin to get....foggy. Merit's defenses are down, Ethan isn't (and can't be) quick to save Merit, and no one can understand why, or how, this person is getting past their wards on the house. How does one protect another person's mind? Is there even a way? And what happens when Ethan isn't there to break the trance, and the next time he's too late? What then?

There was nothing equivocal in his gaze, in the steadiness of his green eyes. "He was my nightmare, Merit. You are my miracle. He will not touch you again. Yes?"

Ethan, as always, was beyond words. He is so loyal to Merit and would do anything to keep her safe. And when Merit has a close run-in with this dangerous and mysterious enemy, it guts him that she recoils from his touch. She becomes withdrawn and so unlike herself, leaving everyone scrambling to keep the wards in place...even when there isn't a break-anywhere in sight. It makes him moody, protective, possessive, and more than a little bit nervous (Waaaaiiittt, yeah, my bad he's always like that-but, hey, it was a little more intense this time). Ethan likes to be in control, to be the alpha, to know he's keeping the love of his life (and his house) safe. So, when bad things begin to surround his house, he's more than unsettled.

"I like to think I'm more than the sum of my training."
"You are," Luc said. "There's at least some hot beef or deep dish in there."
"I am also more than Chicago foodstuffs."
Ethan grinned at Luc. "Pumas? Diet Coke? Smart-assery?"
Luc snapped his fingers, pointed at Ethan. "Yes. And, like, three percent medieval literature."
"You're both hilarious. Really and truly. Comedy geniuses."

And Merit. I adore this girl. She's snarky, she's funny, and she always has the best comebacks-I could be best friends with her. And, to top it all off, she can take care of herself. It's not often you find a female lead with all the bells and whistles. But in this story, Merit feels violated, like she can't defend herself even in her own home, in her own apartments, and with the man she loves sleeping right beside her. It's a new kind of challenge for her and she spends the book doing everything she can to defend herself with no way of knowing what will work and when he'll strike next....and what he'll do to destroy the forever relationship she and Ethan have worked so hard to build.

Which was why Ethan returned to the apartments to find Mallory and me lying on the bed, television on, pooched stomachs taking a much needed breather.
"Oh, this is quite a sight," Ethan said with obvious amusement, then spied the empty box of Mallocakes. "A vampire and sorceress done in by chocolate snack cakes."
"Mallocake 'splosion," Mallory said weakly. "Pew, pew, pew."
"I think there's one left." I moved just enough to skim fingers against the box, tip it up. "Yep. One. You can have it."
"Wait," Mallory said, and put a hand on my arm while she deliberated, as if there was a chance she might be able to squeeze in one more. "No." She waved me off. "I can't. Go ahead."
"This scenario isn't really selling the Mallocake concept to me," Ethan said.
"We're having girl time."
"Not the girl time I prefer to imagine, but so be it."
"Perv," Mallory said with a grin, rolling off the bed and trundling toward the door. "I'm going to roll myself downstairs."
"Take care," Ethan said. "And thank you for the ward."
She burped indelicately.
"And that's our powerful sorceress," Ethan said, locking the door behind her.

I think the reason I liked this story so much was because of how it all progressed. There was a lot more action and it mixed really well with the banter and strategizing. I am so picky when it comes to this and I couldn't have been happier with how it was all handled. There wasn't a moment when I was bored or rushing to get past anything-every moment was important and every moment mattered. It was fast-paced and the love scenes were electric. Every minute was a rush as we tried to catch whoever was behind the sinister threats and when they were trying to defend the house. And, as always, the humor helped get us through every single moment.

I looked up at him. "Are you wooing me?"
"I've been wooing you since the moment our eyes locked on the first floor of this house."
I gave him a flat look. "No, that's when you accused me of being spoiled."
"Details," he said lightly, mouth drawn into a crooked grin.

So, I know that I gush a lot about these characters, but they are very dear to me and I am fully invested in whatever may happen to them. I want nothing more than for the prophecy to come about and for happy things to occur regularly for Ethan and Merit. Their love is tangible and it leaps off every page-every look, every touch, every embrace-they were made for each other. I cannot wait to see where the rest of the stories go, because this series has my heart. If you haven't tried, you need to go and start these books now. You won't regret it!


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[Ferdy · Rating 2 out of 5]

Spoilers

Just the usual sort of UF book, nothing different or exciting happened. If I wasn't so obsessed with finishing series I've started I would have given up on this one by now, also after ten books I may as well stay until the bitter end. That said Dark Debt wasn't a bad book, the writing was decent, the world was fun and easy to immerse into, and the secondary characters were likeable. But it was just so samey and been there, done that. Also, Merit as a protagonist was so vanilla and generic, she never did or said anything shocking or original, which all made for a very blah reading experience.

-What's what: Merit and Ethan have to help Morgan fight off some new bad guys (the Circle), they also have to fight the other bad-guy-of-the-week, Ethan's evil-supposed-to-be-dead master (Balthasar).

-Most of the plot was very formulaic and predictable. The Morgan/Navarre/Circle story line was slightly more interesting and not quite as predictable as the Balthasar one though.

-Liked the world, the secondary characters, and the fast pace.

-Liked Merit's scenes with her dad and Mallory, she had the most interesting relationships with them. Even though Merit's dad was a right bastard, I still liked his antagonistic relationship with Merit, he bought out the best in her, I wanted more scenes with them.

-Merit was really boring, holier than thou, and Sueish. I wanted her to fuck up or do something exciting, anything to make her seem more layered/human/relatable. She was too much of a little-miss-perfect-who-everybody-loves in a really smug kind of way. I think I prefer my UF heroines more dark and complex, like Chess from the Downside Ghosts series.

-Another thing that bugged me about Merit and just the vampires in general was how twee and proper they were about fighting and justice. I wanted them to be more ambiguous and do some killing/serious injury, instead of their usual fighting which at most only ever resulted in superficial injury. Also, I wish Merit would stop being so black and white about everything, and instead have some shades of grey in her life. It would make her so much more interesting. Her personality hasn't changed whatsoever since book 1 despite all the differences in her life, her character needs a major shake up.

-I couldn't stand Ethan and Merit's smug, self righteous, condescending attitude. In the last few books they had the habit of looking down at everyone and acting like they were so much better than everyone around them, they were even worse in this one. It was especially noticeable when it came to Morgan and various rich people, Merit and Ethan were so up themselves when they were commenting on someone else's life. I wanted them to be taken down a peg or two because their smug attitude was insufferable.

-I'm sick of all the Ethan-centric plots, the last few books have been all about him and his problems. I'd rather the focus be on the many other side characters available, he's so blah and cliché.

-What's the point of Merit being a RG member? She's rubbish at it. The only time she really ever does anything for them is when it benefits her in some way, otherwise she ignores them. Also, being part of the RG requires her to monitor the various vampire leaders, she's meant to be impartial and professional about it, yet she's so bias when it comes to Ethan. It doesn't matter that she trusts him, he's not infallible, when it comes to her RG duties she needs to treat him like every other vampire master.. And not get offended and pissy when her colleagues ask her to keep a closer eye on him. I wish the RG would just tell her to piss off, she's bloody useless.

