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Derek Alexander is a retired Marine, ex-cop, and the top investigator in his field. Melissa Jones is a small-town girl trying to escape her troubled past.

When the two intersect in a bar in Arizona, their sexual chemistry is off the charts. But what is revealed during their "one week stand" only complicates matters.

Because she'll do everything in her power to get away from the past, but he'll do everything he can to hold her.

Adult Contemporary Romance: Due to strong language and sexual content, this book is not intended for readers under the age of 18. (M/F)

198 pages, ebook

First published October 7, 2013

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January 9, 2021
4 Done Right Stars
* * * * Spoiler Free-FREE, The ONE That Started It ALL!!
It must take a real leap of faith to put ideas down... work on it with everything you've got... and then hit the publish button...Yes, there is a lot more than just a few steps in publishing a book, but you get the picture... you need balls of steel to do it. What is so exciting is when everything can come together and a new author is on her way...

Well, I am coming to the table a little late, so it is already a proven fact Tia Louise has the goods and has delivered them repeatedly after this first entry. I can only imagine the thrill she had seen this new series take off.


She put together an updated damsel in distress, who had the wherewithal to fight her own battles, and have her meet with the strong, charming, and breathtaking guy. They are at once attracted and fall into an agreed limited fling...except the more, they connect... the more they connect.
Time is up; both want more but circumstances prohibit either of them following it up.

She is in the process of saving herself from a loveless marriage; she had filed for divorce before her trip away. The soon to be ex is a horror walking... wealthy, powerful, overly possessive... and seems to be not accepting her walking away.

This tale proceeds with twists turns, and always lots of heart. The story is fully formed... you get the passion and heat which leaps of the page; then there are complete secondary characters and plot interests. In my opinion, this was an excellent introduction to the mind of Tia Louise and her series. I cannot wait to meet all the other characters playing in her mind...I know they will have interesting stories to tell.

Well, Since writing this review, Ms. Louise has kept me busy. Here is the entire series and it is so worth your time, enjoy!

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July 8, 2020
3.5 Stars!
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Melissa is getting away for the week. She’s had a rough year and she’s going through some big changes. She needs some time to relax, escape from her life for just a little while. So she’s at the spa with her best friend. Her first night there, she meets a man at the bar. He’s not her normal type, big, bearded and gorgeous, but he wants her. He pursues her. This isn’t normal behavior for her, but she goes for it. She has nothing to lose. After the most incredible sex of her life, the guy from the bar, Derek, makes her a proposition. She knows it’s not the greatest idea, but she can’t refuse.
A one-night stand was one thing, but a one-week stand? With him? After that? It felt like a recipe for disaster.

Their week together is pure bliss. There is some serious sexy time in this book! If you’re looking for a steamy read, you won’t be disappointed! It’s not just the hot sex between the two, Melissa and Derek both have strong feelings for one another.

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“What I would give you. If you hadn’t already stolen it.”

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Due to the circumstances in Melissa’s life, it can’t go any further. At least not right now. Melissa’s life is full of secrets at the moment. She needs a little time to get herself together, then maybe she and Derek can have a chance. As Melissa starts to sort everything out, she finds that she isn’t the only one with secrets. Derek has a few of his own. What she learns has the potential to change everything between them.


I found One to Hold to be a nice debut novel. It was easy to read, sexy, short and sweet. It had just enough angst and drama to keep it interesting. It was a little on the short side, so at times things felt a little rushed to me. If you’re looking for a hot and quick standalone with a sweet hea, pick this one up! 


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1,400 reviews2 followers
December 6, 2013



I must say I really liked this one. A debut novel from this author. I saw the blurb for it a while back and marked it down to be read. It was fast paced, sex scenes were hot and both characters likeable

I could pretend to be free


Derek and Melissa meet at a Spa in Arizona. What I wouldn't give for a week in a place like that with maybe a bit of Derek thrown in. Doubt Himself would be too happy about it.


I really liked the two main characters. No bullshiting about, they knew what they wanted and went for it ... eventually
The seemingly endless kiss he pressed soft lips lingering against mine, tongue lightly touching my tongue, sealed it for me. He was everything I wanted. He was safe with me. I felt safe with him, and I wanted him to hold me forever so badly.

There was a bit of drama. I must admit I did see the “twist” coming but that did not take away from the book.


WHAT I WOULD GIVE YOU. IF YOU HADN’T ALREADY STOLEN IT

Look forward to more from this talented author
I was not one he could hold



I hold her close, resting my cheek on her skin, loving her

Loved her best friend, who dropped everything for her when she needed her. Look forward to her story

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December 7, 2016
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One to Hold is my debut adult romance, and I had so much fun writing it. I didn't realize going in how much I'd fall in love with these characters, and I can't wait to share Derek & Melissa's story with you! I think they're both really cool. <3

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563 reviews1,573 followers
September 10, 2016
THREE AND A HALF HOLD ME STARS.

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One likeable, short, sexy and emotional story with a broken heroine and a deliciously tempting hero. This book has mystery and shock reveals written all over it and enough steam to make any dirty romance addict smile. Here are my book thoughts ...

What's it all about?
One chance encounter in a bar in Arizona leads broken hearted Melissa Jones to an experience with a stranger than she never wants to forget. Ex marine Derek Alexander is drawn Melissa, their chemistry and attraction means that it's inevitable that they will end up in each other's arms. But when a week of lust starts to feel like it may become something more Melissa and Derek have to decide if overcoming the secrets and troubles of their pasts is worth it to give away their hearts.

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What did I like?
This author did not waste any time messing about, her inner erotic writing goddess must have been dying to get out because almost from page one I was confronted with steamy interactions, but I'm happy to report that Tia Louise has a talent for the naughtiest of scenes so there's no complaint here. I also appreciated that this book was not predictable at all, in fact this author has created a fabulously original plot. There was mystery and excitement and I believed the connection between Melissa and Derek. This was a perfectly well enough written and put together novel with likeable enough characters and steamy bedroom action.

