Beach Climb

by Luke King

JoJo’s just turned eighteen. He meets a group of rock climbers at the beach and has a fall. Before he knows it, he’s back at this guy Laurie’s place, but not only is Laurie gay, he’s the owner of a bondage dungeon.

JoJo, a straight, Christian boy from the South, is bewildered.

Within minutes he’s agreed to something, somehow, and he’s swinging from chains, bound and gagged. But the fun doesn’t really start until Laurie turns his muscle on the junk between JoJo’s legs.

18+ Strictly adults only. Contains graphic descriptions of sadomasochistic sexual fetishes including bondage, spanking and ball busting.

Genres: Erotica, M M Romance

35 pages, ebook

First published July 5, 2014

Reviews

[Smith Barney · Rating 3 out of 5]

My cohesive thought processing necessary for assembling a review ceased to exist at the acute onset of vivid imagery of perspiring masculine man muscles, encased in straps, ropes, clips, and sweat..



Sorry..I couldn't be of more help.

[Steelwhisper · Rating 1 out of 5]

Why do people insist on calling non-con and dub-con BDSM?

The qualifier for BDSM is SSC/RACK, meaning at the very least you need full and valid consent. "Implied" consent or "didn't protest when I did it" are not consent, they actually represent a slippery slope towards rape. So don't try to sell it as BDSM to me or unsuspecting laypeople. Call it what it is.

Else--I definitely liked Todd Young better when he was staying away from the current BDSM craze. The BDSM-fail here completely trumped any enjoyment I might have had else.

[LenaRibka · Rating 4 out of 5]

MORE PLEASE, TODD LUKE!!!

I so not in BDSM but I am so in this one!





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BTW, why Luke? Because of BDSM or because of mamma? :-)

[Marte - Thunderella · Rating 1 out of 5]

* 1 DNF star *

Aw, gawd.
Soo, you read the blurb right?
Jojo's just turned 18 and very inexperienced with anything sexual, because:

"It was his Christian upbringing, he knew. Too many times he’d been told not to touch himself. And to keep his virginity intact."
(don't even get me started on my opinions on that quote...)

As usual(?) it's a bit weird, this writing... (I've read Naked before this alright).

What made me stop and DNF at 66% was this:

(I put the quote in a spoiler, but it's already mentioned in the blurb that "Within minutes he’s agreed to something, somehow, and he’s swinging from chains, bound and gagged." So the quote is from when this happens, so it's not really a spoiler-spoiler, IYKWIM...)


JoJo opened his mouth and nodded, understanding, or he thought so, but a few minutes later he was suspended by the back of the harness, hanging from his hips, but unable to help his arms and legs looping downward.(...)
It was only as he was hoisted into the air that he realized he was helpless.
Laurie could do anything to him, anything at all, and as JoJo realized this a rush of sexual excitement rocked his body. He shuddered. It was like nothing he’d ever felt before. He had no control whatsoever, and he had, without quite realizing it, handed himself to  Laurie on a plate. He was in a strange house, somewhere deep in the woods, with a guy he didn't know. His wrists and feet were bound; he was suspended from the ceiling, and he was totally helpless. The fear of it hit him, and a burst of pee leapt out of his cock.
“You need to pee?”
He made a sound. It wasn't quite a no and it wasn't quite a yes and wouldn't have been comprehensible even if he hadn't been gagged. It was a raw sound of protest. Laurie misinterpreted it, obviously, because a moment later he was threading JoJo’s penis into a glass bottle.
JoJo peed.

"Want" another?

The tip of his dick kissed pee as the bottle continued to fill, and soon his cock was dangling in warm, lemon colored (though he was certain it wasn't citrus) liquid. Laurie pressed forward with a forceful insistence and the tip of his tongue slipped into JoJo’s hole.
Now he felt as though his brain were being fried. He was wincing, gritting his teeth, trying to fold his knees inwards, and at the same time growing an erection. It began to plug the neck of the bottle as it swelled, as he continued to piss. He didn't seem to be able to stop now. The pressure on the bottle grew, and along with the weight of it and Laurie’s hand, it slipped down his shaft and over his head, finally leaving it with a loud pop.
Laurie drew it away. “Fuck, you really needed to go,” he said, appearing at JoJo’s side. There was a sink in the corner and he walked toward it.


NO!
*gag*

There is so much wrong with this, and it really made me uncomfortable. I like my BDSM to be "safe, sane and consensual". This was way off base.

Fuck it being free.