-I rolled my eyes at Merit feeling bad for kissing Balthasar when she was magically forced to. She reminded me of other pathetic UF heroines (Leila from the Night Prince series/Rachel from the Hollows/Gin from the Elemental Assassin books) who act guilty over things they have no control over.. Of course, they all need their man to explain the obvious and absolve of them of their ridiculous guilt. Ugh.

-I was bored with all the mentions of Merit loving food and cars and hating parties and dressing up. All those constant little reminders just made an already clichéd Merit even more clichéd.

-Merit was the only female character in the thick of the action, it was like no other female character was allowed to play with the big boys. Mallory and Lindsay didn't play a significant role in the fighting or the many discussions held about their latest problems, they were only ever in the periphery of things. It made Merit come across like a speshul snowflake being the only girl allowed to play with the big boys.

-Why does any female character with power (Lakshmi, Mallory, Diane, Celine, Nicole, Irina) either end up crazy or evil or are portrayed as being incompetent or manipulative or crap at their job or unable to handle the power they have?

-Why doesn't Merit ever mention her mum or sister? She never thinks about them or talks to them or spends time with them. She only ever bothers with her dad and granddad, as if they matter to her whilst her mum/sister don't.

-Ethan seemed like such a wimp with all his bodyguards and Merit always jumping to his defence and babying him from any threats.

-What was with that human guy managing to outrun Merit, beat Nadia, run Ethan off the road? Ethan, Nadia, and Merit should have been able to best him at all of that. Aren't vampires meant to be much stronger, faster, and more skilled than humans? How were they so useless against him?

-I had to laugh at Merit 'discovering' the connection between Balthasar and the Circle. The connection was so obvious that when Merit actually told Luc and co about it and they were all shocked by her theory, I was momentarily confused because I thought it was already clear to everyone that that was the case.
Yea, I still don't buy her investigating skills, it seems like the only time she figures anything out is when everyone around her either don't have all the information she's privy to or when every other character suddenly becomes thick and blind to the obvious.

-I was disappointed in Catcher/Mallory's relationship, they were still great together but I felt really bad for Mallory. Even though Catcher loved Mallory, it did seem like the main reason he was only marrying her was because he thought it would lead to him being able to join the Order again. Even when he told Merit otherwise, I wasn't convinced.

-The relationship between Ethan/Merit was as imbalanced as usual. Again, Ethan was number one for Merit no matter what, but it was clear that Merit was just the latest in a long line of women Ethan loved. It also seemed liked the only reason Merit was endgame for Ethan was because she's going to have his kid one day and because he's at a time in his life where he just so happens to be ready to settle down, and not because he feels for her what he's felt for no-one else.

-I didn't like the vibe that Ethan's past with women wasn't about him being a playboy but about him actually being rapey. I thought he just shagged around and used women for sex, but in this one it seemed like Ethan/Merit alluded to him raping loads of women. I don't know if that's what the author was aiming for but either way it put me off Ethan's character even more.

-I'm guessing the next book will be about Merit taking down the Circle and being sappy abut Ethan, and there'll be no twists or turns or originality. Oh well, at least the books are fast, easy to get through, and require no thought to read.

[Carmel (Rabid Reads) · Rating 4 out of 5]

Reviewed by: Rabid Reads.

Chicago has a reputation for good food, crappy weather, and organized crime; Chloe Neill makes a point of including the first two in practically every installment, but the third had yet to surface. DARK DEBT rocketed into the previous book’s cliff hanger with little delay while also paving the way for a new mafia plot thread that will in all likelihood become this series’ latest story arc. The secondary characters were the headliners of this novel for me with Mallory & Catcher at the head of the pack.

Merit is ever so gradually becoming a ‘real’ vampire after her unorthodox transformation in SOME GIRLS BITE, and the most recent undead trait that she has to contend with is glamour. She’s skated by on immunity for ten books, but the time has come to pay the piper. Her pound of flesh came at a pretty high price, and I was afraid that it would be yet another obstacle between her and Ethan. Speaking of Cadogan House’s master, his solution was uber uninspired, so I was happy that 1. Merit vetoed it, and 2. She conquered her snag.

The author nimbly pulled the wool over our eyes as far as antagonists go. There were two enemies stirring the waters of Lake Michigan in this installment; one was obvious until he wasn’t while as the other stayed on the DL until he could deliver a direct hit. I really enjoyed how this story’s plot developed, Neill never does anything without a reason, and even though her ploys don’t always make sense at the time, they eventually complete their circuit in a rewarding way, so I look forward to seeing where she takes her gangster thread.

Mallory & Catcher were the masters of all things feels in this novel. I wish I could blurt out the why of it, but their aaww moment was too good to spoil. Morgan’s been the gum at the bottom of the CHICAGOLAND VAMPIRES shoe since day 1, therefore I was kinda stunned when he manned-up, and I found myself genuinely liking him. The same can be said of Merit’s dad, he’s definitely not a candidate for father of the year however after his actions in this book there may be hope for him yet. Jonah on the other hand… what a hypocrite!

Chloe Neill strikes again with DARK DEBT!

[Jennifer · Rating 5 out of 5]

★★★★½
I'm not sure if it's just been too long since I read anything from Chloe Neill's Chicagoland Vampires series, but this eleventh installment was just what I needed to snap me out of a quickly approaching reading slump. I don't put every book I drop on my DNF shelf but I've already gone through four deleted books this week...and I was scared lol. I'm glad this book was available when it was.

Dark Debt had a lot of suspense and fun mystery/strategy that kept my attention. Keeping up with all the familiar characters is something I look forward to with each installment and this one rewarded loyal readers with a lovely event at the end. Chicagoland Vampires is such a great urban fantasy/mystery series and I'm so glad I started it. Check it out!

My favorite quote:
“Love wasn’t perfection. It wasn’t always roses and candy. Hell, it wasn’t even mostly roses and candy. Sometimes it was battling back fear that loomed like a leviathan, trying to find a way through misery, being grateful to have a companion who knew your strengths and weaknesses, and loved you not just in spite of them, but because of them. Love was acceptance. Love was bravery. Love was sticking it out.”

Chicagoland Vampires series includes the following installments as of May 2017. The ratings listed are my opinion only.
1-Some Girls Bite ★★★★★
2-Friday Night Bites ★★★★★
3-Twice Bitten ★★★★★
4-Hard Bitten ★★★★☆
5-Drink Deep ★★★★☆
6-Biting Cold ★★★★☆
7-House Rules ★★★★★
8-Biting Bad ★★★★★
8.25-Kicking It ★★★★☆
8.5-Howling For You ★★★★★
9-Wild Things ★★★★☆
10-Blood Games ★★★★☆
10.5-Lucky Break ★★★★☆
11-Dark Debt ★★★★½
12-Midnight Marked
12.5-Phantom Kiss
13-Blade Bound

[Elise ✘ a.k.a Ryder's Pet ✘ · Rating 3 out of 5]

⋰⋱⋰⋱⋰⋱*Soon done*⋰⋱⋰⋱⋰⋱

Re-read: 05.02.2018
Am I the only one feeling like Ethan and Merit is holding something back? I mean, their relationship is pretty strong, but I believe it could be stronger... Anyways, I'm soon done with my re-reading of this series that hasn't gone so well. Let's hope the last book in the series makes up for everything as I haven't read it yet.