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Why not five?
The writing style was solid it had some dialogue that I thought was out and out five star, but with that being said I needed more. My biggest letdown was that I didn't feel like I connected with the characters as much as I would have liked. It all felt too rushed as if the whole book and character development was in fast forward. The love was instant and for such a short book there was plenty of mystery and unanswered questions that felt unnecessary to begin with but as the book continued I appreciated the authors plot. I'm not sure whether I feel like celebrating with the author for putting so much content in her novel or to be disappointed that she crammed so much into a 200 plus page book. That all being said Tia Louise is definitely an author that I'd return to in the future. Overall there was plenty to like but not enough to love to make it a five star.

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Final thoughts ...
Those that want a well written, steamy, quick novel fix, may well find themselves in love with this book. I'm more than just a little interested to see what this author will do in the future. Go grab it readers, enjoy ... Kisses.

*A copy of this book was generously gifted directly from the author, Tia Louise in exchange for an honest review.*
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BLURB:
Derek Alexander is a retired Marine, ex-cop, and the top investigator in his field. Melissa Jones is a small-town girl trying to escape her troubled past.

When the two intersect in a bar in Arizona, their sexual chemistry is off the charts. But what is revealed during their "one week stand" only complicates matters.

Because she'll do everything in her power to get away from the past, but he'll do everything he can to hold her.


A STAND-ALONE, ONE TO HOLD NOVEL. Adult Contemporary Romance: Due to strong language and sexual content, this book is not intended for readers under the age of 18. (M/F)

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561 reviews900 followers
November 10, 2014
One Week can change everything...
This was not me. I did not fantasize about hooking up with strange men in bars. And a cocky alpha who studied me like a frontier landscape he was ready to conquer had never been my type. He probably wanted to tie me up or handcuff me to something. A delicious shiver passed through me at the thought.
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One Bar.
One Gorgeous Man.
One Miserable Woman.
One Week.
Two secrets.

Something which seems to fleeting can have lasting effects...

Melissa Jones
I barely knew him, and my situation hadn't changed. I was not available in any way. Well, except in the way that led to flaming-hot fucks in five-star bathrooms. It was like we were animals or something.
After so much heartache and disappointment, Mel is finally taking charge of her life. Sort of, she did let her best friend drag her to a spa week all the way out in Arizona after all...

The desert heat is cleansing, and Melissa finds she can finally relax in the anonymity of being so far away from her miserable life in Baltimore.

As soon as Melissa & Elaine arrive at the Scottsdale Arizona spa, they hit the bar. While Elaine drags herself up to the room to sleep after a full day of travel, Melissa decides to stay behind and order another drink.

That decision will change everything.

In a scene straight out of some soft-focused romance movie, Melissa meets the eyes of a stranger across the bar. She's transfixed. He might be the most handsome man she's ever seen. And he walks straight past all the perky twenty-somethings in the crowded bar and heads straight for her.

Derek Alexander
Everything in me was falling in love with Derek, but that didn't change a single fact about my situation. About my unavailability. Add to that, he hadn't said anything to indicate he wanted more than our original week. It felt like he might want more, every time we were together I was sure his feelings were growing as intensely as mine, but he hadn't said anything to confirm it.
No man has ever elicited the kind reaction Melissa experiences with this handsome stranger.

He's intense and focused entirely on her. History has taught her to keep away from such imposing men, but there's something about Derek that makes her feel safe.

These two set off on a whirlwind one-week stand.
As the days pass, they grow closer together emotionally but they're both holding back huge secrets...

I'd say that about half the book chronicles their one-week stand and the latter half details the fallout of their affair... Because one week with the right person can have a lasting effect...

I'll admit, I was worried at first - Man and woman meet in a bar, new beginnings, dark secrets, hidden pasts, etc... It was dangerously close to being every other modern romance on the planet right now.... Then things really took off, and I was glad to be on the ride!

This was a fabulous read.
This book was flawlessly written and held my attention from beginning to end.
It was emotional without being oppressively angsty.
Sinfully sexy without sacrificing story-line.

I wasn't shocked by the reveal of Melissa's secret. Quite frankly, I was more than a little perturbed about a particular decision she made, but that has more to do with my personal set of morals, and less to do with this fictional situation...

I can't say much more without getting spoiler-y, so I'll just say you should read it! Besides, it's a freebie on Amazon, so go scoop it up! Enjoy!
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2,597 reviews5,390 followers
December 5, 2013
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”I was just never the girl men sought out from across a room crowded with other options. Until last night…

One to Hold is a well done debut novel by Miss Tia Louise. The story is a standalone (yeah, hard to come by these days) and it was really well paced, well written, steamy and downright exciting.

Melissa is taking a break from it all with her best friend, Elaine. A reader gets the impression that things at home aren’t going well and something major had occurred prior. Not until the story progresses do we find out what she left behind for these couple of days of escape. Melissa is a very likable character, a bit on the sad side at first but that only leads a reader wondering what is waiting at home for her. While taking in the atmosphere at a bar in her hotel, she notices a gorgeous guy watching her and once he approaches things get hot and steamy real quick!

Derek Alexander is the one night stand and he was sexy and kind a reader will fall for him right along with Melissa. Derek is a cop/marine/businessman who is attending a banker’s convention. Melissa’s thoughts the next day keep going back to their time together. When coincidence lands these two face to face this couple decides to enjoy each other’s company for the duration of their stay.

Tia Louise does a fantastic job writing some pretty hot sex scenes along with developing the feelings that both characters were feeling for one another.

”If things were different,” I said. “I’d tell you I love you right now.”

Sadly, their time is up and it’s time for Melissa to go back to real life.