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[Joan · Rating 1 out of 5]

Oh Dear. I had such hopes for this, but the writing was stilted and jerky, the characters two-dimensional and ... Contains graphic descriptions of sadomasochistic sexual fetishes including bondage, spanking and ball busting ??? Sorry. I found it dull, bland and more off-putting than anything else.

[Britta ★ Nachteule ★ · Rating 4 out of 5]

Vacation-Countdown-Shorty #10/19!

DNF at 60%!

This wasn't fun.
The MC is dumb and unlikeable.
This Laurie guy gives me the creeps.
And over all it felt mew (meh + ew = mew) for me.

Nothing for my mom's daughter!


Still it get 1.5 stars.
I've read worse and I can imagine out there are people who like that kind of stuff!

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Edit October 27th

Usually when I DNF a book, I close it and don't look back.
Usually I don't brood about it anymore.
Usually... but not this time!

So what did I do, when I had some time to kill? I took a deep breath and finished this shorty.

Maybe I needed the step back. (Or maybe I'm just a book-masochist. But that I'll deny until my very last breath!)

Something about Luke King's / Todd Young's kind of writing caught me and I can't pinpoint what it was. (Maybe just my fazination about its weirdness? Who knows? Not me!)

And suddenly everything clicked in place for me!

Don't get me wrong!
JoJo still is dumb, naive and I still don't like him.
And Laurie... he keeps on giving me the creeps.

But now I came to think Luke King / Todd Young is either completely nuts or a fucking genius!

I don't know, if I'll read anything else by him. For now, his books stay in my don-t-think-i-could-stand-it shelf!

But I'll raise my rating up to 3.5 stars (rounded up)!


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My Vacation Countdown so far:

#1 U.S. Male ---> My Review + U.S. Male - Inside the Box ---> My Review
#2 Loser Takes All -----> My Review
#3 Test of Endurance -----> My Review
#4 When You Were Pixels -----> My Review
#5 Sand and Ruin and Gold -----> My Review
#6 Welcome to the Dark Side -----> My Review
Special Weird Wednesday Edition Mounted by a Monster: Werepuffer -----> My Review
#7 Quid Pro Quo -----> My Review
#8 Gaydar -----> My Review
#9 Geeking Out on 11C -----> My Review
#10 Beach Climb
#11 Smug the Magic Dragon -----> My Review
#12 The Lonely Drop -----> My Review
#13 The Princess & the Penis -----> My Review
Special Weird Wednesday Edition #2 Captured by Cavemen -----> My Review
#14 One of Those Days -----> My Review
#15 Make Her Howl -----> My Review
#16 (Helloween!) Ed & Fred Are... Dead -----> My Review
#17 Boo! -----> My Review
#18 Karma Bites -----> My Review
#19 Straight Frat, Gay College Jock Sex -----> My Review

[Mel]

For a first part in a new series this was great, but I'd rather read the whole story at once, I think. Because only Todd Young can give you the Todd Young feeling, and therefore you must read till the end.

We have a typical Todd Young protagonist, JoJo. He just turned 18, obviously has issues, has a thing for exhibitionism, and has hot, weird sex with a all-time smiling, good looking stranger.
To get a better insight, we need to know and read more, and I'm sure, judging by Todd's other books, it will be interesting.

I love Todd's writing style. It's compelling, detailed, out of this world, hot, fascinating, captivating, and nuts :-) I'm sure I could find more suitable words...

But, there were quite a lot of words at the wrong place in the sentence. I would offer to proof-read, Todd. Although, since I am no native speaker, you better find someone else more suitable to get this cleaned up.

What we learn in this story, as a life lesson I mean, is that, if you put oil, rock climbing and a too tight speedo together, you get a stranger's fingers up your ass, come on his belly immediately, and go home with him to find yourself suspended and thoroughly fucked (and spanked). Sounds nuts to you? Well it is, but as always there is a lot more to this book...

Todd writes gay fiction, not romance. So if you're looking for some lovey-dovey tale with a traditional love relationship between two amazing and adorable MCs, this is not it. But if you're in the mood to get sucked into something special and intriguing, you just found it.

P.s.: I love the cover!

[Todd Young · Rating 1 out of 5]

Pathetic, really.

And the author's a faggot.

[Ann · Rating 2 out of 5]

A bit twisted and off-kilter, just as what should be expected from this author.

The fuckedupedness sticks with you and makes you squinchy, so kudos for that. It's an icky feeling yet I keep going back for more.

[lesley dawn wallace · Rating 4 out of 5]

Beach climb

Beach climb is a good but different kind of read it's a good read just be prepared for what's coming