The characters:
— Caroline ‘Merit’ ‘Mer’ Evelyn Merit (becomes vampire at 27, but is 28 in years), Sentinel of the Cadogan House.
— Ethan ‘Liege’ ‘Darth Sullivan’ Sullivan (394, though became a vampire at 30), master of the Cadogan House —> dead, but is back from the dead.
— Mallory ‘Mal’ Delancey Carmichael (28), Merit's bestfriend and a fourth-class sorcerer, a master of the First Key; power.
— Charles ‘Chuck’ Merit (in his sixties), Merit's grandfather is the Ombudsman; a ‘liaison’ between the regulars and the sups.
— Chuck's team:
↳ ∘ his secretary, Marjorie (50),
↳ ∘ the computer prodigy and a shape-shifter, Jeffrey ‘Jeff’ Christopher (21),
↳ ∘ a fourth-class sorcerer and a master of the Second Key; weapons, Catcher Eustice Bell (29),
↳ ∘ and there's also a Housed vampire who works for him that not even his colleagues knows about.
— Joshua Merit, Merit's dad sucky dad.
— guard of the Cadogan House, Lindsey (115) and who is also a psychic, and a good friend to Merit. Also dating Lucas.
— Lucas ‘Luc’, the Captain of the Cadogan House guards, now House Second; back to being Captain.
— Malik Washington, Second, House Cadogan, now Master of Cadogan House, until Ethan takes back leadership; back to being Second.
— Morgan Greer, Master of Navarre House, (72, though looks 28) Merit's sorta ex and a weak man.
— Gabriel ‘Gabe’ Keene, Apex of the Central North American, Jeff's pack leader (love him).
— Darius West, head of the Greenwich Presidium and a total dick.
— Seth Tate (36), former mayor of Chicago and a fucker. A part of him, that is; His twin brother Dominic was evil and lived inside of him. Seth is technically good. He's angel/messenger.
— Scott Grey, Master of Grey House.
— Noah Beck, the leader of Chicago’s independent vampires and a Red Guard ‘RG’ (a vampire Secret Service, of sorts).
— Jonah, the Guard Captain, Grey House and a Red Guard, has a crush on Merit.
— Franklin Theodore Cabot, was the appointed receiver of Cadogan House (Darius West, head of the GP, had decided he didn’t like the way the House was run, “Frank” had been sent to Chicago to inspect and evaluate the House). He sucked big time.
— Berna, shifter, and ended bar and worked the kitchens at Little Red (the Ukrainian Village watering hole where the Pack hung out in Chicago).
— Diane Kowalcyzk, Chicago’s new mayor.
— ‘John Q.’ McKetrick, a former military type with a raging hatred of vampires. He now the head of the Office of Human Liaisons, or OHL.
— Michael Donovan, was the House Cadogan's security auditor (in book #7). A Rough, who turned out to be evil.
— Damien Garza, a member of the Pack.
— Celina Desaulniers was the former Navarre Master; she’d been forced out of the position after an attack on Ethan. Killed by Merit's hand after Celina killed Ethan.

“When I’m four hundred, do I get to date a twenty-five-year-old?”
Ethan narrowed his gaze. “If you date anyone other than me at any point in your hopefully long and fruitful life, there will be trouble for both of us.”
“That’s definitely penis logic,” Brody said helpfully. I didn’t disagree with him.

Quick basic facts:
Genre: - (Adult) Paranormal Romance/Urban Fantasy.
Series: - Series, Book Eleven.
Love triangle? - No.
Cheating? - No.
HEA? - No.
Favorite character? - Ethan ‘Liege’ ‘Darth Sullivan’ Sullivan.
Would I read more by this author/or of series? - Yes.
Would I recommend this book/series? - Yes.
Will I read this again in the future? - Yes?
New Rating - 3 stars.

First read review:
Eh, not the best in the series. I want Merit and Ethan closer. And I miss Gabriel a tiny bit.
Rate: 4 stars.

[Sharon ∞❥ is an emotional book junkie ❥∞ · Rating 4 out of 5]

It always makes me happy when a series gets back to what makes it sooo good in the first place and for this series it's one thing...Ethan. The series took a hit after Hard Bitten, Book #4, and again it had to do with...Ethan. I'm thrilled that CN was able to get things back on track with the last several books and especially this one.

Ethan is really in all his glory in this book and everyone is awestruck, especially Merit. Don't get me wrong, I love her but there is just something about Ethan, his love for Merit...and quite simply, his love of being a vampire and all that encompasses.

I really love when Ethan and Merit work together and it's wonderful that Ethan's out of the house more. Prime example is the last fight when Ethan stepped back and let Merit get a few licks in. Gotta love a secure man...or vampire as it were.

Even better is having Catcher and Mallory in the picture...or in the house. It was wonderful what they were able to bring to the story and the help they were able to provide. I think Mallory has finally come full circle and even stronger and better than before. And the scene at the end...loved it!



And guess who else has come around? Morgan...that's right, Morgan! I was shocked too! Of course, he had to take a bit of a knock down but it was sorely needed. *Fingers crossed* that things work out for his house.

I think Jonah was about the only one that was a tad disappointing but maybe that is a necessity as well? Only time (or the next book) will tell.

The main drama has to do with a vampire from Ethan's past. I have to say that I enjoy the twist on things and naturally, there has to be some new bad guys in the city and it seems that "The Circle" fits the bill quite nicely.

That brings us to Merit's father who does something totally unexpected and shocking! It's a little hard to trust though. I guess we'll just have to be patient.

Book #12 states it's coming out this year, probably around August if it follows the same pattern. Can't wait to see what else Ethan and Merit get up to.




Favorite quotes:

♥ “Always remember,” he said. “Real lust beats old magic any day.”

♥ “When I’m four hundred, do I get to date a twenty-five-year-old?”

Ethan narrowed his gaze. “If you date anyone other than me at any point in your hopefully long and fruitful life, there will be trouble for both of us.”

♥ "A vampire and a sorceress done in by chocolate snack cakes."

♥ “Let me hold you in the darkness,” he whispered, lips against my ear. “Let me fight him for you. Let me keep you safe.”

♥ "Merit doesn't like other people touching her things."

[Maja (The Nocturnal Library) · Rating 4 out of 5]

Just recently Chloe Neill announced that she’ll be ending her Chicagoland Vampires series with book 13. While I’ll be very sad to say goodbye to these characters, I feel that she’s made the right decision. The series has been noticeably losing steam and the last few books have become just a tiny bit repetitive and predictable. However, predictable can be as comfortable as a warm blanket, and when you add to that a bunch of characters you’re very familiar with, you get a recipe for a very pleasant afternoon.

I’ve been with this series from the start, through excitement, disappointment and everything in between. I’ve loved Merit and Ethan and I’ve suffered with them. I feel like I know them inside and out, which is the absolute best, especially in my favorite genre.

This time around, the vampire that created (and tormented) Ethan, a vampire supposedly dead for centuries, is suddenly in Chicago threatening everything Ethan and Merit have created. To make matters worse, Merit’s ex-boyfriend and leader of the Navarre house, Morgan, is neck-deep in trouble and asking Cadogan for help.

This installment was very emotional for the usually unflappable Merit. She’s always so confident, so sure of her place in the world, but everything was thoroughly shaken this time around and her struggles were extremely hard. I loved seeing the supportive side of Ethan, who remained by her side the entire time. These two have become such a wonderful, mature couple. They’ve finally started communicating openly and completely honestly, and now that there’s nothing between them, I’m enjoying every moment we see them together.