”We both have lives back home," he continued, "and maybe you can't share your life right now. But I'd take your call anytime."

Once Melissa returns home, this story becomes completely engrossing as she finds out that she isn’t the only one with secrets.

Overall, this was a quick good read which had me guessing throughout the story and hoping for a big hea. Did I get one? YEP!

”Who knew, perhaps it was possible the road to anywhere could turn into a road to somewhere. For both of us.

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2,434 reviews5,098 followers
February 7, 2014
This is my first book from Tia Louise and I can say that I really like her writing!!!
One To Hold is a quick, fun and hot read!! I was interested from the beginning till the end. Derek and Melissa were perfect together.I like both of them!!

The story begins with Melissa who is at a resort with her best friend Elaine.Melissa is trying to figure out how to get out of her previous life..Now is her oportunity to spend a week relaxing and receiving spa treatments.One night she ends up meeting the mysterious,handsome Derek Alexander...

The chemistry between them from the beginning is full of passion...

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I like Derek from the beginning!!He is really gentleman!!He is a hot ex-marine, ex-cop.He knows the minute he sets his eyes on Melissa that she is sad and he wants to make her happy.This is something new for him..He hasn't had these feelings for years and didn't expect to feel this feelings again..I like the way he treats Melissa!
The chemistry between Melissa and Derek is amazing,electrifying and truly heartfelt.The sex scenes where hot and sweet at the same time!

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Melissa and Derek have a glorious week together, and it's obvious they both want to continue to explore whatever they have with each other. But Melissa is definitely running from something and Derek seems to have secrets..And believe me when I learn what Derek is holding back I was shocked!!!

Can they manage to be together??
Can Melissa run away from her problems?

This is a great journey!I really enjoyed it!!
I recommend it to anyone who love romance with suspense!!

A copy of One to Hold was generously provided to be by the author in exchange for an honest review
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1,275 reviews1,570 followers
June 2, 2014
4.5 Stars

Every once in awhile, I read a book that instantly, from page one, settles around me as if it was written just for me. That's what I felt like with One to Hold.
I could really connect to this heroine. I felt like she was me. Not necessarily in the circumstances that her life has brought her to, but her mannerisms, her way of thinking, and her insecurities. It is so hard for me to appreciate book heroines, and it was a relief to get this immediate sense of camaraderie with Melissa.

Another selling point for me was that Derek was not the typical man whore. Yes, there was that instant connection that he felt toward Melissa, but it's not as if he made consistent overtures and had a lot of clandestine balcony hookups with lots of women. I loved that it was only Melissa that drew him in. It must be that fairy tale lover in me...

"You're amazing. And you let me have you."

The opening scene is at a bar, where Melissa is sitting alone. She's lonely but not looking for someone to appease her loneliness. Melissa and her friend came for a spa week in order to let Melissa escape from her life for awhile, to regroup and decide what to do with the rest of her existence. As she's watching the young, hot bodied dancers, she feels separated from those people, the weight of her choices and her age making her feel so different. And when the gorgeous man from across the bar zeroes in on her, she's flustered and unsure of herself, but not to the point of flight and not because she's ditzy or stupid. She's just never really been the kind of woman to spark such intensity from a man. Still, she's not so shocked that she can't take full advantage of her week without rules.

Derek:

Melissa:


This was sexy but not so over the top that I'd consider it smutty erotica. There was so much emotion coming from both Derek and Melissa, and it was tangible from the start. I felt like they both sort of bewildered each other. Which was so endearing, to get a hero that isn't fully confident of himself. And yet he's also extremely competent and fairly alpha. I loved that. I really just loved them both.

"His eyes closed and he lowered his forehead to mine, exhaling the words. "What have I done?"
My hands clasped over my aching heart. "What have you done?" I managed to say."


EPIC SWOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Why not five solid stars? Because the ending jumped up out of nowhere and surprised me. I felt like a lot more was needed. Apparently, Derek and Melissa get a whole 'nuther book! Yay!

Copy provided by the author for review Often, I ignore review requests because I simply don't have the time to read them all. I'm so, so, SO glad that Tia offered a second time and that I wasn't too stubborn to accept. She must have known I'd love it :)


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1,093 reviews1,066 followers
February 6, 2014
4 stars
He’d survive without his heart. He had mine to use in its place.



A week of pampering with her best friend Elaine is just what Melissa needed to come back to the life of the living, after a year of wallowing she is finally putting things in motion to get her life back. Although she is jaded she promises Elaine to let her hair down and have some fun, she meets a tall dark and handsome stranger at the bar and after a couple drinks and some flirty comments, they enjoy a night of passion. No last names, no room numbers shared and no promises of tomorrow. But Derek wants more, one-week to be exact, one-week of pleasure instead of just one night, but that is totally outside Mel’s usual MO.
“You’re not safe,” I whispered.

“And you’re not sweet.”



After hiding out the day after the best sex of her life, Elaine sets her up on a couples date with Derek and his associate. Derek happens to be the one of the leaders in online investigations, ex-Marine and a former cop. Just being around the man, makes her feel things she shouldn’t be feeling and she runs away so she doesn’t risk jumping him at the table. Luckily for he follows and leads to some hot bathroom action, opening the door to their one-week arrangement. Derek doesn’t pry, but he seems to see right through her and some crazy reason he still wants her, broken and all. With him she feels protected, cherished and worshiped, which makes her fall harder for him. It’s stupid, one-week and she’s falling harder than she ever has, but she can’t promise him anything more until she is back on her feet.
“If things were different,” I said. “I’d tell you I love you right now.”

Back to reality things she finds the strength in that one week with Derek to face the monster that refuses to go away. But reality has a funny way of making things clearer and some truths are too much to bear.