The main thing that bothers me, that has always bothered me in this series is its very short time span. We’ve spent years with these characters, but for them, a lot less time has passed, which makes everything that’s happened to them all the more stressful and far too unlikely. The short time affects the romance as well – it’s much harder for me to believe in its strength when it’s only been a year and a half or so, and Ethan and Merit have had maybe two peaceful days during that time.

Aside from that, though, this is undoubtedly one of my UF favorites, a series I keep going back to whenever I need something familiar and comfortable, and yet exciting at the same time. Neill certainly knows what she’s doing, and I hope that her new series will be just as good.

[Robin · Rating 5 out of 5]

Ethan's not-so-dead sire, Balthazar, is in Chicago and ready to make trouble. He hates Ethan and will do anything to destroy him. He also wants to take over Cadogan House. As Merit and Ethan try to predict Balthazar's next move, they are invited by her father to a party attended by Chicago's rich and famous. They are at the party when one of the human guests is attacked. Merit and Ethan stop the assassination attempt, but not before realizing the attackers are vampires from Navarre House.

This is an excellent addition to the Chicagoland Vampires series. Merit and Ethan are juggling several problems in this book. Merit discovers that she is now vulnerable to Balthazar's glamour. This leaves her hesitant in going face to face with him. With Mallory and Catcher helping Cadogan House fortify against Balthazar, Merit and Ethan have time to discover what exactly is going on at Navarre House. My rating: 5 Stars.

[Sarah · Rating 5 out of 5]

**Please be aware that although this review will be spoiler free for Dark Debt it will include spoilers for previous books so if you haven't read Blood Games yet I would suggest that you don't continue reading**

I'm a huge fan of the Chicagoland Vampires series and after the game changing events at the end of Blood Games I couldn't wait to get my hands on a copy of Dark Debt to find out what happens next! I was expecting the plot of this story to revolve around the dissolution of the GP and the newly established Assembly of American Masters but although that does play a role the main part of the story is something that has a much bigger impact on the three Chicago houses. It's difficult because there are so many things that I want to talk about but at the same time I would hate to give spoilers so I'm going to keep this review deliberately vague in regards to the plot. What I will say is that there is plenty of mystery and we are introduced to a surprising new enemy who I think will be keeping the team on their toes for quite a while to come.

Merit and Ethan's relationship has been through the wringer but just when they get to a fairly good place an old face from Ethan's past shows up and threatens to ruin everything. This vampire is old and extremely powerful, likely stronger and faster than Ethan even, so for once he finds it it impossible to keep Merit safe. She is in the firing line and more vulnerable than we have ever seen her and it leaves her shaken and unsure of herself. As much as I love Merit because she's usually so kick ass it was interesting to see her in such a difficult situation, she suddenly finds herself no longer immune to vampire glamour and unsafe even when she's inside Cadogan house which is utterly terrifying for her. You should already know that Merit doesn't let anything hold her back for long though and as scared as she is her love for Ethan and her determination not to be his weakness soon have her fighting back harder than ever.

It isn't only vampires who are causing them trouble though and they are actually at greater risk from a human mafia like group who have managed to get their claws into Navarre House. I think anyone who reads the series will probably agree with me that Morgan has been a bit of an idiot since the beginning. His attitude has annoyed me on more than one occasion and I haven't been a fan of his for a long time now so I was surprised to find myself feeling more than a little sorry for him here. His house is in a mess and although he didn't create the situation he certainly hasn't helped it but now he finally has the opportunity to turn things around and it looks like we might be about to see him man up for a change. I'll be really interested to see if this continues over the next few books and if it does Cadogan might just find they have a new ally in Navarre. I expect Morgan has a fight on his hands though so it might not be as smooth has he hopes.

There is a lot going on in Dark Debt, there are plenty of plot twists and the amount of action is just right - enough to keep you gripped to the pages and not wanting to put the book down but still leaving room for the series trademark humour and for the brilliant characters to shine. Mallory and Catcher get a lot of page time and they were adorable, they actually made my heart melt a little! We even get to see a very surprising side to Merit's father, we all know what a terrible father he has been so far but perhaps this might go a little way towards making up for it. Of course Merit and Ethan are always my favourites, I just love seeing them together and their banter never fails to make me smile. As usual they have difficult battles to face here but this time they don't let it pull them apart and it just makes them a stronger couple than ever. I love this whole series but I think Dark Debt is probably one my favourite books so far and I just can't wait to see what happens next, we have definitely been given a hint of things to come too and, trust me, it's going to be a wild ride. I just wish I didn't have to wait for the next book to be published!

[Cocktails and Books · Rating 5 out of 5]

The Chicagoland Vampire series is one that I've always enjoyed, but with each new book in the series I find new reasons to love Cadogan House, it's master and it's sentinel.

In DARK DEBT, Navarre House and it's master, flame for a minute to Merit, Morgan, finds himself and his house trying to find a way out of the debt it's former master got them into a some less than savory characters. This story introduces us to a new foe, one that is intertwined with Merit's father and seems intent on getting their hold on the supernatural community along with it's other wrong doings. To do so, they bring in someone from Ethan's past hoping to insight all kinds of fear to get their way.

As with other CV stories, no one can handle their own business, which means Merit, Ethan and company have to come in to try and fix whatever their issue is. This is generally what I enjoy most, because the relationships between the characters continue to grow the tightness within the Cadogan family (including the Ombuddies) gives readers the sense of a family willing to do whatever they have to for each other. We see that when Catcher and Mallory's relationship takes a turn or when Ethan has to contemplate his maker. Time and again, this tight knit group continues to prove they have each others backs.

My only disappointment with the story was with Jonah. He and Merit have a disagreement and that isn't resolved when we get to the end of the book. Jonah is an important person to Merit and I didn't like that they were still mad at each other. Sure, he showed up to help her when she needed him but the tension was there and I needed them to be ok as partners.

With recent entries into the series, Merit and Ethan's relationship gets stronger with each book. No longer does a reader doubt the strength of this couple, even when things seem bleak. They fight for each other and support the other, even when they don't know.

DARK DEBT was hard to put down and when I did reach that last page I was a bit sad. Chloe Neill always gives us great page-turning stories that are engrossing, from the suspenseful storyline to the comic relief. The books are always a pleasure to read and most definitely a series I highly suggest.

[Jilly · Rating 3 out of 5]

Hey, I didn't think it could ever happen, but Alpha-Asshole Ethan, is actually developing a sense of humor! Color me shocked! He even finds out that Mallory and Merit have nicknamed him "Darth Sullivan" and has fun with it.
"Darth Sullivan?"
I inwardly cringed, opted for defense. "You're so handsome.... and really tall. Has anyone ever told you that you resemble David Beckham?"

Can't let that one pass by without a gif of the glorious Mr. Beckham.


you're welcome

"You're not the sandwich architect I'd have figured you for," I said.

"I am, apparently, Darth Sullivan...I understand that building things, Death Stars or otherwise, isn't my particular strength."


bitches love Death Stars

Yes, I'm a Star Wars geek. Yes, I've seen the movies enough times to quote them. No, my British husband doesn't get it. At all.