One to Hold was a sweet-n-steamy semi-insta-love book. It’s crazy how some books you read and it feels like the characters have known each other longer then they really have, which made it easier for me to accept the insta part of the book. It was sad because you knew they only had the one-week, I wanted him with her while she dealt with all her shit, but he knew it was something she had to deal with it on her own. I honestly enjoyed the read, it had a little bit of everything and flowed quite well. There was one part thought I wanted more of an answer to, but that’s for my own curiosity, this is fiction after all. Looking forward to Elaine’s book!
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632 reviews2,970 followers
February 20, 2014
3 stars

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Melissa Jones is at a spa with her best friend Elaine and getting some relaxing done. It’s hinted that she’s had a pretty tough life so far and is using this one-week vacation to recharge. On the first night there, she meets the hottest guy she’s ever seen and she’s flattered that he gives her the time of day out of all the gorgeous women in the bar. He’s different from the usual type she goes for, but YOLO right? She has the best sex in her life that night and after they make a mutual agreement to meet again, so begins her one-week stand with Derek, the guy from the bar.

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Derek Alexander is top in his field: ex-Marine, ex-cop, and a top-notch investigator. He sees Melissa in the bar and both give into their desires that night, and continue to see each other for the entire time Melissa is staying at the spa. These two are sexy, fun, and HOT together, but in a week’s worth, both are reluctant to let each other go. They slowly start to reveal little details about themselves and learn more about one another. When the week’s time is up, both reluctantly part ways, knowing their feelings for each other run deeper than just sex.

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Overall, I enjoyed it! There was this twist I never saw coming and got my jaw to drop, and I liked how suspenseful the plot got, but there were definite letdowns that made this book more of a “meh” read. Perhaps the biggest one is how fast their feelings developed. I absolutely loathe insta-love and though it was more of insta-lust, they knew they were in love with each other by the end of that week. To me, it’s extremely unbelievable, especially since they spent 99% of that time sexing it up in the bed, in the pool, against the wall, etc…For a very short book, there was a LOT packed into the story and I don’t know whether or not that’s something to commend the author for or if it should have been more elaborately detailed and explained in more pages.

To sum it up in one sentence: I was entertained but the story is nothing extraordinary. If you’re looking for a fast paced book with minimal angst and loads of sexy times, then this is your book/series!

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814 reviews625 followers
September 27, 2013
4.5 Week Long Stand Stars

For once, I wanted to forget last year even happened and be somebody else. I was out of town, in the desert, in a bar being hit on by a gorgeous stranger. Fate was giving me my chance.

And what a hot as hell chance it is! Melissa Jones is spending some much needed time with her bff at a posh spa in the middle of the Arizona desert. To say her life’s turned to utter shit in the past year would be an understatement. With everything in her life turned upside down, a little desert distraction is just what she needs. When gorgeous and intense Derek Alexander approaches her in the bar of her hotel and offers her the greatest distraction of all, Melissa decides to take the risk and allows Derek to make her forget the problems awaiting her at home.

I’d never done anything like this in my life, and I was at a total loss- what now? Did we shake hands and walk away? We’d already thanked each other, another thing I’d never done- thanked a man for sex. Of course, this guy had completely earned it.

What starts off as a one night stand quickly turns into something more for both Melissa and Derek. They both agree to not crossing the line and getting too personal, but by the end of the week both know they’re falling and falling hard! What comes after the two part ways leads to some twists and turns I never saw coming.

There are so many things to love about Tia Louise’s debut novel One to Hold. This is an adult novel for adult readers and the content of the book reflects that. Both Melissa and Derek know who they are and after reading what seems like too many NA novels lately, that’s something I can appreciate. The writing is never clunky or awkward and managed to flow from one point to the next beautifully. The sex scenes were erotically done and plentiful but never overwhelmed the story and, given the length of the story itself, that’s something that could’ve easily occurred.

The only issue I have is with the length of the story. I want more. I would’ve loved a little more book between the time when Derek and Melissa left the spa to the “I never saw that coming” revelations to the eventual HEA. Especially between revelation time and HEA time, but the length of the story in no way took away from my overall enjoyment.

When I first started One to Hold I had no idea what to expect. I’m so glad I went into the experience with an open mind because I really enjoyed it. I can’t wait to see what Tia Louise has in store for us in the future.


ARC provided by Author Tia Louise in exchange for an honest review
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896 reviews2,248 followers
April 1, 2014
3 Holding Stars.

Melissa is trying to get rid of her life for a week, she just wants a week where she can forget everything that she’s leaving behind. She and Elaine, her best-friend, go to a spa hotel on the middle of nowhere to relax and have some kind of fun.
One night she meets Derek at the hotel bar and everything changes. She starts to have feelings that she knows she can’t have, because her past makes her impossible to be hold by him.

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Feelings get stronger than they ever expected, and in the end of a perfect week they both know they will never be the same anymore.
But can they hold onto each other when their secrets threaten to shatter everything?

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Rating: 3 Stars.
Storyline: Sweet. There was some nice twists but in overall it just seemed a little unrealistic and everything happened so fast that felt forced. I mean, how can you be completely in love with one person after a FEW DAYS, especially when you know almost nothing about the other person??!
But kudos for the cover, it’s beautiful! : )
Writing Style: First person, female POV. It was very well written, but there was moments where the dialogue was a little corny and felt slightly unreal.
Character Development: Both Derek and Melissa were likeable but nothing extraordinaire. The supportive characters were just “meh”.
Steam: Hot.
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Profile Image for *J* Too Many Books Too Little Time.
1,921 reviews3,718 followers
September 20, 2013
4--ONE WEEK STAND--Stars!!

I thought this was a great debut from author Tia Louise. The book was a bit on the short side so there wasn't as much character and story development as I would prefer but overall I really enjoyed the story.

It was different then the typical NA/MA storyline that we see so often. And let's face it, you had me at the Warning!