Back to the book! (what this is supposed to be about)
So, in this episode, we have two main things going on: first, Ethan's maker is back from the dead and looking for some revenge. (I know, people just don't stay dead in these books! WTH?)

Secondly, there is some accounting trouble at House Navarre. Yes, I said accounting trouble. That's some exciting stuff. Totally book-worthy. We get to learn about line accounting and dummy corporations. F-ing riveting! And, I know what you're thinking: I hope we get to learn about tax-exemptions and 401K plans for the vampires. But, I'm not going to spoil it for you. Some things are just too glorious not to discover on your own.

Accounting aside, this was definitely better than the last book. No Ethan/Merit angst. They didn't even have a relationship crisis. That was a big improvement.

[Alex is The Romance Fox · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is definitely a vampire soap opera and I can’t get enough. And still I am totally invested in this amazing world that the author has created and developed through each book.
The 12th book in the Chicagoland Vampires and it’s still as fresh and smart as ever.

As usual Merit, who has been likened by a reader as the Nancy Drew of the supernaturals, is on another adventure, together with her gorgeous love of her life, Ethan and her many friends and allies.

I enjoyed this installment a lot. I am not going into the plot as too much happens for me to find enough space to fit my words into.
Needless to say …. I liked the storyline…..the Chicago vampire houses finally working together, with an evil vampire from Ethan’s past causing chaos in Chicago….but what I loved the most was the end……Catcher & Mallory were absolutely adorable…..and I am totally in love with this couple.

What a ride it’s been so far and just a bit sad I will have to wait almost a year for the next book!!!!!

[Lisazj1 · Rating 4 out of 5]

I love reading this series. I'll never be tired of Ethan and Merit and all the rest of the Chicagoland crew. <3

[Tabatha · Rating 4 out of 5]

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Please take a second or two to prepare yourself for the unsolicited cheesiness that is this cover review/reaction..

Picture this:
It's just an average afternoon on Goodreads. I'm just minding my own business, scrolling through my to-read shelf when-


Oh!

I notice that Dark Debt's cover has been released. At this point I don't even pause to scrutinise the thumb-sized image. I just click; pounce, if you will.


Gimmegimmegimme

Unfortunately, everything from here just kind of goes downhill..


(I think the picture says it all..)

The cover does nothing for me. And before anyone feels that they have to give me the 'Don't judge a book by it's cover' speech, don't. please don't.



There isn't a specific part of the cover that I don't like (although I'm not too sure of the colour scheme for this one), it's just all of the different aspects of the cover added together that displeases me. For instance, for me personally, the title doesn't look quite right where it's been placed in relation to the image and the model looks nothing like out previous Merit's, which for some reason always irks me..


*Sigh*

I really love this series (I meant with Ethan-freakin'-Sullivan, who wouldn't?), so it's a real disappointment for me because the way books look in my bookshelf plays a huge role in whether or not I actually get a physical copy or just the ebook..

Over & Out, T xx

[Jennifer · Rating 4 out of 5]

Originally posted at The Book Nympho

     

 
5 Reasons to read Dark Debt by Chloe Neill
1. Classic Chicagoland!

I felt like Dark Debt was a return to the earlier feel of the series, which made me so happy. The relationships between some of the characters (like Merit and Mallory, Mallory and Ethan, Catcher and Mallory) have been strained lately it made me happy and hopeful to see those relationships back on track. The gang is feeling more like a family again.

2. Secondary Characters

One character I was surprised to see a lot of was Morgan. I see Morgan like Tate from the Night Huntress series by Jeaniene Frost. Yeah he can be an asshat most of the time but under all that he is a good guy with good intentions. I really liked see more of him and I hope he gets a HEA one day.

I wish we would have gotten more of Jonah but there was a very interesting scene between him and Ethan and I hope that Jonah will be around more in the next installment because now that Merit's other relationships are on solid ground her partnership with Jonah needs work.

I was fun seeing the full cast of secondary characters in Dark Debt.

3. NO Angst

Ethan and Merit is finally acting like an adult couple! There's no jealousy, no fighting, just love, respect, sexy times and of course fun snark. I really should have made this #1 on my list. After all the things this couple has been through before and after Ethan making the biggest sacrifice for Merit they still had major angst in their relationship. So much so that it was turning me off the series. But now I think they are finally in the place they should have been after Drink Deep.

4. Chilling Villain

I think a villain that can get into your head and make you do things against your will is scarier than one that can hurt you physically. Plus when a villain makes our heroine weak in a way she's never dealt with before it throws us as reader off right along with her.

Merit's turning into a vampire has not been textbook. One thing that has never effected her before is vampire glamour so when it's finally used against her it almost is her undoing.

Although the main villain was stopped, another one is still hanging around and I could see a story ARC involving him and it will be interesting to see how Merit and the gang take him down.

 5. Humor

Merit and the gang has dealt with some dark times so it was great to see some of the old humor come back. I hadn't laughed so much while reading a CV books in a while.


 

Dark Debt had the classic CV feel that made me fall in love with the series! After a couple of middle road installments, Dark Debt has renewed my excitement for the next release. I can't wait for Chicagoland #12!!

[Krista · Rating 5 out of 5]

So much to love. Besides the obvious (METHAN!), there was... MORGAN. Goodness, I've missed him.

I love the direction that Chloe Neill has taken her Chicagoland Vampires series. After eleven books, you have to expect the characters to grow and change as they go through different experiences together. And, yet, I always see glimpses of the characters they were in book 1 shining through from time to time. Which is fortunate, because I fell in love with Merit, Ethan, Mallory and the gang from the very beginning.

Ethan is freaking out - in his very controlled Ethan way - because it appears his maker Balthasar is back from the dead. And, he. Is. Pissed. As if a centuries-old cranky vampire isn't enough, now Ethan and Cadogan has a major criminal enterprise gunning for them after they step in to help out Morgan. Just another day at the office.

Let's face it. I read this series because... METHAN. Ethan and Merit are one of my favorite bookish couples of all time. Especially now that they seem to have finally found their groove. The drama in the Chicagoland Vampires books no longer come from Ethan and Merit's on again, off again relationship. The drama now comes entirely from the situations developing around them as their world continues to adapt to the realization that supernatural beings are real.

Although relationship drama is good sometimes, to be honest, I'm really liking the lack of it in this series now. The various people and organizations out there vying to take down Cadogan House cause enough danger and peril that I get to read about Ethan in uber-protective mode when it comes to Merit, which is SO much better. Protective, concerned alpha male Ethan is so hot.

"You're my future wife and the mother of my future child. I will well protect you against any threat, living, dead, or undead, just as I promised in my oath to this house."

Just when Ethan and Merit have conquered the GP debacle and Ethan is starting out in the newly created American Masters group, it seems a new criminal empire called The Circle has cropped up. Even worse, it seems to have sunk its claws into Morgan and Navarre House. Navarre owes a debt they're having a hard time paying. There's been no love lost between Cadogan and Navarre, but that doesn't stop Ethan from offering assistance.

It was so good to hear from Morgan again. He was a much more prominent character in earlier books, then almost disappeared with only a mention here and there. Morgan is a fascinating character. He's a green Master. He's kind of the "bad boy" Master of the three in Chicago. He's quiet and stoic and he has this weird mental connection with Merit that's never been explained. I was so excited that Morgan was back and that we were going to get to spend some time with him.

"Look up," he said, tilting my chin upward. "There is always light." Morgan said quietly. "The stars are always shining, even if we can't see them."

Ethan is usually very composed, but when his ruthless maker Balthasar shows up and starts wreaking havoc around Chicago, Ethan kind of loses it a bit. It was good to see him so affected by something. Especially when Balthasar comes after Merit in a way that really violates her. In addition to Merit, Ethan is completely shaken by this, and I really liked seeing him off kilter.

The usual characters of Mallory, Catcher, Jeff, Chuck, Luc and Lindsay are present in this book too. They all have their roles to play, especially Mallory and Catcher. It's good to see they've gotten past the nasty business Mallory was into a few books back, and relationships have been knitted back together again.

I will NEVER get tired of the Chicagoland Vampires series. As long as Chloe writes them, I'll read them.

[t'irla ~The Bookslayer~ aka Barbara · Rating 5 out of 5]

I love this series...one of my top 5 all time PNR/UF series and Chloe Neill did not let me down! I once again got exactly what I expect from Ethan, Merit and the gang. Humor, fast action, kicking bad guy ass, and awesome byplay between Ethan and Merit, a fast paced story that keeps me reading until dawn. For me this is one of the most consistent series in the UF/PNR universe and although CN can through us some curve balls once in a while of something completely unexpected she writes with a eye to the prize using all kinds of different vehicles to keep the story progressing forward.

My one complaint and it is a silly one...is enough already let E and M get engaged. We the readers have been taunted, teased, lead astray and finally we want completion already! LOL The love story between Ethan and Merit has been a long strung out affair and we need it to come full circle so we can get on with all the new things that will challenge the relationship. I also want more of the shifters. I adore Gabriel and the pack and would like to see more story/page time given to them. These are only wants and have nothing to do with how good this story is...I admit to fangirling here.

If you are new to the Chicagoland Vampires series you really should start with the first book so that you can appreciate all the nuances of the stories and the relationships between characters. Many of the secondary characters are repeats from book to book and although this is a story driven series. The relationships are the vehicles that keeps the story moving so it is important to have everything in context.

It was great to see more of Navarre House since they have been pretty mysterious in the past and the insight we got into Catcher and Mallory was wonderful and not in your face but steadily fed to the reader through several chapters...brilliant!

Can you tell I was really happy with this novel? and now I'm done *whine* and I have to wait for the next one. Why do I always rush through each novel in this wonderful series then at the end think I should have savoured it more? I do look on the bright side though. Netgalley provided me with this novel for an honest review so I can unashamedly go and purchase the audiobook and get my second dose of Dark Debt!

5 brilliant shiny stars for this edition of Chicagoland Vampires and a fangirl push to all of you who have not yet started this series. What the heck are you waiting for???? go ...go NOW...buy it and sit back and enjoy the ride!

[Annie · Rating 4 out of 5]

With eleven books in the series, there doesn’t seem to be an end for Ethan and Merit. DARK DEBT reveals a new threat in Chicago, one that the crew can’t figure out if they are a friend or foe. All they know is that tension is brewing at an alarming rate and unless Merit does something about it, trouble will lurk behind every corner.

While Merit is the main protagonist in which we experience the story from, Ethan Sullivan became my favorite thing about this book. This new villain has really rustled Ethan up and I think it creates a wonderful vulnerability in him. The conflict of this book is on point, creating tension where the book needed it and testing the bond between Ethan and Merit as well. Neill made the right choice with this character. DARK DEBT has rejuvenated the series, giving it spice and new life!

*ARC provided by publisher

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[Nereyda (Nick & Nereyda's Infinite Booklist) · Rating 4 out of 5]

My love for this series keeps growing and growing! I had a huge silly grin on my face the whole time I was listening to this one. I know it's hard to keep things new and interesting after 11 books, I rarely have patience for the 6 book series! But Chicagoland Vampires is my exception to the rule. I don't think I can ever get enough of Ethan and Merit and the rest of the gang. After everything (that is an understatement!) that Merit and Ethan have been through, it' so nice to see less and less drama and angst between them now. This book was just so much fun and proof that happy couples don't have to be boring couples!

Merit and Ethan are finally at a place where they can be completely open with each other. I've loved their journey, even if at times I wanted to rage-scream *cough* Hard Bitten *cough* but if they survived, then I could too. (Although, Chloe Neill, you are NOT allowed to do that to us anymore!) I loved how playful Ethan and Merit were with each other. Ethan still takes any chance he gets to tease Merit about proposing to her, while making it clear that marriage is the end game for them. He, along with the rest of the gang, love to tease Merit about her love of all things food. Ethan even had the house chef keep meals and snacks ready for Merit at all times to keep her from getting hangry. Take me now!

“Ah. you must not know about executive order two hundred eleven.”
“What’s that?”
“Basically we are required to keep sack lunches ready for you. Ethan thinks you get hangry."

Ethan finally finds out about Merit's nickname for him, Darth Sullivan and I about had a nerdgasm when he made a few Star Wars jokes:

“I am, apparently, Darth Sullivan," he said, lifting a corner of bread to stuff the tomato back in. "I understand that building things, Death Stars or otherwise, isn't my particular strength.”

But, my favorite aspect of their relationship is their dynamic. Ethan is Master of Cadogan House and is technically Merit's master, while Merit is his Sentinel which means she is responsible for his safety. This would create a weird power struggle among other couples, but Ethan and Merit have it all under control... finally. I loved how much he trusts her to keep herself safe and didn't make a big deal when it was time for her to keep him safe. They both kept each other safe. I can't wait to see what Chloe Neill has up next for them in the final two books, but I'm so excited to finally see this proposal that we've been teased so much with!

Now, a little bit on the book without giving away any spoilers. After defeating Celina (sp?) and the GP, Ethan must now face an even older enemy. The vampire who created him all those years ago, Balthazar. Balthazar is back and he wants everything that Ethan has, including Merit. As always, it takes a group effort from all the vampires, from different houses and from the shifters (Jeff, at least) and the sorcerers. I always love how Neill always manages to make all of these different characters come together and have it fit into the story so well.

My small issues were that it was a little bit slow in the beginning, but I was never bored and where the hell is Gabriel and the rest of the shifters??? Dark Debt was another great addition to this series that is one of my all-time favorites. I ship Merit and Ethan something fierce! I'll be sad when this series finally comes to an end, but at least I still have two more books to look forward to and a new series coming out later this year!

Audiobook Comments: I read the first 7 books but I've listened to the last 4 books on audiobook and I love both. I even started buying the first few books in the series on audio so that I could have the complete collection on audio too. I would like to point out that the first few books have a different narrator, Cynthia Halloway. I've already listened to book one again and while I liked her as a narrator (I've listened to her in several other audios, she's great!), after listening to Sophie Eastlake (the new narrator) she is a much better fit for Merit. I loved how she took the time to develop a different voice and tone for each character and I kind of have a crush on her Ethan voice... which is a little weird. It could just be the swoony things Ethan says, but Eastlake does a very good job with her male voices. I'll definitely have to listen to the rest of the series on audiobook too!

4.5 out of 5 stars!