WARNING: Mature themes, strong language and sexual content. Recommended for adult readers (18+) only!

And it definitely didn't disappoint in that department.



The story begins with Melissa and her friend Elaine having a spa getaway in Arizona. It's obvious Melissa has experienced something in her past that she is trying to overcome.

Her first night there she meets Derek in the bar. He approaches her and bada bing bada boom things get hot and heavy out on the hotel patio. They're both there for the week and agree to a one-week stand, planning to meet each evening at the same place in the bar.



After the first night, Melissa questions her availability due to her past and doesn't show up at the bar the first night. But she's bound to run in to Derek again sooner or later right? Turns out it's sooner....Elaine hooks up with Derek's business partner Patrick and Derek and Melissa are back in business.

And by business I mean...."business" in the restroom--which was totally HOT by the way, "business" in his bed, "business" in her bed. All kinds of yummy HOT "business".



The week comes to an end, with both Derek and Melissa having strong feelings for each other. But until Melissa can move on from her past she can't even think about being with Derek. She still holds out hope they one day they can meet up again.

Melissa returns home....and it turns out Melissa is a . And her soon to be



Yeah, you suck!!!

Melissa discovers that Derek was been keeping a few secrets of his own--NOT GOOD Derek.



Can Melissa move on from her past and have a life with Derek? Will she be able to forgive Derek for not telling her his secrets??

Overall, I really enjoyed this read. It was a standalone which was a plus. I would definitely read more from this author in the future.

*ARC, courtesy of the author Tia Louise, in exchange for an honest review.*

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1,044 reviews966 followers
September 21, 2013
AN AWESOME DEBUT NOVEL!!


Yep, I really liked this one!! Super HOT, AMAZING chemistry, and a really great story line...

Melissa is at a spa resort in the desert with her besti for a week of relaxation, pampering, and escaping some shitty problems at home.. She's in serious need of break from her life, if only for a short while....


Derek, at the same resort for a conference with his business partner but hiding something...He's tall and strong and oh so sexy.....


When Derek and Melissa meet, she's at the bar at the spa just sipping her drink not wanting to be bothered....when their eyes meet across the bar.. ZING! Insta chemistry!! Yea..this happens a lot in our book escapes from reality but I don't mine.. I like the whole Zing! thing :)) ANYWAY..... you know it's not going to be long before Mel is givin it up even though she is totally not wanting to be with anyone right now...



Let me tell you that Derek is COMPLETELY IRRESISTABLE!! This man is fine fine fine and very VERY talented..They were scorching HOT!! The chemistry these two had was just crazy.. yummylicious crazy hot.


I lay my head back against the wall and let go, savoring the sensation. I was weightless in his arms. He lifted me up and down against him in perfect rhythm, and the tightness in my belly grew stronger. Stronger. More high-pitched whimpers came from me, now joined by his low groans. Every muscle in my body tightened, and then… exploded. He bucked me hard as I cried out loud. My legs shuddered with the intensity of my orgasm.


“Yes,” I barely spoke, and he dropped to his knees. He gathered the thin fabric of my dress, shoving it up to my waist as he caught the side of my thong with his thumb. Large, strong hands gripped my inner thighs, opening them, and his nose touched the crease in my leg as his tongue explored my now-wet folds. A whimper trembled from my throat. It was the exact fantasy I’d had in the bar, and he pulled back, pressing his mouth against my thigh.


Yep, there was LOTS of sexy times but they didn't over shadow the story, they only added to it. Since Derek and Melissa only had a week together, it was almost like desperation that they knew it was coming to and end... Mel was torn between wanting to continue things with Derek later once she got all her shit sorted at home but afraid to continue at the same time..

Once they part.. we learn that they are both keeping secrets. Secrets that could possibly sever any chance of them being together again...

One of the things I loved about this story is it was an adult story!! They weren't in college, no one was a virgin, etc. They were both grown ups and had their on lives. There was very little angst or drama but just enough to keep me turning the pages and wondering what would happen next and how they would overcome what was standing between them. I also loved that his is a stand alone with no cliffhangers and it wrapped up with a nice epilogue. It's so nice to have a stand alone book that's not too long but packs so much chemistry with a good story and a sweet HEA.

I see good things for Ms.Louise.. she's got a winner here and I definitely look forward to more from her in the future!



ARC provided by Tia Louise for an honest review

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1,053 reviews359 followers
November 16, 2014
This is my first time reading Tia Louise, and for her debut novel, I would say kudos to a job well done! My first draw was the "mature content warning"....and I must say, well delivered girl!



Melissa is a woman seeking change, a chance to heal before returning to her messy reality some hundreds of miles away. Who knew a trip to the desert with her bestie would not only give her true pleasure but a chance for a better future.

One glance across a bar into the steel determined eyes of a stranger and the tale begins.


Derek is strong, hard and to the point...his draw toward Melissa is fast and they come together passionately with no promise made. Only when the next day arrives, neither can forget the fell, smell, or touch of one another.


But, how well can you really know someone after just a few insanely intimate moments...well, for Melissa, not that well! She may have stolen Derek's heart in the Arizona Desert, but he unknowingly broke hers! OH, The damn ANGST! Rotten bastard exes....

Thanks to Tia Louise for giving Melissa backbone...thanks for letting her thrive independently...then thanks for letting Derek's return be worthy of her.


I will say that this was a fairly quick read, and although there was not an in depth development of the main characters there was a great connection, a real likeability, and an overall enjoyable read. I also thought the head index was really good!!!!!


Profile Image for Linda ❤️ Sassy, Classy && a Little Bit of Nasty.
187 reviews167 followers
September 20, 2013
4.5 Holy Hotness Stars!

First things first....

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Bravo Tia Louise. If there's any way to debut a book, you have found the way.

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This story begins with Melissa and her best friend Elaina enjoying a relaxing vacation week at a spa in Arizona. Or at least it was supposed to be relaxing....
Melissa just needed to get away for a little bit. Her life in Baltimore was wearing on her and she needed a big change of scenery.

Cue, Derek:

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How's that for scenery?

While hanging out at the bar drinking God-knows-what, Melissa is approached by that man above, (yes, that very man.) ;) He's in upper management with a banking company and they find out that they're both in town for the week. He offers to buy her a drink that she's actually going to drink and enjoy, and well...opportune place + opportune time = opportunity.

Melissa signs on the proverbial dotted line but then the next day, she wonders how available she really is. So then it's a battle within herself to figure out what the heck she's doing with Derek and what she's going to get out of it. But it doesn't take long for her to figure it out cause it's only a week, it's not a big deal. But it is big.... The DEAL that is. ;)

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After a week of big-dealing, their time comes to an end. They go their separate ways and Melissa goes home to Baltimore.

And you are about to hate the shit out of me. Because this is the end of my review.

But there's not much else I can say without revealing the rest of the story. Let's just say that there's a character that can seriously

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and both Melissa and Derek hold secrets, that's going to test their patience and love for each other.

All in all, this was a great debut.

I did feel like this was a bit short for me though. So short that everything kind of felt rushed. I couldn't 100% connect with the characters because of it and would've liked to know a little bit more about each of the characters, backstory, etc. But what I did get to know made it that much better.

Looking forward to more books from you, Tia!

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I know a lot of you are like this:

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**ARC, courtesy of the author Tia Louise, in exchange for an honest review.**

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639 reviews4,041 followers
November 16, 2014


One To Hold is wonderful, heartwarming and incredibly steamy debut novel, that made me swoon multiply times, caused my heart to skip more than few beats and gave me amazingly realistic, yet sweet romance. Everything girl can hope and dream for in contemporary romance is easily created feeling of transformation into Cinderella ready to find her prince. And this, dear ladies, Tia Louise pictured so effortlessly, that not only I was ready to go on ball, but I was already hearing wedding bells.



Melissa Jones needs a short escape. Few days to finally relax and be able to fix broken pieces of her life. With her best friend Melissa goes to spa retreat. She hopes that this place will give her the strenght and courage she desperately needs.
When she sees handsome man observing her in the bar, Melissa is shocked to learn he chosed her from the crowd of beautiful women.

Derek is ex-marine who is attending bankers’ convention. The sight of beautiful yet sad and lonely woman drinking at the bar, lures him to her. He can’t take his eyes of this enigmatic lady. After the share the hottest stare contest, Derek decides to try his chances with her.
The most extreme sexual chemistry in the universe pulls Derek and Melissa together like magnets. In matter of few minutes they share the most sensual and erotic experience of their lifes. Quickly a one night stand is transforming into one week stand. Week filled with passion, desire, lust and finally feelings that goes deeper than sexual attraction.

Now, Derek and Melissa are fighting with time, that is quickly up, and they have to say their farewells.

”We both have lives back home," he continued, "and maybe you can't share your life right now. But I'd take your call anytime."



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One To Hold is Melissa and Derek’s story. Story of finding someone to hold on to and never let go. It’s beautiful, meaningful and extremely sexy. Tia Louise created amazing story, that hooked me and kept me guessing. I felt glued to the pages, and I immensely enjoyed every one of them.

I loved sexy times. Author easily captivated them as sensual and extremely erotic, yet still graphic and tasteful. I admired how Tia pictured change of feelings from only sex and attraction to friendship and love.



Characters were very likeable, and I couldn’t help but feel bad about Melissa’s situation. Derek is a man that falling in love with is really easy. Together they are awesome couple and I can’t picture them with anybody else. They are soul mates.

The sweetest HEA ever only made me like this book more. This novel was everything I hoped for and I can’t wait to read other books by Tia Louise.

*ARC, courtesy of the author Tia Louise, in exchange for an honest review.*

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3,024 reviews1,525 followers
July 27, 2015
4 Finding the right one Stars

This is my second Tia Louise book. One to Hold is a standalone and is part of the One to Hold series. I read book 7, One to Chase and I loved it so much I’m going back and making my way through the series. The writing style is a bit different in this one. I would say it’s a little more formal and not as laid-back like One to Chase. Regardless, both writing styles work for me. I’m not too picky, I kind of like the variety because it kind of changes things up.

This is Derek and Melissa’s story.

Melissa is going through some stuff. She goes away to get away from it all. She runs into Derek. Melissa doesn’t do one-night stands and she isn’t reckless, but Derek is so hard to resist. I got Melissa. You are in a rut and you find an attractive guy, so why not? They have hot and steamy times. The chemistry between Melissa and Derek go into insta-lust fairly quickly. I’m a fan of fast-pace novels and this didn’t bother me.

Derek is an investigator. He is in town for the week and after steamy times with Melissa, he wants more. One week more. He asks Melissa to stay with him and afterwards both go on to their separate ways. I liked that Derek pursues Melissa and I like the one-week-no-strings-attachment situation. It adds some mild tension and the beginning just grabs a hold of you.

But not everything is what it seems. The second half of the book shifts and it took me by surprised. I wasn’t sure if I was okay with this, but as I read, I learned to accept it. It added another level of issues and you feel for both parties (more on Melissa’s side).

There’s a bit of reflection on Melissa’s part and while she was going through her emotions. The book is from Melissa’s POV and I wished we got Derek’s (we get his at the epilogue). I wanted to know where he stood and how he felt. A lot is jammed into this book and props to Tia for providing me a bumpy journey.

I did the audio version. I can’t stress enough how much I love audio books. I do a lot of re-reads this way, but every once in a while I will throw in a new book I haven’t read. I like this because I never know what I get and the emotions it makes me feel. I enjoyed the audio a lot.