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[Ivana Azap Feješ · Rating 5 out of 5]

Chicago has a reputation for good food, crappy weather, and organized crime; Chloe Neill makes a point of including the first two in practically every installment, but the third had yet to surface. DARK DEBT rocketed into the previous book’s cliff hanger with little delay while also paving the way for a new mafia plot thread that will in all likelihood become this series’ latest story arc. The secondary characters were the headliners of this novel for me with Mallory & Catcher at the head of the pack. Merit is ever so gradually becoming a ‘real’ vampire after her unorthodox transformation in SOME GIRLS BITE, and the most recent undead trait that she has to contend with is glamour.

“Not bad for a girl.” “That’s what the last guy said—right before I kicked his ass.”

[Beth · Rating 4 out of 5]

Chloe Neill’s Chicagoland Vampires Series is a must read, mark your calendars, preorder and read asap for me; so when I got my hands on Dark Debt I couldn’t wait to read it. Boy, was it a thrilling adventure to traverse.

Merit’s father calls and insists that Merit and Ethan attend a fund raising ball with a huge business mogul. Choosing to go to said ball, Merit and Ethan are quickly swept into protecting a guest at this ball from a vampire led assassination attempt.

Meanwhile, Ethan’s creator (who was thought long dead) has suddenly reappeared threatening everything Ethan holds dear…especially Merit.

Facing two threats is nothing new for Ethan and Merit but now it seems their foes have all the Chicago houses and vampires in their sites.

This time around Ethan and Merit are working closely together to save the day. I love Ethan’s character and because the newest foe is coming from Ethan’s past; we get a lot of Ethan stepping up and becoming a more active participant in the investigation…more than just his normal master role.

Neill’s transformation with her characters and sub characters development continues to amaze me. Just when you think you know them completely she adds a depth that you didn’t see coming.

Dark Debt is a power packed installment in the Chicagoland Vampire Series. With all great stories, Dark Debt left me wanting more. I am anxiously anticipating where Neill takes us on our next visit to Chicagoland.

I received this ARC copy of Dark Debt from PENGUIN GROUP Berkley, NAL / Signet Romance, DAW in exchange for a honest review. This book is set for publication March 3, 2015.

Written by: Chloe Neill
Series: Chicagoland Vampires
Sequence in Series: Book 11
Paperback: 400 pages
Publisher: NAL
Publication Date: March 3, 2015
Rating: 5 Stars
ISBN-10: 0451472322
ISBN-13: 978-0451472328
Genre: Paranormal Romance | Urban Fantasy
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Reviewed for: http://tometender.blogspot.com

[nidah05 (SleepDreamWrite) · Rating 4 out of 5]

I been keeping up with this series. So of course I was excited to find there was a new book in the series. And got to say, 11 books in and the series keeps getting more and more interesting. I like that the characters are getting some character development while at the same time they don't seem out of character.

With this one, I had taken a little longer to read it because I didn't want to finish this right away because of the wait for the next book. But at the same time, I been in a reading slump and so was feeling a little bored but kept reading.

It didn't ruin the reading experience. But once I was in the reading mood then I read where I left off.

This time around you get a familiar face from Ethan's past and of course Merit and co find there's a lot more going on with this predicament. Including one of the Houses and its past.

4 stars is what I'm giving this. And near the end there was freaking adorable. The cover is okay but I like the background though. Really good series obviously.

[Ronda · Rating 4 out of 5]

It took me two attempts to read this book, I think I went into a Merit and Ethan slump!

My second attempt, after leaving it for about 2 weeks and talking to friends who had read it, was successful and was well worth giving it another go.

First time around I felt bored and found the first few chapters difficult to read - what I wanted to keep reading for was the 'visions' of Merit and Ethan's future but I was doomed to put the book down.

I've now completed the story, and on reflection I can't understand why I found it difficult to read the first time around - the storyline was amazing (as usual), good twists and turns and a fabulous plot. I am no longer in the 'slump' and I am eagerly awaiting the next round!

[Nancy · Rating 4 out of 5]

“There is always light. The stars are always shining, even if we can't see them.”

Man, I will never get tired of this series. Never a dull moment, that's for sure.

Also, so happy to see more of a certain Master Vampire, even if I didn't get a certain Shifter!

I need the next book asap. And for a certain prophecy to be fulfilled or at least get set up, hello! Pretty please.

[JAIME LOUISE · Rating 3 out of 5]

Buddy read with wonderful Sarah and I can't believe more people didn't read it with us. Ethan, people! Darth Sullivan!

RTC.

[Tori · Rating 4 out of 5]

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Favorite Quote: The stars are always shining even if we can’t see them.

Merit and Ethan are back and their drama is as intense as ever. The past comes back to haunt Ethan when his maker, Balthazar, shows up in Chicago. As Merit and Ethan race to discover exactly what Balthazar wants, the Navarre house is experiencing its own troubles.

Morgan, the master of Navarre, is shocked to learn the previous Master left the house in massive debt to The Circle, a shadow mafia group who want a favor in return for an extension on the loans. This favor inadvertently drags Merit and Ethan into the fray when they are forced to stop an assassination attempt at ball hosted by a mysterious businessman whose end game may spell disaster for them all.

Dark Debt, the eleventh installment in Neill’s Chicagoland Vampire series, starts out with a saucy dramatic unveiling as Neill reintroduces a painful reminder from Ethan’s past. Fear, surprise, and a sense of vulnerability sets the stage. Steady pacing, and Neill’s ever present energy and humor keeps the story flowing nicely as we learn of the new challenges Merit, Ethan, and the rest of Chicago are now facing.

Ethan has survived his battle with the GP (General Presidium) and a new consortium has emerged from the ashes-the AMM (Assembly of American Masters). While this was a substantial plotline in Blood Games, it runs silently in the background here as Merit, Ethan, and their supernatural posse has bigger issues to focus on.

Balthazar, Ethan’s maker, seems to have reappeared from the dead…a cause for grave concern. Ethan ran from Balthazar when he assaulted and killed a young lady Ethan cared for. Ethan insured Balthazar would pay for his evil deeds and had since assumed he was dead. Now it seem he is alive and well and his main target is Merit.

This particular installment is heavily character driven with as Neill begins a new long reaching story arc. Per usual, an amount of the book revolves around Ethan and Merit; using the inclusion of new adversaries to showcase the strides they have made in their relationship. While there are sure to be more bumpy rides in their road to happily ever after (both are entirely too Alpha for there to not be) they have settled into a comfortable routine that shows us they are both committed and in it for the long haul. Their sexy chemistry still burns hot and bright between them. I enjoyed seeing them handle problems without one of them pushing the other away as seen repeatedly in the past.

“Are you wooing me?”

“I’ve been wooing you since the moment our eyes locked on the first floor of this house.”

The action is rather low-key, sparking at appropriate moments, as the seemingly separate issues facing the respective houses are investigated. More time is spent in this installment on theories, research, and strategies then the usual slice and dice.The mystery(s) and investigation avenues taken are interesting and strong in suspense. Various subplots push towards resolution easily though Neill leaves enough open to ensure readers will definitely want the next book. We receive some eyebrow raising clues towards the future and I for one am interested in seeing where Neill goes with them. As always, I wished for more inclusion of Gabriel Keene and his pack. The friend based chemistry between Keene and Merit is phenom and always fun to see.

Engaging secondary characters and their sustainable relationships remains a strong aspect in the overall enjoyment of this series. Neill continues to update readers on the aspects of their lives with flare and drama. Catcher and Mallory have reached a pivotal place in their relationship and I was happily shocked by the road Neill takes concerning them. Jonah and Merit are experiencing some rocky times; decisions will have to made soon. Morgan is beginning to grow up and finally seeing the big picture rather than continuing focusing on slights of the past. As always, the dialogue remains sharp and witty, keeping you laughing at some inappropriate times.

“Ah. you must not know about executive order two hundred eleven.”

“What’s that?”

“Basically we are required to keep sack lunches ready for you. Ethan thinks you get hangry.“

Dark Debt reminded me why I enjoyed this series so much. Neill has allowed her characters to grow at their own pace while keeping the storylines fresh and unique. This series remains a dark humorous Urban Fantasy/PNR with plenty of action, suspense, romance, and snark. This is not a standalone though and I do not recommend starting the series here. Convoluted; the series that builds upon itself with each new book.



Rating: B

[Jessica (a GREAT read) · Rating 5 out of 5]

I received this early copy from the publisher in exchange for an honest review, I was in no way compensated for this review.


Chloe Neill returns to Chicago and our favorite cast of vampires who call the city home with Dark Debt! Merit is rounding up to her first year as a vampire and it's been one eventual year, to say the least and it's about to get even more crazier with the return of Ethan's maker, the one he thought long past dead.

Balthasar makes his appearance early and known to Ethan and his vampires right away, and the tension is high. Ethan was sure Balthasar was dead years ago after he killed Persephone, the girl Ethan loved all those long years ago. Balthasar is back and ready to take what is his, which essentially, is everything that belongs to Ethan...including Merit.

Other problems hindering Chicago, is fellow vampire house Navarre getting mixed up with debts to the Circle, a sort of mafia to the supernaturals. Celina had racked up a lot of debt and now, the Circle is coming to collect and is demanding blood instead of money.

Caught between both problems, Merit is in over her head. Even more so when strife occurs between her and Jonah when he asks her to do something that goes against everything she holds dear to her.

Needless to say, this was one wickedly intense read! And I ate up those pages!! I love how Merit has stayed true to herself over the almost past year, she's a vampire, yes. She has grown into her role as Sentinel, yes, but she has never lost sight of her true self. The one that we saw in the beginning with Some Girls Bite when she was a newbie vamp, that Merit is still apart of her. But she's also grown. She has accept her role as Sentinel, she has accepted her relationship with Ethan, which took quite awhile to fully form, and then we had Hard Bitten, please never again Chloe!

So yes, Merit is a heroine who has grown, and she keeps growing. There are still problems that occur in her new life, and she deals with them, but she's not alone. And that's the greatest part! She has Ethan, and we'll get to the romance in a bit, but she also has her friends, Mallory, Catch, Jeff, Lindsey, Luc...the list goes on and on. Merit truly has remarkable friends and their bonds with one another is truly endearing! I love seeing such incredible friendships!

And Ethan! Ethan still makes me swoon! True, I found him pompous and an ass in the beginning. While I felt the stirrings of chemistry between him and Merit, I never felt anything genuine between them. Until some books later on! And wow! The chemistry between them is still sizzling! Ethan is definitely an alpha male vampire, but I also like how he never comes off as being overly possessive. He still lets Merit be Merit and doesn't conform her into what he desires. The two are basically perfect for one another, because Merit still continues to challenge him whenever she so desires! Their banter is still delightful as well! The jokes...and I am DYING to know his nickname for Merit that he had called her way back when, when he would discuss her with himself or another character. For he learns Mallory and Merit's old nickname of Darth Sullivan and he mentions he had a nickname for Merit, but we have yet to hear it!

The pacing to this one was pretty fast paced, in the good way! It wasn't at all rushed, and there's never a dull moment! There are plenty of laughs, a few heated moments between Merit and Ethan, and well dispersed moments of kickass action!! I loved it! Truly, this is one of my most favorite Urban Fantasy series! It's just amazing and has everything a reader could want!

If you haven't yet read the Chicagoland Vampire series, now is the time! Don't let the 11 books to date overwhelm you. True, it's a good number, but that means you get to binge read up to this one and oh my goodness, that's a blessing itself, because Hard Bitten!!! I won't tell you what that means, but other readers of the series will know and agree, that was a tough ending to handle and wait for the next one!

The Chicagoland Vampires is the perfect series for Urban Fantasy readers because of its paranormal element, the action, the humor, romance, suspense and of course the snark, which is its own blend of humor entirely!


Overall Rating 5/5 stars


Dark Debt releases March 3, 2015

[Jaime Arkin · Rating 4 out of 5]

I love the Chicagoland Vampires. I love Ethan (duh), I especially love Merit, and I love this amazing world that Neil has created over the years. And even 11 books into the series I’m still always looking forward excitedly for the next one coming!

It’s hard after 11 books not to find yourself repeating yourself… The first things I find myself talking about is the chemistry between the characters, the amazing friendships within the pages, the mystery and suspense in every installment, but I think I especially love the fact that the Chicago that Neil includes here is a character in its own right.

In Dark Debt, Ethan’s past once again comes back to haunt his present. As the summary says “A vampire never gets old. But neither do his enemies.” And that couldn’t be more true. When this figure from his past starts threatening the house, and the Chicago vampires, and more specifically Merit, Ethan’s is determined to do what he must to keep her safe.

Chicago has long been known for its organized crime, and this time Neil weaves it into the story in a way that has me excited to see where she takes it.
So let’s talk Ethan, because I have a serious crush on this vampire you guys. He and Merit have one of my favorite paranormal relationships around. Their banter is some of the best written…

"I like to think I'm more than the sum of my training."

"You are," Luc said. "There's at least some hot beef or deep dish in there."
"I am also more than Chicago foodstuffs."

Ethan grinned at Luc. "Pumas? Diet Coke? Smart-assery?"

Luc snapped his fingers, pointed at Ethan. "Yes. And, like, three percent medieval literature."

"You're both hilarious. Really and truly. Comedy geniuses."

Ethan totally knows how to bring the swoons…

I looked up at him. "Are you wooing me?"

"I've been wooing you since the moment our eyes locked on the first floor of this house."

He’s so protective of her…

There was nothing equivocal in his gaze, in the steadiness of his green eyes. "He was my nightmare, Merit. You are my miracle. He will not touch you again. Yes?"

And yet he completely trusts her to take care of him and the other vampires as the house Sentinel.

Now, while this is paranormal romance, don’t get all excited, Neil keeps the naughty stuff on the tame side, but I have to say that I love the evolution of Merit & Ethan’s relationship… it’s never smooth sailing for them, which is so true to real life, but no matter what lands in their way, they always know where they stand with each other and they aren’t prepared to ever give up on each other and I think that might be what I love most.

I know this series is coming to an end… this makes me horribly sad, but I am still very much excited to see what the next in the series brings. If you haven’t started this series and you’re looking for something in the paranormal genre to sink your teeth into (hahah I couldn’t resist) then The Chicagoland Vampires are a must read- they’re at the top of my paranormal list and they should be on yours too!

Thank you to the publisher for an advanced copy in exchange for my honest thoughts.