Audio Questions

If you could sum up One to Hold in three words, what would they be?
Short, Sweet, Steamy

What other book might you compare One to Hold to and why?
It kind of reminds me of Beloved by Corinee Michaels. Not only does it have a similar pretty cover, but it has the mid-shift-in-the-book plot with a military guy. The pace feels the same too.

What about Lucy Rivers and Christian Fox ’s performance did you like?
Lucy is a great narrator. You can tell she has done many narrations, she just seems so professional. She can voice transition well and I completely got her emotions as she read. Christian only does the epilogue and I LOVED his voice. He sounds like a twenty-something Hero (sometimes male narrators can sound really old, like in the 50’s), I wished I could have gotten more of him.

Was there a moment in the book that particularly moved you?
I really like the beginning. I found it fast-pace and really steamy. I like two strangers meeting and hooking up dynamics. It just seems very modern and easy.

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2,221 reviews909 followers
October 11, 2013
One to Hold is about a powerful, immediate attraction meant only to last one week, but ends up being so much more. There’s a little danger, mystery, and a whole lot of scorching hot scenes!

Melissa is on a last minute spa vacation with her best friend, Elaine after making a tough decision in her life. She needs the escape, and one week in Arizona de-stressing is what Elaine ordered. While sitting in the hotel bar alone the first night, Melissa captures the attention of Derek, a good looking, and imposing man. He’s taken with her, and she’s overwhelmed by her attraction to someone so unlike her usual type. They share the most passionate, desperate, and intense encounter Melissa has ever experienced. This couldn’t come at a worse time, a time when Melissa’s personal life is a mess, but Derek and Melissa’s fiery chemistry spark a surprising agreement: Enjoy each other with no strings, no questions, no explanations, and then walk away. They end up sharing more than they intended and what they didn’t plan on is the deep connection that starts to form. One thing becomes clear, one week won’t be enough.

My insides bonded to him, melted into him, wrapped around him, holding him to me. But I couldn’t name what I was feeling.

I never wanted to let him go.

Both Derek and Melissa have more going on behind the scenes, which is slowly revealed throughout the story. My heart went out to Melissa when all is revealed about her situation, but I was frightened for her as well. With Derek’s background he’s the perfect man to be in Melissa’s life, although she doesn’t quite know it at first. I just love a strong, protective male!!

I relished the sizzling chemistry shared by Melissa and Derek, and even though they get together physically fast, they slowly develop a deeper emotional connection which felt believable. I loved how their backgrounds are slowly revealed and I was eagerly clicking the pages to find out the mysteries behind them. And the epilogue was just lovely!

Tia Louise’s debut ticked all the boxes for me, and I eagerly await whatever she has in store next! One to Hold was an incredibly sensual, and yet believable romance that will leave you with a satisfied smile in the end. *sigh*

A copy was provided by the author in exchange for an honest review. Thank you!
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494 reviews268 followers
January 11, 2014

This book was wonderfully sweet and sexy because of one man -- Derek Alexander!

" Blue eyes, strikingly blue eyes. He was huge, His chest strained against the tight, black shirt he wore, and his biceps stretched the sleeves"

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And Melissa Jones,

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Melissa and her mate, Elaine is on a spa retreat when she meets Derek. The heat between is so hot and became undeniably steamy when they hooked up. Melissa decided that she could do with an one-night stand. By the end of the retreat, both of them are kinda emotional attached but they departed back home. Melissa is hiding as she has unwanted baggage.

Will they decide to follow their feelings or hide it for good?

One thing for sure, I didn't like much her so-called best mate, Elaine and at the same time, Derek and Melissa's relationship felt kinda insta love and rushed.

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For those want a steamy read, you found your book.

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WILL I RECOMMEND? Yes for Derek and streamy read.

Tia Louise has a very nice writing style, I definitely pick up her next book, hope Elaine gets better there. <3

Happy reading
xoxo
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2,323 reviews737 followers
October 8, 2013
WOW, is all I can say, if this is Tia Louise’s first foray into the erotic/romantic fiction world, I for one can’t wait to see what she has in store for us next.
This talented lady has packed a whole lotta story into such a short book. But the great thing is, it doesn’t feel rushed, the flow of the story and the character/plot development is really impressive.

The chemistry between Derek and Melissa is off the charts right from the start of the book, and I have to say the sex scenes *phew fans self*, Blew. Me. Away. They were original, tasteful, yet erotically written, and to be quite frank I am a little jealous of Melissa right now!

“My insides bonded to him, melted into him, wrapped around him, holding him to me.”

I loved the twists to the plot in One to Hold, it is not just a hot romance, Tia has added a little mystery and suspense into the mix, and it kept me guessing until the end. She, tempts and teases you with tidbits of why Melissa and Derek are both at the same Hotel/Spa at the same time as well as the secrets from their pasts as their relationship develops, and at one point my jaw literally hit the floor, after Melissa stumbles over some email evidence, this was the turning point in the book for me I could not after that put it down.

What more can I say, this is a short, sexy read. Well worth a few hours of your time, I will definitely be on the lookout for more from this imaginative and diverse author.

ARC provided by the author in exchange for the above honest review. I am a lucky, lucky girl!


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Author 128 books12.9k followers
November 17, 2013
I loved this fun read. It isn't long, yet it's a full length novel. The story starts with a HOT, STEAMY, BANG...and the steam continues, yet there is a STORY and well developed characters. That doesn't always happen. I enjoyed learning who were the good guys and who were the bad guys..things weren't always as they seemed and the story alone kept me turning the page.
The hot scenes made me turn the pages faster and faster!
I can't wait to read more of what Tia Louise writes!
This fun, steamy, hot, well developed story was definitely worth the low $2.99 price! HIGHLY RECOMMEND!!
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755 reviews113 followers
October 18, 2013
Arc generously provided by author in exchange for an honest review

Four stars for this fast past story.
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"One to Hold" is an erotic, quick read filled with hot scenes, characters with troubled pasts, and angst. We are first introduced to Melissa, a woman we quickly learn is running away from a life filled with misery. She is a broken woman, with little self-esteem and bares many painful secrets. Her refuge is found during a one week spa vacation in AZ. It is where she meets Derek, a former marine and cop, that is now a private investigator. He is tall, muscular, mysterious and sexy..... Perfect combination for a PI ;)

"Fate" has them meeting in a hotel bar, and not long after.... sparks fly, fireworks ignite and these two get busy, everywhere - public places seem to be their specialty. Takes a few nights for them to actual consider a bed as an option...As the week draws to a close, these two definitely find themselves falling and falling hard. All Mel has left are the happy memories Derek gifted her, a note and a floating heart necklace.

"What I would give you. If you hadn't already stolen it."

But, back in the real world.... Melissa must come face-to-face with her problems and trying to find a way to solve them in order to set a path to happiness. Derek is a constant thought, and Melissa cannot shake the feelings he stirred in her. But trouble seems to find Melissa, leaving behind heartache to find betrayal. The road ahead for Derek and Melissa is a bumpy one. Derek, too, has his secrets, which Melissa soon discovers and shakes her world once again.

The story is a quick read and I would have liked to have seen more time dedicated to their love story; more time for them to fall in love. There is no cliffhanger and a wonderful HEA..... but perhaps their story can continue ;)
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2,533 reviews1,286 followers
April 12, 2015
I liked this story but didn't love it, primarily because of its structure. It begins with the encounter between Melissa and Derek, before knowing anything about them. It all makes sense as you delve further into the story but it's always difficult for me when a story begins with the sex and I haven't had a chance to invest in the characters.

The entire story is told from Melissa's point of view until the epilogue and we get Derek's perspective. It was a great way to close this chapter of the trilogy. She's got a troubling backstory that also adds a layer of tension and suspense. Their romance develops strangely and quickly, ramping up to intense until it falls apart. It all culminates in a fairly exciting climax. Be prepared for a few twists and surprises about both of them.

I do plan to continue the series as I also liked the secondary characters and Melissa and Derek's story isn't totally complete (no cliffhangers!). 3.5 stars
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985 reviews139 followers
January 12, 2015
2.5 - 3 Stars

This one just didn't turn out the way I had hoped it would. For the first 30% of the book I struggled with making a connection with the two main characters Derek and Melissa.

It probably is a case of it is me and my mood rather than the book itself. Because honestly the writing was good, there were some pretty steamy sex scenes but I just found myself wanting a little bit more. I just felt things were rushed.

There was a twist I absolutely didn't expect and that made things a bit more interesting. And Derek and Melissa started to grow on me. But, I don't know, by that point it just wasn't enough to make a big difference.

On the upside, I did really enjoy the Epilogue. It was really sweet and sexy. And I love my Epilogues! :)

If your looking for a quick sexy read this is probably a good one to pick up.


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441 reviews340 followers
December 1, 2015
I am so happy that I was given this book to review because let me just tell you what a sweet little gem it is!! For a debut novel it ROCKED!! Bravo Ms. Louise – I can’t wait for more!

Melissa heads off to a spa retreat in the hopes that a week of relaxing will help her forget, if only for a little while, the nightmare that her life has become. She never expected to meet a deliciously sexy man who brings out the sex goess in her! But oh, does she ever!

Derek Alexander, ex-cop, retired Marine, all around holy shit sex-on-a-stick (sorry, I tend to get distracted where Derek is concerned) is at the same spa resort for a financial security convention. They meet one night in the bar at the resort and OMG do the sparks fly!! Lots of incredibly hot, dirty sex between these two commences. But of course Melissa believes herself to be totally unavailable and they decide to have a one-week stand.

Of course even a week, or less really, of that kind of emotionally intense connection, even if they both only want to act like it’s just sex, will obviously result in feelings. And oh yeah, there are feelings. Lots of them! Problem is they both have lives with secrets. Melissa is certain she has fallen in love with Derek, and fairly certain he feels the same, and is determined that once her drama is wrapped up she will go to him.

That is until Derek’s secret threatens to tear them apart for good!! This book was chocked full of delicious sex, a little heartache, some tears (mine included) and some drama and suspense all topped off with a beautiful HEA!! I fell in love HARD with these characters and really enjoyed the time that I got to spend with them!! I am anxiously awaiting the next installment in this series! I am hooked!

Isn’t my Derek beautiful....
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1,661 reviews377 followers
March 6, 2022
1.5 stars. I wasn’t really impressed with this one. I started out liking it, but the way that the heroine handles her divorce was absolute bs and ruined the story for me.

1. She doesn’t want any money from her husband in the divorce - literally nothing. Does that make her somehow superior for not wanting anything? Even though he made her quit her job and become a stay at home wife? I think this makes her an idiot and in NO WAY special.

2. She doesn’t report her husband for attempted rape and for beating her. She doesn’t pursue charges after he breaks into her home (post divorce) and once again attempts to rape her. She doesn’t want to “make a fuss” or some shit. But what about all his future victims??? She doesn’t even consider how he may hurt others.

3. She tells almost no one about how her husband treated her or that he repeatedly cheated on her with prostitutes. She keeps all that to herself and allows him to spread shit about her to others. She never defends herself. Why? Why? Why???!?!

I feel like even if all of this is addressed in book 3… this heroine is an idiot and nothing can redeem her bs.

Safe; heroine just filed for divorce when she meets and sleeps with the hero. hero widowed - but it’s barely mentioned. No ow drama, om drama from heroine’s ex. No cheating, no sex with om/ow.
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